Tentacle erotic horror idea

Texguy84

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So, a title popped into my head: "Popping Her Cherry", which immediately led to a somewhat morbid idea for an erotic horror idea.

So, you have this girl, nicknamed "Cherry" for whatever reason. For purposes of plot, she's a virgin (ie: hasn't had her cherry popped).

The story would basically involve Cherry being accosted by a tentacle monster, brought to a high state of arousal (via physical teasing and biological horny-inducing chemicals and such), then fucked in every orifice by increasing numbers of tentacles until she explodes (ie: Cherry gets popped).

This is probably indicative of me watching too much Legend of the Overfiend. Thoughts anyone?
 
Hallowed Eve said:
You sick little monkey! Me likes. :D

Gave some more thought to this while I was shelving books (yeah, my job in the library just leaves me open to all sorts of deranged perversity), and I was thinking, yaknow, why not give the tentacle monster some motive beyond just general pervy evilness to go around fucking girls to death?

I figure, the tentacle fucking is a mechanism by which to inject the girl full of digestive enzymes. As a means of making this easier (ie: not so much wriggling around and fighting against it on the part of the food), the enzymes themselves have massive feel-good properties generally leaving the victim euphoric and aroused; the more enzymes, the happier and hornier they get.

The tentacles are of course oozing the stuff as they fuck the girl in every orifice, driving her mad with pleasure even as she is frightened out of her mind. The enzymes weaken the linings of her inner passages even as the tentacles bring their buddies to bang the bitch. Then the monster comes, pumping massive amounts of the enzymes into the girl, bursting her inner passages and filling her body with the enzymes, which quickly dissolve her from the inside out in one orgasmic flood.

The internal pressure of the combined mess of the enzymes and what was the inside of her body cause her skin to swell up before she pops, and then the tentacles suck up the mess to feed. :devil:
 
Now that's hot hon! :)

The women are food for the monster, and while scared (and probably in pain from litterally being eaten from the inside out) they can't help but be aroused because of the pheromones secreted from him. :D
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Now that's hot hon! :)

The women are food for the monster, and while scared (and probably in pain from litterally being eaten from the inside out) they can't help but be aroused because of the pheromones secreted from him. :D

Yep, and because they're horny, they get all juiced up, making it only easier for more tentacles to squeeze inside of them with more of their horniness-inducing digestive chemicals. :devil:

Generally speaking, I love tentacle porn, because it's the ultimate example of a girl being powerless to resist, no matter how well she can fight off one or two tentacles, the other 20 *will* have their way with her. :D
 
Texguy84 said:
Generally speaking, I love tentacle porn, because it's the ultimate example of a girl being powerless to resist, no matter how well she can fight off one or two tentacles, the other 20 *will* have their way with her. :D

:cool:
 
Hallowed Eve said:

What can I say? For the most part, in real life I'm drawn to strong, self-sufficient women. In the dark perverted corners of my mind, I like to see women helpless. I'm a complicated man. :D
 
Texguy84 said:
What can I say? For the most part, in real life I'm drawn to strong, self-sufficient women. In the dark perverted corners of my mind, I like to see women helpless. I'm a complicated man. :D

That's a good thing, though. ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
That's a good thing, though. ;)

Which part? The favoring strong women, fantasizing about helpless women, or being a complicated man? :D

And is anyone ELSE reading this thread other than you and me? :rolleyes:
 
Read..

You are a sick fucker. *grin*

So now I know what the monsters get out of it!

Sick, sick, sick.

But I'm...aroused?
 
Texguy84 said:
Which part? The favoring strong women, fantasizing about helpless women, or being a complicated man? :D

And is anyone ELSE reading this thread other than you and me? :rolleyes:

Well, favoring strong women but fantasizing about helpless women does make you complicated. And that's a cool thing. ;)

Not sure. I keep hearing an echo after we post. :eek:
 
Well, story's finished, just need to get someone to look at it and help me touch it up a bit before I submit.
 
I love tenticle stories and the whole monsters ravishing women thing, am a fan of Urotsukidoji too!!!! But I find alot of writers tend to put an emphasis on the animal instict factor. As in they are having sex to procreate, or to feed or some other baser instinct. I prefer the demon/monster to be having sex because it likes to, or because it can, a more intelligent creature.
I have always dreamed that someone would creat a westernised Overfiend remake, story form would be a dream, but a comicbook/manga reconstruction would be heavenly.
 
tentacles

Sounds like a awesome idea. This is my suggestion though. The tentacles are basically long dicks that can move around like tentacles. Each of them can cum and basically the Cherry gets her cherry popped by a tentacle dick monster. How does that sound?
 
psion128 said:
Sounds like a awesome idea. This is my suggestion though. The tentacles are basically long dicks that can move around like tentacles. Each of them can cum and basically the Cherry gets her cherry popped by a tentacle dick monster. How does that sound?

Wait... a tentacle monster that uses it's tentacles as penises? And fucks a girl with them? I dunno. That sounds like a bit of a stretch. :rolleyes:
 
Texguy84 said:
So, a title popped into my head: "Popping Her Cherry", which immediately led to a somewhat morbid idea for an erotic horror idea.

So, you have this girl, nicknamed "Cherry" for whatever reason. For purposes of plot, she's a virgin (ie: hasn't had her cherry popped).

The story would basically involve Cherry being accosted by a tentacle monster, brought to a high state of arousal (via physical teasing and biological horny-inducing chemicals and such), then fucked in every orifice by increasing numbers of tentacles until she explodes (ie: Cherry gets popped).

This is probably indicative of me watching too much Legend of the Overfiend. Thoughts anyone?

That is the coolest film idea I have heard in a long time! I wish that was a movie! That could start the next string of cool B movies along the lines of Toxic Avenger and Evil Dead!
 
The whole tentacle thing is something I like and will write some time in the future. But my preference is not to have the monster/demon eat the poor woman. I like to see them used to please their sexual appetites. Anyways, that is my 2 cents. And everyone has their own preferences on what they would like to see in a story.
 
Hey, Texboy, did you ever add a little more to the tale or submit it as is? I remember getting the sneak preview and after you got me horny you left me wanting more. ;)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Hey, Texboy, did you ever add a little more to the tale or submit it as is? I remember getting the sneak preview and after you got me horny you left me wanting more. ;)

I ended up submitting it to Storiesonline. I will probably write a more fun-and-games style tentacle story in the near future though.
 
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