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[Lost_Yonder]

must intriguing story! as for getting from friday morning to the unveiling - you just did! If the story is written from the voice of the husband, then Friday evening is an unknown - he has to live with the discovery without fully knowing - unless the wife chooses to tell him. then what happens Friday evening is told in her voice, as the husband sits there looking at the cum dripping from her pussy with the biggest hardon of his life...

What I feel is missing is the movement of the wife from being religiously conservative and sexually naive to an openly "wanton" slut. That's a radical personal transformation that had to come about by more than just "talk" with a few work colleagues. Did she go out for happy hour evening with them and then watched one of them fuck a stranger with a huge cock? did her boss hit on her and forced her into sex, opening her up?

 

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[cara2272]

And that's where I'm looking for help. Things were obviously changing somewhat - the desire for a tattoo, the nights out with people from work - but, what brought on the radical change. What could cause her to come home with "that tattoo", and the well used pussy?

Anger, or resentment. Showing her husband something like that on purpose can only have so many MEANings. Either he'd let her down badly - failed to meet her expectations in bed maybe, as women tend to expect their husbands to be the active, less conservative party; or she might have discovered he'd cheated on her - or she's sadistic beyond measure.

I agree, this plot could make a most intruguing story, if you can pull it off convincingly. Obviously, the relationship between the two would have to be developed in more detail, and you'd have to give the readers a few discreete clues that there's more behind the conservative facade than one - even one close to her - might expect, or no one is going to believe that tatoo. It's ugly, to begin with

 

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[Carnevil9]

I think the "middle" that you are looking for could be a series of fights between the husband and wife. Each time they argue, he gets more and more adamant and provides more and more reasons why she should not get the tat. And each time they fight, she re-interprets his arguments to be reasons why she should.

Of course, arguments are not very titillating on their own, so you might want to have them arguing while they are screwing. That would hold my attention much better, personally.

Good luck!......Carney

 

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