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[thepoeticmaster2121]

He waited patiently keeping him self-busy by double and triple checking his plan as he waited for his prey in the shadow of the concrete parking garage. He knew the targets clothing height and every thing by heart and had at least 25 contingency plans to get her in the simple black sedan he had rented alone and at least another 25 detailing how he would escape if all of them failed through. Jeremiah had been waiting planning for this day ever since he had gone through puberty. He had yearned for this ever since an adolescent and carefully planned what would one day be his master plan.

That day had come

He paused hearing the sound of heels tapping against the concrete floor and hearing his pulse quicken in response. Technically speaking kidnapping from a parking garage was not only cliché but also a high-risk place to try and kidnap some one, there was just to many variables in play for comfort but Jeremiah had made sure that his prey stayed late that night and the parking garage was devoid of any body. He saw her starting to appear and pulled out the tranq riffle from the bag slung across his back, he took a deep breath and crouched before steadying his aim and waiting for her to enter the cross hairs, with her back turned to him and the shadows masking him he should be clear to shoot her in the back with out her even realizing he was hear.

If every thing went as planned at least

 

[Erica88]

Erica was extremely happy to be done with the day. It was the last day before her holiday and not only it seemed that every minute took three times as long, it also meant that her boss placed every chore on her desk that he hoped she could do before she went away. But finally the day was done.

If she hadn't been so very happy about having her holiday begin, she might be nervous about the dark and quiet parking garage. She was almost 25 and most men enjoyed her looks: Her long legs, her nice C cup and her red hairs.

As she walked through the parking garage to her car she didn't think of any danger until she suddenly got the strange sensation that she was being watched. She turned her head but before she saw anything strange, everything went dark.