Suggestions for finishing D/s story?

[Sir Victor]

I don't do a lot of writing, my writing partner is the talented one. She
says she enjoys my erotic ideas. This is what we've come up with, it is
not exactly what I wanted, or probably what she wanted:
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=390734

Any thoughts on where to go with it, soft or more hard core?

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read our story.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

That's really based on the characters....how kinky is Elly? Go with your gut on this one, I think.

 

[Queenee]

beautiful...

elly writes beautifully, as do you Sir! i was completely caught up in this story... it is intensly erotic, powerful, and beautiful. What an amazing fantasy *sigh* i do think that elly deserves a reward, in one form or another ;-)


~q

 

[Sir Victor]

SEVERUSMAX: Yes, of course, Vic knows how he'd like the story to progress as does elly, however I'm wondering what readers prefer. It does boil down to individual preference, however it would be interesting to see what is in the majority as far as readers go. I'm thinking to continue with light D/s, but it might be more interesting for elly to have a wider variety of experiences.

Queenee: Thanks very much for your comments. elly truly is a wonderful writer!

Thank you again for taking the time to read and for your comments!

 

[pinksatin]

I think this story is written beautifully Victor, Sir. My curiosity is captured about how the necklace is going to fit in Personally I think light D/s would be my choice, otherwise, Sir needs to be much more strict in His discipline when elly is disobedient to His commands. I'm no writer Victor, Sir...just an opinion from an appreciative reader

 

[Sir Victor]

I think this story is written beautifully Victor, Sir. My curiosity is captured about how the necklace is going to fit in Personally I think light D/s would be my choice, otherwise, Sir needs to be much more strict in His discipline when elly is disobedient to His commands. I'm no writer Victor, Sir...just an opinion from an appreciative reader

Thank you pinky, you're so sweet! Yes, he's certainly going to be more strict, the question is how far should he take it. Would a ride on a pony be too extreme:
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=448486

Obviously a matter of opinion, but I'd like to hear them.

And by the way pinky, that's a HOT av!

 

[pinksatin]

Thank you pinky, you're so sweet! Yes, he's certainly going to be more strict, the question is how far should he take it. Would a ride on a pony be too extreme:
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=448486

Obviously a matter of opinion, but I'd like to hear them.

And by the way pinky, that's a HOT av!

I thank You for that Sir Victor As is You're av~
Ohhh a ride on a pony would definately be extreme hehe... although, that would all depend on how it was modified...

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

SEVERUSMAX: Yes, of course, Vic knows how he'd like the story to progress as does elly, however I'm wondering what readers prefer. It does boil down to individual preference, however it would be interesting to see what is in the majority as far as readers go. I'm thinking to continue with light D/s, but it might be more interesting for elly to have a wider variety of experiences.

Queenee: Thanks very much for your comments. elly truly is a wonderful writer!

Thank you again for taking the time to read and for your comments!

D/s is cool, light or otherwise. Sometimes, the reader determines it...sometimes the characters...sometimes both. Just my experience of it.

Great AV, by the way. Is that William Petersen?

 

[Sir Victor]

Yes, modified ... evil thoughts ... I like the way you think pinky!!!

I thank You for that Sir Victor As is You're av~
Ohhh a ride on a pony would definately be extreme hehe... although, that would all depend on how it was modified...

 

[pinksatin]

Yes, modified ... evil thoughts ... I like the way you think pinky!!!

Well thank You Victor, Sir ...

 

[Sir Victor]

Well thank You Victor, Sir ...

You're welcome my dear!

 

[Sir Victor]

As much as I would like to finish this story with elly, she is just too busy right now and I will consider other ladies who might be a good fit for the part.
PM me if interested, thanks!