Sweet Revenge

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Prom Night 1991


Amanda Webber, or Mandy
18 years old, and a virgin. (but not after tonight!)
School Class president, Debate club, and Soccer.

Description: 5'5" 120, Blond hair, Blue eyes. Cherub face. Not perfect, but built nicely.


She wasn't the most popular girl in school, far from it. Her only real friend was Katie Reed. People called her "The teachers pet" or "Goody-two-shoes", So frankly she was shocked speachless when Kevin Jones asked her to the prom. He was just, well.. Wow. Captain of a few teams, Football and such. Tall, good looking, every school girls dream boat. Didnt hurt his parents were the richest in the area.

She really believed he would be going with his Long time girlfriend, Cindy? But he had asked her, right there in the cafeteria room. She could only say "yes" in a whispered voice, She was totally amazed. And very pleased...

That Night

She had found the perfect gown. Her hair had been done at the salon, and her skin pampered at the day spa. She had spent all of her savings on this one night. Senior year was almost over, and she wanted to go out with a bang. She had her hair professionally styled and set, Looking like some model's hair she seen in a magazine.

Her gown was made of some sheer fabric, and fit like a second skin. But it did have room to move and dance in it. She looked almost like a christmas angel in the silver and white dress. There were no shoulder straps, nothing holding it up but her chest. She smiled in the mirror and turned. The dress stopped just above her knees, and hugged her hips gently. She hoped he liked it.


She grabbed her shoes, purse and her jacket. She looked outside the door and waited. It didn't take long before Kevin appeared in a long sleek Limo. Her parents shoo'd her back from the door, told her they wanted pictures. So she waited for Kevin to reach the door, her heart leaping in her throat.

Tonight she would give Kevin Jones her virginity, He was the only one she knew of who was worthy of that. She smiled.
 
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Achieving godliness at 18. That had to be some sort of record. It was a record Kevin Jones was proud of. At 18 he had everything, sitting on top of the fucking world ma. He had no worries, no cares. Life was good, better than good.
It was perfect.
He wanted a virgin.
It was as simple as that. He wanted to pop someone's cherry. He wanted to make her bleed as she fucker her rotten. That was what he wanted. His girlfriend Cindy was a slut, she was a slut when he began going out with her, and she conitnued to be a slut.
Every cock in high school had cum on or in her. Even Schlopsky the janitor. The man was fucking 60 years old. He was getting teenage pussy.
He was still going out with Cindy, but he needed a good lay.
Every time he asked who was the purest, they all said one name.
Amanda Webber.
He finished a beer, getting out of the Limo. He had the corseige in his hands as he walked up to the front door. It wouldn't take long, a half hour or so at the dance, then he'd go out to a nice little place he knew in the woods.
He was so hard just thinking about all this. It was incredible.
Knocking on the door, he saw shadows already passing by the window.
It begins.
 
Mandy

Her father opened the door and shook hands with Kevin.
She smiled as he walked up and gave her a quick kiss on the cheek and handed her the corseige. She slipped it on, and took several pictures with Kevin.
"Ok mom, dad we're going to be late, we need to go. See you tomorrow" Both her parents thought she was staying at her best friends house after the dance. They didnt know she was going with Kevin.
They left and got into the limo, she was nervous, but happy.
"Well.. Here we are Kevin.." She turned and looked out the window, watching the scenary go by.
In no time at all they were at the prom, hand in hand, and taking more pictures. She felt like a queen at her first ball. This was so exciting! She couldnt wait to dance with Kevin. She smiled brightly at him. He was her prince charming, and fulfilling all her dreams tonight.
 
Kevin nodded, glancing over a few of the Juniors who had shown up. Damn what bodies, it was as if they were all perfect.
Dance? Shit, he had to dance with her. He sighed, yeah, he supposed. A dance or two before they left.
He took her hand, "Yeah, come on baby."
Kevin held her tight to him, moving close to her. He would rub against her, his body reacting as any would. The hard on in his pants did not go unnoticed, and he didn't care. He would proudly display it for all the assholes who wanted to see.
Then, a slow song came on. He drew her into him, holding her tightly against his body. She felt so good, very good. Honestly, he couldn't last much longer. A couple more minutes and he would explode right here.
No, wait. Might as well make it look like he's trying to be romantic.
He took her chin, making her look at him.
Their eyes met, and then he kissed her deeply.
 
