MBS1969
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OOC - Dave Lear, 32, Short but well built, jet black hair, brown eyes.
IC -
3.30am, the clock on my dashboard shone out at me, reminding me what a stupid hour this was to finish work. The club had been packed tonight and I was tired and grumpy. My hand ached from the punches I had thrown whilst breaking up the brawl which always seemed to happen in the club where I worked. I really needed to get a new job, this life wasn't doing me any good.
I looked in the mirror to where she was sleeping, or rather where she had passed out to be truthful. Normally I'd have just chucked her out of the door at closing time and left her there, but tonight I was under orders. The boss knew her, had fucked her at one time or other and felt a prick of conscience in his tiny mind, and asked me to drive her home.
Looking at her through the mirror she looked in a shocking state, had probably been drinking cocktails for hours before throwing up on the dance floor. Her make up was all over her face and she had been crying as all women seem to do when hopelessly drunk. She probably would be quite good looking if she hadn't let herself get so out of control.
"Just take her home, push her through her door and you'll be away" I said to myself quietly, hoping she didn't live up multiple flights of stairs. I pulled up outside the address on her business card and hopped out of the car. Opening the back door I shook her on the shoulder.
"Come on darlin', time to go home, sleep it off, you'll be alright tomorrow."
She wouldn't of course, she would have the most horrendous hangover and her knee would be throbbing from the tumble she had taken when running for the loo to be sick. She stirred slightly and I pulled her, not too gently, from my car thanking heaven she hadn't had a repeat vomitting performance in my car.
So there I stood 3.45am, with a girl draped on my arm and her handbag in my free hand searching for her keys and trying to make out where her front door was.
OC - Looking for a co-writer here with ideas to carry this along, I don't care where it goes and am open to (almost) anything. Maybe she can blackmail me into staying with her, maybe there's a nasty surprise for one of us in her home or whatever you want. No need to PM, just feel free to make you first post with character description first.
PS - The one thing I do ask is that you are serious about writing and want to make this thread last, if you think you might get bored with a proper story then leave this for someone else, Ta

IC -
3.30am, the clock on my dashboard shone out at me, reminding me what a stupid hour this was to finish work. The club had been packed tonight and I was tired and grumpy. My hand ached from the punches I had thrown whilst breaking up the brawl which always seemed to happen in the club where I worked. I really needed to get a new job, this life wasn't doing me any good.
I looked in the mirror to where she was sleeping, or rather where she had passed out to be truthful. Normally I'd have just chucked her out of the door at closing time and left her there, but tonight I was under orders. The boss knew her, had fucked her at one time or other and felt a prick of conscience in his tiny mind, and asked me to drive her home.
Looking at her through the mirror she looked in a shocking state, had probably been drinking cocktails for hours before throwing up on the dance floor. Her make up was all over her face and she had been crying as all women seem to do when hopelessly drunk. She probably would be quite good looking if she hadn't let herself get so out of control.
"Just take her home, push her through her door and you'll be away" I said to myself quietly, hoping she didn't live up multiple flights of stairs. I pulled up outside the address on her business card and hopped out of the car. Opening the back door I shook her on the shoulder.
"Come on darlin', time to go home, sleep it off, you'll be alright tomorrow."
She wouldn't of course, she would have the most horrendous hangover and her knee would be throbbing from the tumble she had taken when running for the loo to be sick. She stirred slightly and I pulled her, not too gently, from my car thanking heaven she hadn't had a repeat vomitting performance in my car.
So there I stood 3.45am, with a girl draped on my arm and her handbag in my free hand searching for her keys and trying to make out where her front door was.
OC - Looking for a co-writer here with ideas to carry this along, I don't care where it goes and am open to (almost) anything. Maybe she can blackmail me into staying with her, maybe there's a nasty surprise for one of us in her home or whatever you want. No need to PM, just feel free to make you first post with character description first.
PS - The one thing I do ask is that you are serious about writing and want to make this thread last, if you think you might get bored with a proper story then leave this for someone else, Ta
