Surprise! Another incest story

[Hercules723]

Hi everyone

My first story on lit is coming along, but before I post it I would like to know what you guys think of the idea.

Basically a son comes home from school and wants to talk to his mother. First he confesses to accepting money for sex with teachers The story continues to where the son finds out his Mum can not pay the school fees anymore and the only way for them (he and his sister) to stay in school is to make themselves availiable for sex with any teacher who is interested.

From there the Mother is blackmailed into going a lot further incl sex with her son. The staff use the sister as their bargaining chip, forcing the Mother and son to do things to avoid anything happening to her. However no matter what the sister does have to watch everything that takes place.

Like I said I am still working on it but some early feedback or additional ideas would be really helpful and also motivate me to get it done!

I know it rates pretty low on the 'believability' score but with the popularity of incest on Lit I am hoping that wont be too much of a problem.

Looking forward to any response and thanks in advance.

Jim

 

[flawed_ethics]

One thing you might want to try is posting information about your drafted story in the Story Feedback forum. Many authors and people who plum like proofreading erotica post there, and may be willing to give your story an exhaustive review if you give them enough details and ask kindly (it's just good manners).

The idea isn't bad. Don't worry about the believability factor. If the world was as populated with 38-24-38-DD-well- tanned-energetic-sexy-as-hell-"just turned 18"-virgin women and buff, 15 inch stamina laden guys who spew by the liter, the planet would be quite a sight. It isn't, but we read it anyway because it tickles our fancy.

I once read a post where someone mentioned that the reader will allow for one unbelivable occurance in a story. It's that unbelivable event or circumstance that makes it a story instead of a run-of-the-mill list of events. Just a thought.

I apologize about my rambling. Good luck!

 

[MsLinnet]

I like the idea but i think you have a few to many ideas at once but it could work

love Linnet

Hi everyone

My first story on lit is coming along, but before I post it I would like to know what you guys think of the idea.

Basically a son comes home from school and wants to talk to his mother. First he confesses to accepting money for sex with teachers The story continues to where the son finds out his Mum can not pay the school fees anymore and the only way for them (he and his sister) to stay in school is to make themselves availiable for sex with any teacher who is interested.

From there the Mother is blackmailed into going a lot further incl sex with her son. The staff use the sister as their bargaining chip, forcing the Mother and son to do things to avoid anything happening to her. However no matter what the sister does have to watch everything that takes place.

Like I said I am still working on it but some early feedback or additional ideas would be really helpful and also motivate me to get it done!

I know it rates pretty low on the 'believability' score but with the popularity of incest on Lit I am hoping that wont be too much of a problem.

Looking forward to any response and thanks in advance.

Jim

 

[Jenny _S]

Re: Re: Surprise! Another incest story

Hmmm... does anyone else see a Harry Potter thing here?

 

[flawed_ethics]

Re: Re: Re: Surprise! Another incest story

Hmmm... does anyone else see a Harry Potter thing here?

No. Then again, I haven't read the series yet.

 

[MsLinnet]

Re: Re: Re: Surprise! Another incest story

Hmmm... does anyone else see a Harry Potter thing here?

Not sure about Harry Potter but it could be a boarding school or something

love Linnet...

 

[NASCARaddicted]

currently, I am reading book 4 of the Harry Potter series.

First of all: In the first Book, Harry Potter and his friends are 11. Currently, Book 5 was released in England and since one book is about 1 year, he has to be 15 ... still underaged.

But besides that ... magic is an interesting idea when it comes to Lit ....