Mandy

They danced a few dances, and then a slow song came on. She felt her pulse leap to life as he pulled her close, pressing into her body. She could feel his raging hard on pressing to the v of her thighs. She moaned softly and pressed closer. He pulled her chin up, looking so dashing and romantic. His lips found hers and with practiced ease he kissed her. She melted into him, wanting to feel more. She tasted the alcohol on his tongue, but said nothing. The song was over, and the moment broken. He grabbed her hand and pulled her along behind him.
"Wh-Where are we going Kevin?" She felt panic but also pleasure. He wanted her! He really wanted her, she could shout it out loud she was so happy.
 
Kevin opened the limo door.
"We're going somewhere special. It's always too crowded at these things, I was thinking we go could somewhere a little more... private."
He took her hand, and helped her into the limo. Her dress was white, very nice. He wanted it soiled by the time he was done with her.
The limo left the city, and was beginning to go down a country road. This seemed like a good enough place as any.
"Darling. I know I've only known you a short time, but I've felt this connection... this spark. Don't tell me you haven't felt it either. I want you, and... and I love you."
He moved over, kissing her. Turns out reading that Seventeen magazine had worked after all. At once his hand was on her breast, rubbing it harshly between her dress. He groaned something deep and animalistic.
 
Mandy

She smiled as she listened to his words.
"You love me?' He didnt answer, he pounced on her. His hand coming up to fondle her breasts. She moaned and arched into his touch, her heart beating wildly out of control. She didnt know what to do? He kissed her deep and hard, and she tried to keep up with him. This was romantic? And loving? Her mind tried to come to the surface and figure this out.
"Umm Kevin?" she tried to talk but he kept kissing her. His hands running everywhere. Ok Mandy, if you want to lose this virginity, you have to try to go along with this.....
So she tried, she moved a little to be pressed to him more. She kissed him back, although it was a poor attempt. She whispered as he broke away.. "i've never done this before.. "
 
"You haven't?" His eyes wide with surprise, "Neither have I."
He lied through his teeth, but it didn't seem to matter. He moved against her, one hand snaking it's way through her dress. He touched her panties, and rubbed his hand against it. Was that a dull throb he felt? Oh yeah, she wanted this.
Kevin positioned himself so he was looming over her. He held her close to him, using his tongue and mouth all over her neck. She smelled so sweet, a virgin all the way. He loved it.
His other hand pulled down her top, exposing a breast. He devoured it, sucking it into his mouth. Oh, she did taste so sweet.
 
Mandy

She was a little frightened, but he said he hadnt done it either? She didnt think that was truthful. Why was he lying to her? His girlfriend fucked everyone, The whole school knew it too. So why the lie? He pulled down her dress and latched onto her nipple, his soft touched got a moan out of her, and she felt herself respond.She was shaking, but turned on. It also frightened her a little.
"Sl-slow down Kevin.. Please..?"
His hand shot up her dress pressing against her cotton panties, she stiffened a little, it wasnt a gentle touch.
"Kevin.. We need to stop.. This isnt working... Kevin?"
 
"Don't worry baby, you're just a little nervous, so am I," he said through her breast. It was a common line he used, that usually shut them up.
His hand began pinching her nipple, and rubbing against it roughly. He was beginning to get that old feeling, something deep within him. Sex was what he wanted, there was no stopping him now.
He rubbed against her panties, and then slowly moved them to on side, slowly putting a finger inside her.
"See," he said, mroe to himself as he groaned into her tit. His body pressed up tightly against her, pushing her to the back of the seat. He would involunatrily move back and forth with his hips, as if dry humping her.
There would be no dry humping, this bitch was getting fucked.
 
