Thank You For The Feedback!

[Bob Peale]

Recently I posted a story titled Auto-Erotic ( http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20541 ) that represented a departure from my traditional style of writing.

To date, all of the feedback has been tremendous (both Anonymous as well as Acknowledged).

I believe that I've written everyone that included an email address, but I'd like to take this opportunity to say thank you to EVERYONE that took the time to read the story and send comments.

 

[Barbara]

What a body? WOW!

You are far too young to remember Bob, but my husband used to look like the picture you posted. Mmmmmmmmmm. I digress.
Back in the Sixties we used to buy "Playboy"
We used to laugh at the catoon pictures of Naked Granny and hubby used to laugh the most. Now he lives with her! Poetic Justice in action but nowhere near often enough. They tell me that Viagra is cheap in the states. Darned stuff is twenty dollars a pill over here in New Zealand. As impoverished elderly people. may I ask how much it is in the States? I may fly over there with three empty suitcases and visit Laurel.
I posted another thread by mistake this morning but I'll say it again. Elderly people need you to contribute a lot more often young man. Oh! And by the way. Very inportant advice from an old lady, my son. Never NEVER laugh at pictures of old naked ladies. Remember my husband? He never even smiles anymore.
I get my jollys from writing 'Erotic Aventures' nowadays.
Valuable Advice? Worth heaps?
Nuff Said. Payment in Viagra Pleeese?
And by the way-------GREAT Story you wrote. There is a queue at the rest home computer, getting longer every day.
Barbara Anne Adams. G.S.K. From N.Z. Fellow Author.

"Every benefit to mankind originated in sombody's fantasy world at some point in time" Mistress Barbara. 2001

 

[Laurel]

Barbara, you are sexier than all the 18-year-old babes in the world piled on top of one another.

 

[Guest]

Barbara from NZ.

Dear Laurel: I read your reply to Barbara who has written all those wonderful stories on Literotica. You say that she is very sexy. Do you have her picture? I would love to see it to have something to go along with the stories when I read them. Thanks! John volvosu@hotmail.com

 

[Barbara]

Great Idea!!!

Great Idea, John.

 

[Debbie]

I really enjoyed your story!
keep up the good work!
It can be "hard" work departing from one's usual style or "tyoe" of stories
i know because I did it recently
So I say bravo for expanding your horizons!

 

[Barbara]

Don't keep us waiting--Pleeese?

Bob, my darling. Time for another exciting chapter of Auto Erotic, My dear young man. All us oldies at the rest home are lining up at the computer EVERY day, Tuning into Literotica and eagerly looking for Ch. Two. Now Bob! Play the game here. Some of us haven't got THAT much time left. I don't want to put too fine a point on it, BUT. Has your house ever been haunted YET???
Some of the older residents are getting pissed off. One old girl, with only weeks to live, has confided in me. What she told me was highly confidential BUT if I were you, I WOULD START WRITING IMMEDIATELY. Get my drift young feller!

Barbara Anne Adams. N.Z.G.S.K.
P.S. For the record, I TRIED to talk her out of it.


" EVERY BENEFIT TO MANKIND HAD IT'S ORIGIN IN SOMEBODY'S FANTASY WORLD AT SOME POINT IN TIME." Quote By. Barbara Anne Adams N.Z.G.S.K.

 

[cyndiesweet]

Bob Peale

Wow. Bob you might want to get writing before the old lady really does kick the bucket . We have a resident ghost in our house but he just makes noise and occasionally breaks stuff. Sounds like this lady has a little more in mind.
P.S. Fabulous photo whether it is you or not!

 

[Bob Peale]

LOL!

I will see what I can do. Unfortunately, another twisted storyline grabbed hold of my feeble imagination, and its hard to concentrate on anything else until I get it out.

 

[*bratcat*]

those twists...

 

[Enchanttress]

Bob Peale

I agree totally with all the others.

1st point-WOW what a body!

2nd point-Agreed, Excellent Story-Auto Erotic... hehe

3rd point-Barbara dear, is there room for another old lady in your rest home? I may need a rest after reading yours and all the other stories here! WHEW!

