TEACHING PATTI

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Wow. I haven't received this much e-mail about "Patti" since it was first put on the site (what was it, almost a YEAR ago?). I guess it's because of the whole voting thing.
Well, just wanted to say thanks to all. Very nice comments. Many people have asked for a sequel, though I don't know how that would work.

Anyhoo--you all rule. Thanks!

 

[Havocman]

On the contrary DCL, you're the one that rules..."Patti" was my first introduction to Literotica, and you had me hooked from the beginning...

Havoc

 

[Tiggy]

i just finished reading "patti" for the first time, and it was one of the most amazing stories i have read here.. wonderful job DCL

 

[Wordmage]

I stumbled across your story and I was hooked. When I was in college, I was asked by my old high school drama coach to do the role of Jesus since they couuldn't find anyone to sing the role. Reading "Patti" was like you crawled in my head and pulled out one of my fondly remembered fantasies of those days. I found a few technical problems with the story that were easily overcome by the careful crafting of the plot. I loved the ring of truth to it, especially the ending. "Patti" was one of the hottest stories I can remember reading.

 

[HSWriter]

Well DCL, I can't say that I was ever involved in high school drama classes or anything, but I can definetly say that when I first came to Literotica (Way back when), the "Patti" series kept me here and inspired me to get some of my work posted.

Thanks
HSWriter

 

[Whispersecret]

Dixon, I hope that my fan mail got through to you. I got some weird computer message telling me I was missing some file thingamajig, so I don't know if it ever got through.

I humbly ask - no, BEG for more stories. Are you working on anything? Can you give your fans some inkling on when we can expect more from you?

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Wow right back at you Moose -- and thanks for the E.T. reference, that made my day.

Whisper I never did get that, sorry, but thatnks.

 

[Moose_Vamoose]

To Dixon Carter Lee....

WOW. I've just read the whole of the Teaching Patti series and let me say, that is a work of art, your piece de resistance (I have no idea what that means but it's usually used in this sort of context) if I may be so bold. What got me so worked up about this series was that I actually invested emotionally into the characters. You are so terrific at balancing the erotica and the story development!! You use the non-sexual narrative and especially the non-sexual dialogue (which is realistic, witty and just all-around plausible) to heighten the erotic elements. And... I cannot really figure out why.. but the ending..... I consider myself a red-blooded Aussie male (to a certain extent) but can I say congratulations! Yours was the first erotic story ever to make me actually cry when the protagonists said their farewells!! I'm serious! Not wanting to be too explicit but by the end of my reading of it my original less than noble motivation was replaced by the sense of emotional investment I can't help but feel everytime I see the end of the movie 'E.T.'!! Thankyou so much for that series DCL. Well done. Very well done.

 

[Kc]

It is one of the best erotica I have read. Very good in both sexual part and the story line; and the characters are well written and believable too. It also has the very best ending among all the erotica I have ever read; that butterfly almost burst out of my stomach when I finish the story; and I dare not to read it again.

 

[Gil]

Hi DCL,

First and foremost, I fully concur with all the enthusiasm of your fans above. Terrific writing and very erotic! Part III is my favorite, absolutely incredible.

Second, I actually registered with Literotica just to make absolutely sure my vote for best story/author counted. Yes, I voted for you and 'Teaching Patti'.

Third, I thought 'Jazzy Girl' was equally well done and enjoyed it thoroughly. However, the theme of 'Patti' had a slightly greater appeal to the prurient side of my nature.

Fourth, when the heck may we expect more of the same?

Best wishes and keep writing. Gil

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hi Dix, I must have my say of course, so here goe's. One quiet afternoon, I copied and pasted your whole Patti Series into word document and read the whole damn thing. I could not stop once I started. It was fabulous hon. I found myself wondering about their ages, but other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Every chapter was written incredibly well. Your sexual scenes were very hot, and I loved the explicit detail. I also liked getting to know Mark and Patti, you made them so very real. Your ending was fantastic too. I especially liked it when Mark found Patti's photo beside his...Nice touch that was. I honestly hated to see it end. I too, felt saddened to say goodbye to your characters. Keep up the great work Dixion, I know I will enjoy your story again and again. Now, I am intrigued to read the rest of your work. Your writing is an amazing work of art. You get my vote on this one, most definately! Thanks for sharing. Katerina

[This message has been edited by katerina (edited 03-29-2000).]

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Don't you just love getting posts like this? Thank you so very, very much.

Others have asked me if I'm going to submit any more stories, and, honestly, I don't know. My legit writing has been keeping me busy, and every time I start on an erotic story I feel guilty that I'm not using what precious writing time I have to be more productive.

I did find, though, that writing erotica is a great way to flex my writing muscles, and get me out of the infrequent writer's block. So, hopefully I'll get "blocked" again really soon and write something else for the site.

 

[Whispersecret]

Tease. <winks>

 

[Svedish_Chef]

DCL you know better and I had to bring it up again... emotional content is always better. Between Patti + Jazzy girl you have it wrapped up and when you write a book tell us where to buy it

 

[Jade]

I SO totally wish I could EVER have even come close to a guy like that!!!!
Holy cow!!!

I have just spent over an hour and a half reading that whole story (when I have two finals in a matter of hours!!) and I am not regretting a single minute... neither is my body... but that was probably a little too much information huh?

eh hem, anyway, wow, that guy can write, and if he is even a little bit close in real life as skilled as his character was.... he must have one hell of a happy wife!!

that is all I have to say about that!

~Jade

 

[Svedish_Chef]

Jade, no that you are relaxed hope you do well on your finals! Either way I think it was time well spent