Mandy

She nodded her head, "ok Kevin.." She whimpered, not in pleasure but a little afraid. he was so rough with her. She felt him pinch her nipples and cried out. "owe!" But it was like he couldnt hear her. He pushed her panties aside, shoving a finger inside her. She moaned a little and arched against him, that didnt hurt her at all. It felt a little nice. Maybe because she was wet from earlier, she didnt know. She was frightened still but trying to keep it abated. She trembled as her legs were moved on either side of him. She tried to relax, but her heart was beating franticly, and she was still feeling scared. His hips started moving, oddly. She didnt know what he was doing, but she knew it was a sexual act. His pants were still on, she was ok. She laid back, a tear ran down her face, but she tried harder to get into it.
"Kevin?" her voice was pleading, but his finger moved inside of her and she moaned out. She was trying to calm him down, and stop this. But he was also elliciting moans of pleasure from her. Albeit forced pleasure. Since she was still hurting from his mistreatement of her breasts.
 
Oh yeah. Yes, perfect.
He bit her nipple, wanting to hear her cry out. He loved it when they cried out, made him just that much more horny.
Then, he moved up in the car, undressing very quickly. He took off his jacket, and shirt, then dropped his pants and shorts. His rock hard cock pointed straight at her.
He let her look at it for just a moment, and then moved back again. The same position, but he switched nipple. His hand went right back under her dress, this time hiking it up all the way so he could now see what he was doing. The finger went back into her, this time followed by another, and he even managed to slip a third one in there.
He pushed them back, far, not caring about her pleasure. He wanted to feel it. Was her cherry still there?
Way back he finally could feel some resistance. Oh yes, that's what he wanted. Groaning even louder, he moved up, putting his lips to hers.
"You saved yourself for me, that's good baby," his tongue came out, and be began to dry hump her again.
 
Mandy

She seen him strip, and now she was really afraid. he came back over her, and she shrank away.
"No Kevin.. We have to stop now!" She knew he wouldnt fit inside her. there was no way! He shoved her dress up and latched onto the other nipple biting hard, she cried out. tears falling freely down her face. She pushed with her heels on the seat, trying to scoot away from him, but he wouldnt budge. She pressed on his shoulders too. He wasnt going anywhere.
"No Kevin.. I dont want this.. Please stop" She whimpered and cried out as three fingers slid into her, deep inside. He was pressing against something and it hurt. It felt as if someone started a painful fire in her center.
He moaned and she whimpered, she didnt want this no more. It hurt. It wasnt supposed to hurt either. He was pressing his hard cock against her leg, moving back and forth. She felt something sticky and slippery on her inner thigh. She thought she was going to be ill. She covered her mouth to keep from gaggin. He stil wouldnt stop. his fingers moving in and out of her at an insane rate. His mouth causing bruises on her tender breasts.
"Please Kevin.. Stop...... Stop.. No I dont want to!' She pushed against his shoulders again, trying to get him away from her.
She was crying now, and hurting deep inside. She no longer felt good at all..
 
He stood before her, muscles taut, breathing heavily in and out. What the fuck? She had wanted this, why was she stopping now. He made a horried face, something where hate and evil lived.
It was like a crack of a bat.
Her head flew to the side, his hand print already becoming visible on her face. Kevin roughly grabbed onto her shoulders, making her look at him dead in the eye.
"Listen, Bitch! I don't care whether you want this to go on or not, I'm going to fuck you right here and right now. It's your choice if you wanna get the shit beat out of you, and let me fuck your body unconscious or just lay back there. Who knows, you might actually like some of it."
He stared at her, wild savage anger in her. He wanted her to object, say something along the lines of no or don't. His hand, holding roughly onto her should, twitched slightly, feeling the need to hit her again.
 
Mandy

She felt her head snap sideways and her face turn into a million shards of pain. She cried out and cringed away from him. He slapped her!? She felt her face instantly puff up, and her jaw ached. She cried even harder, she wanted to die right then and there. She held her tongue, she wanted to plead with him to stop, but his look in his eyes frightened her. He was looking almost like he was daring her to speak up and get another good smack. She just looked at him, her tears falling over her stinging face. He moved back towards her and she flinched away from his touch. She heard him growl in anger.
"K-Kevin? Please... Dont hurt me... I.. i'll do anything you want.. j-just dont hurt me." She cringed away, waiting for another blow to come.
 
