Teaching Patti by Dixon Carter Lee

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[Mustang Sally]

I read this one awhile ago and enjoyed it greatly. Extremely well written. But it kind of lost me at the end when it turns into a cliched male fantasy. The story seems quite plausible and realistic, and that was definitely part of its appeal for me, until Patti brings all her friends into it. That part just doesn't seem to fit the rest of the story. Kinda off the deep end. But otherwise excellent!

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

What are you talking about? That totally happened to me! LOL

 

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[Dixon Carter Lee]

Yes, but you have to realize that when I wrote it Literotica had maybe a few dozen stories, and I had never written erotica before. I had no idea if it was good, twisted, or what...THough I did have an idea that it was too tame. I mean, here I was throwing in all this plot and character and fancy-schmancy prose, and by chapter six I still only had two people making love, and mostly simple sex, as opposed to every aunt and cousin and next door neighbor getting nooky in every nooky and cranny. I had no anal sex (not really), not animals, no relatives, no vegetables, no rape scenes -- I was nervous that the story wouldn't go over because I'd been too, er, "real".

So, I thought, "Hell, let's go out with a bang." And I have to say, despite the improbability of that last scene, it is intensely tame compared to the rest of the eoritca world. It's pure fantasy, of course, and I did my best to tie it into the whole story, but, if it seems out of place remember that I was, hey, trying to please everybody. I was writing a story that turned me on, but I wasn't sure about anyone else. So I went a bit for the cliche.

Hey, just be glad I didn't turn them into alien teenage girls who were all doms.

Now, over a year later, and more stories under my belt, and with a certain perspective, I can see that I probably didn't need that last scene. The teen girl round up is still a good fantasy, though, and perhaps deserved its own story, but I think I could have wrapped up Mark and Patti's story without them.

By the way, I can't tell you the number of times I've been tempted to track down the real Patti and tell her about my little story, and how many people like it. Maybe I will one day.

 

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[Dixon Carter Lee]

Yes, and I really don't write that much erotica. I like it (of course), and I find it to be a good way to keep my skills honed, but I really spend my time on other projects like plays and screenplays.

Of course, look out for "Teaching Patti" the movie, with George Clooney as Mark, and the Olsen Twins as Patti and every girl on the WB line-up for the teenage orgy scene.

 

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Dixon Carter Lee

Im about to read Patti - CB - go read Jazzy Girl- I read it very early on here and this guy can WRITE!

 

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DCL

homework? why? what's that? Just write a book report on Patti (BTW Im now on Chapter VII)

 

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[Mustang Sally]

Yes, but you have to realize that when I wrote it Literotica had maybe a few dozen stories, and I had never written erotica before.

Well.... ok, I guess I can forgive you.
All this talk made me go read Jazzy Girl, and it seems you have those problems worked out quite nicely. More kudos to feed your ego! hehe

 

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Jazzy girl

Glad I suggested it - i just happened to stumble across it long before I found this part of Literotica andf before I realized how talented DCL is

 

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