Suggestions for improving stories

[Calvin427]

Here are two stories I just sent in:
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404589

and

www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404590.

They're getting hammered by readers. The scores are around 3.44.

How can I do better?

 

[voluptuary_manque]

My first suggestion would be to stay out of the Loving Wives category.


Seriously, the readers there seem to want to see cuckolding or revenge for cuckolding or resistance to cuckolding and they disagree so vehemently that one faction will bomb the stories that appeal to the others. It's an odd bunch. If you want to write about you and your wife getting it on with someone else, put it in the Group Sex category and I suspect that your scores will improve.

 

[NoJo]

Here are two stories I just sent in:
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404589

and

www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404590.

They're getting hammered by readers. The scores are around 3.44.

How can I do better?

You've posted over twenty stories, you should know by now

 

[Darkniciad]

I have to concur with VM. The Loving Wives category is always going to score low, and you're going to get acidic comments. There are simply too many warring camps that think the other readers are "sick fuckers who need to die" and don't appear to know the difference between reality and fiction.

If the story will fit in group sex, go that way as opposed to Loving Wives. You'll get a far more balanced response, although some of the commenters are so vehement in their quest to spit venom at you that they'll follow you anywhere.

 

[Boxlicker101]

I have to concur with VM. The Loving Wives category is always going to score low, and you're going to get acidic comments. There are simply too many warring camps that think the other readers are "sick fuckers who need to die" and don't appear to know the difference between reality and fiction.

If the story will fit in group sex, go that way as opposed to Loving Wives. You'll get a far more balanced response, although some of the commenters are so vehement in their quest to spit venom at you that they'll follow you anywhere.

Even worse would be an LW story with an interracial aspect to it.

By the way, do you want to improve stories or improve scores on your stories or to get more flattering comments?