Texts to My Love series

Xehsu

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I would like to get some C&C on the series that I am currently posting (and will be for awhile). Each one is an edited transcription of stories I send my fiancee via SMS, so there is some repetition that's intentional.

I'm primarily looking for advice regarding structure and word choice to enhance the descriptions I use.

I think the best example of what's currently posted would be Boutique Love.
 
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