Surrender...now

[Silverlily]

I have just finished rereading D'Artagnan's Surrender series for the umpteenth time; each time has been as good as the first. I always feel I am in his stories, not just reading them.

In Part IV, I can smell the autumn leaves, feel the silk, hear the salegirl's soft voice as I read. The weight of His gaze is tangible. These stories are an amazing play of senses and sensuality, providing pleasure on many different fronts. In addition, here is a man with excellent taste in clothing a woman.

Thank you, D'Artagnan, I hope there will be many more additions to this series.

 

[Countess DeWinter]

Surrender, now

D'Artagnan's Surrender series is most definately one of the most erotic I've read on this site. Have you read his story "Intruder?" That's the story that I first read here and it's what made me cum back for more.

 

[Silverlily]

I just did, thanks for the tip.

I usually don't like taken by a stranger type stories, but this one was very tastefully done. Yes, I think I'll be cumming back for more too!

 

[Dartagnan]

Thank You

Dear Kitten and Countess,

Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments. They are most generous and I thank you once again for them. I would love to hear from you two and your insight as to what made the stories so moving in your eyes. I do try to put my reader in the room with the characters. Each person can close their eyes and see the room, the autumn morning, the cabin, and yes, picture each character and feel their emotions. I enjoy writing very much and always enjoy hearing from a reader.

D'Artagnan

 

[Countess DeWinter]

Surrender stories

In this era of "The Sensitive Man" (like, oh, Alan Alda and that ilk), it seems that strong men are "out of vogue." Yes, I balance my own checkbook and can change my own tires, but I like a man who knows how to make me feel like a woman and isn't afraid of his masculinity. Your female characters aren't weaklings, but your male characters aren't pansies either. They are strong enough to take charge of a situation and they know how to make a woman explode in ecstasy.
The imagery is wonderful, but it is ultimately your richly layered male characters that do it for me. I'm hoping there are more such stories in you and that you will share them with us.

 

[Silverlily]

I love the details, like "he made his tongue wide and flat". That particular one made me melt. Being somewhat submissive with a stubborn streak myself, I really identified with what the woman was thinking feeling. Some parts of the series made me want to check my house for "bugs".

The peach scene was amazing. I wanted to try it and I don't even like peaches. Thank god you weren't describing something illegal. I'm so glad I found your stories.

 

[ElaineWest]

INCREDIBLE!

I read the first paragraph of 'Surrender' part one and cried, I've been there so many times. It was as if D'Artagnan was writing about me. If people ever got to see the darkness inside of me, the past and the hurt they probably be shocked and never want to know me. I know all to well what it is to have to 'wall' it up inside and never REALLY let anyone in. In that very paragraph all my past came back and I wanted to scream "Yes! Finally someone understands!!" "Thank you so very much D'Artagnan! Thank you!"

Well after reading that I had to go on. It was the most beautiful, sexy, story. I LOVED IT! "BRAVO!"

I had one of my friends read it. She's into all those chessy bodice-rippers! I said "Now here's a romance worth reading again and again!" She read it all in one sitting and was stunned!

I just had to say what an incredible masterpiece I thought this was and say thanks!

I'm also on my way after this to read 'Intruder!'

 

[Dartagnan]

Incredible...

I have received many emails for my stories and it is always a pleasure, but you ladies are incredible. I do enjoy writing my stories very much and have a few new ideas in my head for a new story. It will be my pleasure to have reads like yourself reading them. Thank you again for these wonderful comments. My regular email is posted on my Literotica Member Profile.

D'Artagnan

 

[Countess DeWinter]

Surrendering now!

I finally got around to perusing the member profiles and went first to the D's. Wow! D'Artagnan is hot! Visually stimulating as well as mentally stimulating. Any other talents we might want to explore? Would LOVE to help with story ideas for you. Your erotic touch would set the words on fire...

 

[Silverlily]

Oh no joke, and tall. Yummy.

 

[Dartagnan]

Talk about HOTTIES!!

Looking at the delicious pic on Kitten's profile and the mouth-watering posted pics of the Countess on both the picture sites.. I would say they you two know a LOT about being a hottie. You are both very beautiful and very desirable, especially by this author. I would love to have either of you as my 'muse'.

 

[Silverlily]

That has to be one of the loveliest compliments I've be given, thank you. I would be honored to be one of your muses.

 

[Dartagnan]

Compliments

My Dear, Sweet Kitty,

I do not hand out compliments without them being both earned and true. You have a MOST kissable tummy and those incredibly long legs must bring your significant other, a VERY lucky person if there is one, tremendous pleasure. You should hear those kind of comments each day, your hard work to get that body has certainly earned them.

D'Artagnan

 

[Silverlily]

LOL, yes my husband is very appreciative of all those crunches I do, even if I'm not. As for the legs, I have my parents to thank.

Still, it's nice to hear from an unbiased party, especially such a talented one.

 

[Countess DeWinter]

thanks, D'Artagnan

Thank you for the compliments *blush* Your words made me feel like a blushing teenager, no mean feat at my age
I would certainly enjoy being a muse for you...hmmmmmm...two muses and one horny author....could be trouble

 

[ANiceGuy]

As usual

All I have to do is look for posts by Kitten Eyes and Countess DeWinter (He says lustFULLY remembering the "close up" picture the Countess has posted of her HOT pussy!) to find the Hottest stories!!!

ANiceGuy

 

[Dartagnan]

I Agree

I could not agree MORE... they certainly are a hot pair aren't they?? I do think it would great to see a few more pictures of the sweet Kitten but the pictures of the Countess are certainly worth the time to view them. Mouthwateringly delicious.

Dartagnan

 

[Countess DeWinter]

A proposition...

Kitten, do you think we could entice these two sweeties to ramble over to the Sexual Role Playing board and engage in a little literary shenanigans?

 

[Dartagnan]

Any Time

Name the Time and the Place Hehehe


Dartagnan

 

[Silverlily]

Re: Any Time

Name the Time and the Place

I am working on it! Virgins...they're so impatient!

Seriously, something with a western theme should be ready by tommorow.

 

[Countess DeWinter]

a Western theme?

I can almost hear you purring....I am quite excited at the prospect of being a schoolmarm ravished by an outlaw with six-guns strapped to his thigh...or maybe the saloon gal who does the ravishing...
Damn, it's hard typing with one hand!!

 

[Merelan]

Kitten, sweetheart... please? May I join?

 

[Dartagnan]

Ahhhhhh

This is something I think will enjoy VERY much. I just started one to see if anyone wants to make that one work.. it was the beginning of another story... Thought it might be fun to do one this way.

 

[Silverlily]

Absolutely, Merelan, and you too, Countess. D'Artagnan came play if he promises to behave.

 

[Merelan]

No Kitty, we don't want him to really behave? Do we?