Sweet Maggie Ch. 3 feedback please

LaJovena

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Chapter 3 of my Sweet Maggie series has posted, and so far I've gotten some pretty good feedback in both the comments section and in emails. The rating isn't so stellar (4.3 right now, I think), which puzzles me, but it's only been out a couple of days, so maybe that will go up as people read it.

Chapter 3 is fairly tame compared to Chapters 1 & 2, sexually speaking, (like I could hope to top the nasty quotient of Chapter 2...) so I thought I'd play around with some, gasp, plot. Please go take a peak. It's only 2 pages, so it's a pretty quick read.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=350237


Thanks!

LJ
 
It has good form. Nice paragraphing, no obvious edting errors, etc. You tell a good story and it's well presented.
 
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