Thank you all for sharing such excellent work. I am in total awe of each of you.

Enchanttress AKA Lil

 

[Guest]

Hey Barbara..........!

Just wanted you to know you have a new member that's just been added to your fanclub............


Sweet dreams kiddo............


May I come and see you in one some evening.

To sleep........perchance to dream - William Shakespear

 

[Hullo_nurse]

Great story

Hey Sandman-- looks like I just might be stalk.... um, following you!!

Bob-- Excellent story! Loved it. Very in tune to the sexual needs, wants, desires, thoughts, feelings of this dear fellow in the story. Loved it!!

Kisses--

Nursie

 

[Barbara]

Warning unheeded by poor Bob. Ahh, such a shame!

Oh Bob! I did try to warn you, my love. We all tried to keep her alive, for your sake as much as her's. Was it painful, my love?
Most men have it done when they are only babies. I guess you'll be 'out of action' for a little while, won't you? No more excuses now! There is another old girl that is looking forward to Ch. 2 of Auto Erotic. She too, has some skills with a kitchen knife.
In her youth, she lived in one of those countries where eunochs are quite commonplace. Oh dear, I can't bear to think about it.
Bob, for God's sake start WRITING! It can't be that hard to satisfy her curiosity. They are only SHORT stories after all. It has to be better than suffering yet another shortage in the area that your photo fails to reveal. Hint Hint!!

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DEBBIEXXX: Please help us get though to young Bob, before it is too late. Judging by your profile picture, you would make a handsome couple. Circumcision is not too bad! Perhaps you could help him write chapter 2 of Auto Erotic. Maybe play the part of his mystery admirer.

CYNDIESWEET: Isn't it a shame young Bob didn't heed our warnings last time, before it was too late.

*BRATCAT*: That ride, you speak of, might be a while cumming if young Bob takes no notice of us this time.

ENCHANTTRESS: With the older residents dying off so regularly, there will always be room for a Cajun Princess. For young Bob's sake, please tell me if you 'Cajun people' have any barbaric customs, hidden in your distant past. I've heard that the Injuns used to scalp young paleface men. I thing young Bob might have suffered enough by the time you get ready to leave us. He's far too young and good looking to be scalped at both ends of his magnificent young body. Don't you agree?

THESANDMAN4YOU: When you see my image in my updated profile,shortly, you may wish you hadn't been so willing to come and visit me one night. I don't wish to discourage you, my pet!
Just keep reading my stories and voting 5s. Mistress will know if you don't. Remember Bob and what happened to him when he took no notice of Mistress Barbara?

HELLONURSE: For gawd's sake, help us to get through to young Bob. It would be such a shame if he forgot to write Ch. 2 of Auto Erotic again. He might have different needs by the time you get a turn with him. At least you are in the Write profession to care for him, by the sound of it.

Bob Peale: I repeat; "Start writing, while you are recovering and still able to focus." Forget about other minor considerations in your life, like making money and advancing your career. Don't mess with the unknown forces of darkness. Mistress still loves you.
Mistress Barbara. N.Z.G.S.K.



" EVERY BENEFIT TO MANKIND HAD IT'S ORIGIN IN SOMEBODY'S FANTASY WORLD AT SOME POINT IN TIME."

 

[Guest]

Ahhhhh but Barbara............

Do you not yet know that not only can Thesandman come to you in any form he wishes, but while you are in "his" world....you can be anything you wish to be as well?

Something like writing on Literotica@?

To sleep......perchance to dream - William Shakspear

I am............

 

[cyndiesweet]

Mmm... Lovely thoughts.

 

[Enchanttress]

Cajun Voodoo??

Oh My Dear Barbara...

I think I shall dig into my cajun voodoo bag. Maybe find, a potion or two for our young, handsome Bob here. Sprinkle some sort of sweet mystical conCOCKtion, upon our sexy Bob here, making him ready for a new auto-erotic story.. hehe!

Bob, my dear.. please another wonderful story, quick before we lose yet another!

 

[ladyalchemy]

ouch! I am hooked. Bob, please more?