incestor007
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Author should not have written Epilogue , if he really wanted better ending. Now his decision was totally wrong, if he loves her to extent that he would never meet another woman, then he needed to give a try, There were several options, He do not need to cuckold, and problem could have been solved. I am suggesting it because, in Epilogue, he lost everything and what he lost is nothing (if she really does not cares about her kids). Sooner or later she will regret, but it should not be because karl is bad guy, because then there would be a reason not guilt what she had done. I have read many alternate endings from other writers. now i want ask every one , SHOULD it BE OK if Karl was good guy, hell NO, good or bad, what she did was crime, she must be a cruelest woman on the earth. And about Karl being so good guy, no good guy would ever play with another man's marriage. If he really wanted her back he should have forced her to break marriage first. Not screwing her, which means he also deserve some punishment, But in the end Kathy is real vilian. And paul's decison might have been right he had been chosen to be happy, but apparently he did not, If He loved her so much, that he could spend 5 years without any woman, then i think his decision was wrong, He finally hurt himself. He could have dealt in better way, I request original author to write chapter three but try not make Karl bad guy, it not like i am fan of him, but i want Paul to win using His TRUE LOVE for wife, not some other reason, Practically it is impossible for woman to exist who does takes finally decision like this, If she really loves Paul, he Kids , And 16 years had been really great, then she would have never signed the divorce papers, I really believe in humanity. Only person in the world can do that. Atleast not remarry so soon. It really impractical. All he needed to prove was that he loved her more than Karl Guy. If you kids are stupid than you dont let them, make a mistake which could ruin several lives including their own , because we love them. Clearly Kathy here is fool(if not cruel), she is confused, living in fantasies, If she ends up with Paul only person suffering will be Karl, but not as much as Paul if she ends up with Karl, because Karl has nothing to lose in first place he trying steal something, not his. Ending with karl will make kids suffer too, i dont know how parent can decide on seeing their childeren on weekly basis, just because they can get their own fuck on daily basis. So i think whiteone_redone owns his readers another chapter to make right decison. Even i can think so many ways, to work things out. Paul just need to listen to his heart weater he can really give up Kathy for her own stupidity, and let her ruin his and kids future. There are several solution, like waiting for sometime til kids becomes mature, til then she should stop Karl, in which she can really realised what she wanted to do. Or giving her some time, in which she stop Karl, and then he can decided if he can really live without her or not, may be a years could be a time to overcome, it easy to hate someone when she is near you, In this time he can try his own life, giving another chance for future partener, or It is to give up someone when another is beside you to hold you, I am not really interested in Paul and Kathy thing, all i want is everyone happy. Paul can do it without being cuckold. Just ask her to stop for year or two, and then make decision. Meanwhile all problems solved, Really this karl guy really loved her can wait for her for year (Which i doubt according his past, actions). Paul can move on or stay with her depends on how this time goes. this is one of the many possible solution, each person will take different deciosion, but to make things work out, we should not change other characters, Now here all Paul can do is control his own action, because it is Paul's story. So here good ending should proceed with Paull being prideful, wise, not-cuckold, loving his wife, Kathy here is Confused between love and fantasy, Still care about her husband, loving her husband, loving her kids, Not a lying bithch(atleast when asked directly), Karl, seems to be good guy otherwise no woman will risk her wonderful family, but he made only made only made one mistake, not stopping Kathy. Evelyn being good and intellligent(more than Kathy) sister, Todd being good friend. So anyone writng next chapter should not contradict these facts. I would love to write its next chapter but there are several reason why not. First, I only know what to do not sure about how it would end, because it depends on how Original author he has pictured each character in his mind while writing, and end result depends on their reactions to Paul action( Only thing we can sugggest is waht paul should do, because other are just doing what they should do or they should not so its for paul to make decison). Second i am not good writer. Third i would really love it to read if it ends by same author.
