Taken!

[Raymond]

a wonderful rape fantasy, especially the ending. keep up the good work

 

[English Bob]

Agree with Raymond - but would be better if it were little longer

But great story anyway!

 

[Jenne64]

thanks for the comments. Much appreciated. I wanted to try something completely different and taken was the result. Having reread it now it's online I agree it's a bit short. I feel the need for a re write lol. Watch this space as they say!!
Thanks again,
Jenne 64

 

[Jenne64]

AS promised gentlemen the rewrite is posted now. Check out "taken again". Feel free to tell me what you think its like now!!
See you,
Jenne 64