Teacher's Pet series

[Sunnie]

Okay, since I've gotten virtually no help (or hindrance, on the bright side) from the Feedback forum, I thought perhaps I'd try to post in this forum, to see if I got any more response...

I need some help, some suggestions perhaps, on the Teacher's Pet series I'm working on. The 4th and latest chapter is linked in my sig. The situation right now is, Ben and his wife will eventually break up. I think I might have an idea of HOW they will break up, but I could use some suggestions. Does she find out about his affair with Grace? Does their marriage simply crumble because of its current state, with no repercussions on Ben's relationship with Grace?

You'd probably have to read the whole series to get the effect of the marriage between Ben and his wife, but it's most clearly illustrated so far in the 4th chapter.

Other questions, Should I bring in more characters (roommates, classmates, other faculty members), increase the risk of Grace and Ben getting caught, etc?

Any suggestions will be appreciated. Thanks !!

 

[Pure]

Hi Sunnie,
It's a give as well as 'get' situation around here, with respect to feedback and criticism. It's swapped.

If you want 'no strings' 'free' feedback, you can try Author's or Feedback or even GB. If you begin to take part-- help others-- your name would soon come up, if that 'circle' or 'swap' idea appeals to you.

Best,
J.

 

[Sunnie]

Thanks Pure.