Tentacles are Up !!

[Wills]

First story posted.

Small problem with Post, 2POV story, some of the Italics did not post correctly, I've PM'd Laurel to ask for a correction.

Particulary Para's 2 thro 8 should be read as the 2nd POV, thereafter you will deal with other minor Italic glitches as the language of the 2POV's is quite different.

I wrote this story following the discussion on the Incest Thread - could I write about incest? Between people no, but between Aliens I found I could do it.

I am indebted to Dr. M for taking the trouble to remove my superfluous twaddle and making it readable.


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http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=116799

 

[wornoutkeyboard]

I enjoy superfluous twaddle.

Too bad you have seen fit to remove it.

~WOK


PS~I'll read your story later tonight and give ya a little feedback.

 

[gauchecritic]

Superfluous twaddle is something I excell in. I use sex scenes to fill in between sex scenes. If the guy rolls out of bed to get a condom from the bedside draw, I put in a flashback sex scene where he remembers the last time he did that.

Gauche

 

[Guest]

And I love being the recipient of superfluous twaddle, beats coming up with it myself.

Perdita

 

[Wills]

If I had to put condoms on each of the tentacles it would have been a novel not a short story - hey it could of gone for N....

Will's

 

[wornoutkeyboard]

Superfluous twaddle is something I excell in. I use sex scenes to fill in between sex scenes. If the guy rolls out of bed to get a condom from the bedside draw, I put in a flashback sex scene where he remembers the last time he did that.

Gauche

Now THAT sounds like an excellent piece of literature. Please let me know when it becomes available in softback.

~WOK

 

[otherdarkmeat]

Small problem with Post, 2POV story, some of the Italics did not post correctly, I've PM'd Lauren to ask for a correction.

Should I wait for the corrections, or do you feel comfortable with people reading it as is? I'm chomping at the bit because I've been curious about the story since you first mentioned it.

-Mike B.

 

[Wills]

Mike,

Please wait, Laurel has had the corrected file for two days, I had assumed the corrected file would have been the one posted, maybe they just hit the wrong key.

If your really desperate I'll mail it to you, its less than 2 Lit. pages.

Will's

 

[Wills]

My first story is now correctly posted, go have a read.

Will's


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=116799