I was thinking that an interesting idea for a story might be a gorgeous woman who is making her way through life on the support payments from all the wealthy men she has tempted and tricked into fathering her children. I can imagine her walking up to the house of one of the men who is late on his payments--who is a family man whose affair has put a tremendous strain on his marriage. She'd be wearing a sexy skirt, showing some thigh and tremendous cleavage--perhaps she'd be breastfeeding their child as his wife answers the door in horror. As he tries to explain why the payment is late she'll make subtle cutting innuendos about their night together, commenting on the looks and skills she has..maybe repeating some line that the husband said while he was cumming about her being better than his wife. Heavy on the humiliation.
Taunting, Beautiful Babymaking Bitch Story
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NASCARaddicted
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interesting
what about this: she had sexual affairs with about 10 guys at the same time.
Then, 1 year later, she returns with a small baby. She tells everyone of this guys that he is the father. Now she needs money, otherwise, she would tell the wife about the affair ....
This happened some time ago, when something like a DNA test or a blood test was unknown. And since everyone believes her, they all pay.
In the end, it's revealed, that the baby is not her own ... it's the one from her sister ... she just used it to get all the money ....
what about this: she had sexual affairs with about 10 guys at the same time.
Then, 1 year later, she returns with a small baby. She tells everyone of this guys that he is the father. Now she needs money, otherwise, she would tell the wife about the affair ....
This happened some time ago, when something like a DNA test or a blood test was unknown. And since everyone believes her, they all pay.
In the end, it's revealed, that the baby is not her own ... it's the one from her sister ... she just used it to get all the money ....
flawed_ethics
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I second NASCAR's twist. The nasty edge to the woman's plot would make the conclusion all the better.
Flow appears somewhat suspect though. If done chronologically, All the sex would head up the story. Nothing wrong hitting the ground running - but the end of the story would be lacking the erotic aspects.
One alternative I see is beginning the story with her wrapping up her conversation with one of the maried men. He's willing to pay. With that end is tied, she puts her baby in a stroller and starts walking. As she's going along, she thinks of her night with the aforementioned man - the fun they had (it could be a gangbang to include more of the 10 men - she played it that her memory recalled only him cumming in her), and how he has/hasn't two years later.
Her thoughts trail to another man she spent another exhilarating night with. The things they did and how her body felt when they climaxed. Ideas pop-up in her head as she contemplates another night of those activities. Just then she arrives at the next man's house - pulling the same schpeel. So ends the story
Okay - so I think the subtle aspect of her motives makes for a better story. The idea is still very intriguing though. I'd be interested to hear of other people's inputs.
Flow appears somewhat suspect though. If done chronologically, All the sex would head up the story. Nothing wrong hitting the ground running - but the end of the story would be lacking the erotic aspects.
One alternative I see is beginning the story with her wrapping up her conversation with one of the maried men. He's willing to pay. With that end is tied, she puts her baby in a stroller and starts walking. As she's going along, she thinks of her night with the aforementioned man - the fun they had (it could be a gangbang to include more of the 10 men - she played it that her memory recalled only him cumming in her), and how he has/hasn't two years later.
Her thoughts trail to another man she spent another exhilarating night with. The things they did and how her body felt when they climaxed. Ideas pop-up in her head as she contemplates another night of those activities. Just then she arrives at the next man's house - pulling the same schpeel. So ends the story
Okay - so I think the subtle aspect of her motives makes for a better story. The idea is still very intriguing though. I'd be interested to hear of other people's inputs.
