Survivor seeks revenge on rapist

[EroticWhispers77]

Okay, here's the basic plot so far... Wanting the mentality of a "survivor" and not a "victim", a woman begins self-defense classes and pumps up once she discovers that her rapist is set free due to "lack of evidence" in the case. (She was nervous and ashamed when it happened, so she didn't tell anyone right away.)

Over time she stalks him. She assures herself that she is "just checking to make sure he doesn't turn another woman into a victim", but soon her stalking becomes an obsession.

One night, when she knows he is alone, she breaks into his place, overpowers him, and anally rapes him with a strap on for "revenge".


So, is this idea "too extreme" for Lit? Would anyone read a story like this? Does anyone have any ideas to help this story along?

 

[Seattle Zack]

This sounds like the plot of a very bloody 1978 cult film called "I Spit on your Grave" -- except in the movie, she chops her five rapists into pieces in various disgusting manners.

There used to be an actual "Extreme" category at Lit, but it's been discontinued -- perhaps because of the subject matter. Sometimes graphic n/c stories get rejected too, because of their violent content. I don't know about this one -- it seems more "Death Wish" than erotica. You can certainly try it, but it may get rejected.

 

[sanchopanza]

I think it is a good idea. And I just realised now why my story is taking so long to be accepted, the violent death scene, thats what.

 

[EroticWhispers77]

Well, erotic horror has an automatic disclaimer stating that the stories are "meant" to be violent just like horror movies. Also, I've seen some pretty far out rape scenes in the non consent category before. So, who's to say how far is too far?

And, isn't there still a link to the "extreme" site?

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Well, erotic horror has an automatic disclaimer stating that the stories are "meant" to be violent just like horror movies. Also, I've seen some pretty far out rape scenes in the non consent category before. So, who's to say how far is too far?

And, isn't there still a link to the "extreme" site?

I think that is is a good idea. If you can spin your victim in a sympathetic way especially.

-Colly

 

[MartinConteggio]

I suspect the reality would be closer to Seattle Zack's description of "I Spit on Your Grave", with a potato peeler. I don't think any women, possessed to seek revenge, would seek only to rape the rapist.

 

[EroticWhispers77]

Be that as it may, we all know that *most* of the stories at Lit lack at least some realism. If mom and son, or bro and sis, can fall madly in lust the minute the youngest turns 18 than my survivor character can seek revenge on her rapist by raping him back!

 

[sanchopanza]

I think it is a good story. If the plot calls for violence then dish it up. Oddly enough I'll never read the non-consent stories but I'd read this tale of a woman being raped then brutally revenging herself.

 

[LorriLove]

Okay, here's the basic plot so far... Wanting the mentality of a "survivor" and not a "victim", a woman begins self-defense classes and pumps up once she discovers that her rapist is set free due to "lack of evidence" in the case. (She was nervous and ashamed when it happened, so she didn't tell anyone right away.)

Over time she stalks him. She assures herself that she is "just checking to make sure he doesn't turn another woman into a victim", but soon her stalking becomes an obsession.

One night, when she knows he is alone, she breaks into his place, overpowers him, and anally rapes him with a strap on for "revenge".


So, is this idea "too extreme" for Lit? Would anyone read a story like this? Does anyone have any ideas to help this story along?

can't see it being a problem love, i'd rather see her hack his cock and balls off with a pair of pinking shears and stitch them in his mouth, but that's just me

 

[greene14]

Wow!

Holy cow Lori,

That's a bit extreme????