And feedback is much appreciated!
I've been surprised by the difficulty of developing what will eventually be a novel-length story, but it's fun, too. If there's something plot-wise that's just not working for you, I'd like to hear it.
I hope you enjoy! Here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=362357
LJ
I've been surprised by the difficulty of developing what will eventually be a novel-length story, but it's fun, too. If there's something plot-wise that's just not working for you, I'd like to hear it.
I hope you enjoy! Here's the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=362357
LJ