"Ohhh.." could it be, his cock was even harder. He saw a small trail of blood come from her mouth. This was so exhilariating. Who knew violence made sex so much more fun.
"That's good baby," he rubbed up against her roughly. This time he didn't bother with any formalities. She said she'd do anything.
He pushed her closer to him, putting his cock up against her pussy. It was wet before, but somehow he didn't doubt it.
Oh, it was going to be dry.
He moved down, latching his mouth onto one of her nipples again.
Then, he put his hands on her ass beneath her dress, and slowly moved her onto him.
He wanted to stop right before the cherry.
 
Mandy

She tasted the blood in her mouth and squeezed her eyes shut. she hurt so badly, she wanted it to stop. She felt her tears pour over her face, more of them, non stop flow. Her mind she cried for her daddy to come save her from this. For anyone, the driver, someone to save her. She prayed to god, promising to be a good girl the rest of her life, just please.. make him stop. She felt cold and more frightened than anything in her whole life. He lifted her ass up and pulled her down the seat a little, and yet still more tears flowed. She couldnt stop it, her lips trembled and her heart lurched painfully in her chest. He pressed into her, stretching her walls inside, she bit her lip to stop from crying out. It hurt so badly, it was a deep firey hot pain. He latched onto her nipple and bit so hard she felt as if she had been speared through them. She whimpered as more tears ran down her face. The pain spread from her center down her thighs. They trembled and clenched up on her painfully. She did cry out then.
"P-please kevin-n.." She cried even harder as he pressed against the last thing to prove she was a virigin. She didnt try to pull away, he would hit her again. His hands dug painfully into her hips, his nails biting into her skin. She hiccuped and sobbed, her lips still trembling.
"daddy? where are you? Please please come help me..Someone help me?"
She stiffened up as she felt him pull back from inside her, maybe he was leaving and stopping this now?
 
There it was. He had been wanting this exact moment. She was crying and sobbing, the bitch. He would have to teach her not to ruin the magical mood they were having.
He pressed against her cherry, feeling it resist ever so tightly. He back off, and then pressed again. It stopped him, resisting his throbbing cock from going any further. Then, he felt it. It began to tear just slightly.
He moved back.
Oh, this was pure pleasure.
"Thank you so much darling," he kissed her, his hands holding onto her ass tightly. The nails driving deep into her, he could feel skin peeling away every time he slipped. God she was such a hot fuck. Twice as good as Cindy, if she would only stop fucking crying!
"Fucking bitch," he whispered into her ear. Then, he rammed hard into her. The cherry broke, sending a sudden rush of juices all over his cock. He hammered all the way inside her, feeling her body crush up against his. He had her flattened, between the back seat and his own sweaty horney body. He groaned loudly, feeling her body under him.
Now she wasn't a virgin, now she was just a whore like all the others.
With renound strength, he moved himself out of her, only to ram back in even harder than before.
 
Mandy

She whimpered each time he pushed against it, the pain was intense. her tears flowed more and she couldnt breath she was crying so much. He whispered in her ear "Fucking bitch" and rammed into her. She screamed bloody murder, as if she was being torn in two pieces. She cringed back, trying to get away. her hand spressing on his shoulders, wanting out. She pushed with her feet and her hands, trying to dislodge him from her tormented body. Her whimpers and screams went unheard. She hurt more than words could describe, and she wanted to die. Death would feel better, she was sure of it.
His nails dug deep gouges out of her ass, scraping the skin back and she felt her blood oozing from both her ass and her center. He pulled back and rammed back into her. She screamed again, but not as loudly.
"Get off ! Pleassse Kevin.. Stop!" She fought him now, her hands pounding on his back, but he wasnt listening to her at all. His eyes were so hard, and cold. She would never forget those eyes. He was like a monster come to life, and she was helpless to get away. deep wracking sobs tore from her chest. She fought until she had no strength left in her any more. She lay there crying and limp. She moaned now in pain each time he moved in and out of her. The black void of the cruel pain inflicted on her was all she could see, feel and hear.
 
