swing more slowly

[ducky2001]

It seems that in every story about a wife or a couple getting seduced into the swinging lifestyle it takes about a paragraph and a half to turn a loving, faithful wife into a gang banging whore. Shyness disappears, fear flies out the window and clothes hit the floor, closely followed by everyone in the room, in mere seconds.

How much greater would be the story that dealt with life just a little more realistically. Even if the reader pretty much knows how the story is going to end up, do we have to give him (or her) release in a one-pager?

 

[Guest]

Saddly...

...detail is a dying art, I'm afraid to say. I've been working on a story where, by the middle of the 3rd page (size 11 font), there isn't even an intercourse scene. To be easier on the reader's eyes (and Laurel's work) I was going to try to find a slight "stopping point" by the time I hit the bottom of that third page, and then continue in a new "chapter" (submission). Breaking up a story yourself (I think) makes things easier on Laurel so she doesn't have to break down a story.

It's funny, too. My story came from a "cyber" session. Had I copied it down word for word, the whole story might not have been two full pages. ~sigh~ I am "cursed" with details. lol Sometimes I wonder if my stories would be appreciated or not, or if I should try to write some "wham, bam, thank you ma'am" ones. lol

FYI, I'd be glad to give any one a "sneak peak" of what I have written thus far if they'd want a sample.

 

[ANiceGuy]

Yes I too enjoy a story that build to the hot boiling point.

A good erotic story (like many if not most we have on Literotica ) builds toward the hot sex point. I like it when I'm arroused for a while before the climaxes hit!!! Kinda like forplay. If you don't do a good job of it you miss half the fun of love making. I like to tease and be teased.

ANiceGuy