Taking feedback. Editor needed

[luckyLove]

I could use an editor and I haven't had one before.

It's a brother sister incest story. References to semen, some teasing, but fairly vanilla. Under 2000 words.

 

[Todger65]

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[luckyLove]

Done. Thank you for letting me know Todger!

 

[Voicee]

Editing

I would like to edit your story. PM me

 

[Voicee]

Editing

But I check plot only.

 

[Lit_Zombie]

2000 words? I'll help with some spelling and other minor stuff.

 

[luckyLove]

I'm all set, thank you everyone for your help!