AlexBailey
Kinky Tomgirl
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Today I’ve posted the first part of a story that I started more than a year ago. Parts 2-4 will be soon to follow.
I’ve learned a thing or two here, thanks to all of the denizens of the Lit forum. I’ve still got a lot of learning to do and no time or place to sit in classes. Many of you have directly answered my questions, while many more have provided help through your posts on a whole mess of other threads. I’ve laughed. I’ve cried. I’ve cringed. I’ve felt like a dumb-ass and later like a bad-ass, and landed somewhere in between.
I’ve still got issues with commas, and being way too wordy with my dialogue, and although the piece in my signature is far from perfect, I feel elated about being able to put this cathartic tale out there in a way that I can feel proud of. I’m singing, “Wonder of wonders, miracle of miracles...”
Thanks to Laurel and Literotica, and the rest of ‘ya bloody wankers!’ but thanks especially to the two fellow authors who spent hours and hours steeped in my drivel, while caring enough to be honest when I was going off the rails, or painfully abusing the English language and setting the Chicago Manual of Style ablaze. Your input is largely responsible for the stark contrast between my first and final drafts and I thank you, dearly.
If I had a million dollars I’d give you one.




Seriously, if there’s anything I can anonymously offer, let me know.
Alex ‘Bailey’
I’ve learned a thing or two here, thanks to all of the denizens of the Lit forum. I’ve still got a lot of learning to do and no time or place to sit in classes. Many of you have directly answered my questions, while many more have provided help through your posts on a whole mess of other threads. I’ve laughed. I’ve cried. I’ve cringed. I’ve felt like a dumb-ass and later like a bad-ass, and landed somewhere in between.
I’ve still got issues with commas, and being way too wordy with my dialogue, and although the piece in my signature is far from perfect, I feel elated about being able to put this cathartic tale out there in a way that I can feel proud of. I’m singing, “Wonder of wonders, miracle of miracles...”
Thanks to Laurel and Literotica, and the rest of ‘ya bloody wankers!’ but thanks especially to the two fellow authors who spent hours and hours steeped in my drivel, while caring enough to be honest when I was going off the rails, or painfully abusing the English language and setting the Chicago Manual of Style ablaze. Your input is largely responsible for the stark contrast between my first and final drafts and I thank you, dearly.
If I had a million dollars I’d give you one.





Seriously, if there’s anything I can anonymously offer, let me know.
Alex ‘Bailey’
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