Thank you Lady Phoenix!

[mistyfox]

Do you know that this is the very first REAL, HONEST feedback I;ve gotten on this story. THANK YOU!!!!! I'd say I Love you, but, well, that'd be tacky.
I know I have problems jumping tense, that has always been an issue with me. One of the main reasons I've posted on here is because anyone I've ever given the story to has only offered the following feedback..."Made me horny."
Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments. I will review them one at a time and make changes. Not sure what to do with the story once it's polished, but it will be quite a piece when it's done.
Have I said "Thank you?"
Misty

 

[ladyphoenix]

To be showered with thanks...

Misty,
If there's one thing I do not do when critiquing, it's lie. It's the therapist in me. You deserve every word.
And did I mention that I volunteered myself as an editor for those who are interested? I offered myself to the gods of Lit last year but they never put me on the Volunteer Editor list....however, I am available by appointment. You can email me at ladyphoenix@literotica.org if you're interested and I'm not being too pushy.