He thrusted again, it was going much more smoothly now. She wasn't resisting him as much. He still held tightly onto her body, as he began fucking her harder.
"Oh god," he cried, looking into her face. Tears spilling from her eyes, "you are such a tight bitch. I love it."
He kissed her on the lips as if they were lovers.
Then he laughed right in her face, laughed and dug his nails harder into her. He began pulling her towards him every time he hammered into her. She whimpered every time his cock went deep inside. It was a pleasent sound, one he could listen to every night.
He felt himself beginning to orgasm. He had been going so hard and so fast, he had never forgot. It was good though, he liked it.
"It's almost over you whore, I'm just going to cum inside you, and it'll be over. I'll clean you up and take you home, don't worry baby."
He lowered himself down to her nipple, this time really biting down hard. He wanted her body to be thrashed after all this, really thrashed.
With any luck, she wouldn't be able to stand for a week.
His balls tightened as they contined to slap across the bottom of her ass.
 
Mandy

She went numb, escaping back into her own mind. Inside herself where she was safe from the evil he was inflicting apon her body. He bit into her nipple drawing blood, but she never felt it. her mind had shut down on her. She heard whimpering and crying from a distance. As if someone else was crying. She stood back and watched as some guy fucked the royal shit out of a helpless little nieve girl. She felt no emotion. Nothing. The void was comforting. She heard the girl cry out for her daddy. Saw as the male above her fucked her good and hard. His orgasm was upon him, and he shouted out with joy and release. Calling her the most vile names imaginable. But she lay there, blood runing from several places on her body, her soul battered and beaten into nothingness. She was far from this place, the look in her eyes clearly spoke of it. She was a blank canvas..
 
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His cum shot out, landing deep inside her. He continued to hump hard into her, cumming continuously until every inch was inside her. He wanted the fucking bitch to feel it. He wanted her to feel him inside her.
Slowly, with his cock still twitching he got out of her. Then, he put her panties back, and moved her dress back down.
"See, it wasn't so bad," the humaness had returned to his voice. He put his clothes on the best he could, and then sat down beside her, holding her tightly to him.
"It hurts everyone their first time baby, you're no different."
He clicked for the intercom, telling the driver it was time to go.
"Come on," he kissed her forehead, "Just lie against me, you'll be back home in no time."
 
Mandy

From somewhere deep inside she came somewhat back to herself, Though a little detached. She lay her head on his chest and nodded.
"Yeah.. first time is a little rough.." She whispered the words, more like parroting him. She didnt feel anything but the seaping of his hot cum between her thighs. The ride was quiet and uneventful. And soon they were outside her home. All the lights were out, no one was expecting her to arrive tonight. She turned and grabbed her purse.
"Good night Kevin.." her voice devoid of any emotion. The tears still flowing down her face. She stepped out of the limo and almost fell to the ground. Pain shot up her body, she didnt cry out. She thought the pain was rather nice, interesting.
 
"There we go," he picked her up, walking her towards the house. Was she limping slightly? Oh yeah, that turned him on so much. His dick sprang to life, but he forced himself to forget about it.
"Right to your door, as promised," he looked back at the driver, "Now, we've got a little something to discuss. What happened tonight, if it got out, some people might think we did a bad thing. Now, I'm willing to keep my mouth shut if you are. Don't tell anyone, you hear? Cause, according to Jim over there, you were just as willing to do this as me. I'll have him go to court swearing that if I have to."
He kissed her, such technicalities for one single night of passion. The kiss was long deep, and he felt her sore breasts through the dress one final time.
"Remember," he put his finger up to her lips, "Our little secret."
He walked back to the limo.
In another moment, he was gone.
 
Mandy

She hurt all over, and he was making threats? She nodded her head. Her eyes not coming up to meet his. She couldnt look at him, never again would she look at him. She felt so used and beaten. Like nothing but a pile of worthless shit to him. He had abused her in unhuman ways, and he threatened her? She held back a sob and opened her front door. Slowly, painfully she made her way to her room. Once inside she locked herself in, curling into a tight ball she laid down on the bed and closed her eyes. She couldnt sleep, she hurt to badly. She didnt dare go into the bathroom, someone might wake up and see her battered face. She best wait until everyone leaves. She heard the limo drive away, and Kevin out of her life. She thought he loved her? He wanted her? She shivered and rolled up into her blankets. Her heart hurt, as did everything else inside of her. She felt her chin tremble once more as fresh tears fell unchecked onto her pillow. She looked at her corsage on her wrist, she tore it off and threw it across the room.
"Someday Kevin.. you will pay for this.. Mark my words."
 
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