Stuck.

[Cicca_Jai]

I'm stuck here. IDK y but I can't seem to figure out how to start this scene.
Two young ppl in love get married. but must wait 10 days or more b4f they r allowed to see eachother alone... Having a hard time getting going from there.
any ideas? both parited are "New" and uneducated in the bedroom.
the only think I can come up with is the lame ass clunky, going no place fast type stuff.

Input please??

 

[Pure]

i'm not sure what you mean by 'from there.' do you mean 1) they just got married, and are in the 10 day period, or 2) the 10 day period is just over and they are finally alone. if 2), it would seem to me that some gentle and small shows of affection might be in order. you however say nothing about setting or characters; so, for example, i have no idea whether kisses, for example, would be appropriate.

I'm stuck here. IDK y but I can't seem to figure out how to start this scene.
Two young ppl in love get married. but must wait 10 days or more b4f they r allowed to see eachother alone... Having a hard time getting going from there.
any ideas? both parited are "New" and uneducated in the bedroom.
the only think I can come up with is the lame ass clunky, going no place fast type stuff.

Input please??

 

[Cicca_Jai]

i'm not sure what you mean by 'from there.' do you mean 1) they just got married, and are in the 10 day period, or 2) the 10 day period is just over and they are finally alone. if 2), it would seem to me that some gentle and small shows of affection might be in order. you however say nothing about setting or characters; so, for example, i have no idea whether kisses, for example, would be appropriate.

Pure I havent a clue yet either I'm so far off my game this month its no longer funny.

Setting is hard to exsplaine India is the local, the couple are part of an elite "fight squad" of the more super natural/religious order for lack of a better term.
They are not allowed to be alone together for 10days after they marry. Both are unskilled in the bedroom.

I want to make it sweet, and loving, but not have the clumsy first time type set up. hot but not too hot def wishing to avoid dry and broing


Just no idea how I would go about doing that... it is my first attempt at a sexual scene, that is not violent in nature now that I'm good at.

 

[roomfor1more]

The starting point for me is defining why they must wait 10 days, for example is it a family thing, cultural things, or religious custom? If not, is there something wrong with one of them or did they get married long-distance via Internet? Once you do that the next part would be thinking about the scene. My feeling they would be quite passionate because they have been fighting these feelings of restraint and they are finally able to release it.

 

[Addyson]

I'm stuck here. IDK y but I can't seem to figure out how to start this scene.
Two young ppl in love get married. but must wait 10 days or more b4f they r allowed to see eachother alone... Having a hard time getting going from there.
any ideas? both parited are "New" and uneducated in the bedroom.
the only think I can come up with is the lame ass clunky, going no place fast type stuff.

Input please??

I am not familiar with the culture nor the setting so you will have to work on that yourself. The way I would approach it is with the 10 days being very flirtatious between the two young people. They look at each other across the room, once in awhile there is a passing touch of hands. Each of these events stirs in them this feeling that they cannot quite explain. Use the senses. What do they smell like, for example. The sense of smell is very intoxicating. The hear the other person's voice through a window or through the trees.

What you are trying to do is build to the point where they come together, though you do not even have to make that moment part of the story. Start with the scent, then to hearing then more to seeing, then to touching. If you want to make a truly rich story and not one just about sex, describe the setting in terms of the senses. "The smell of dampness filled his nostrils as he woke on the day of the wedding. The scent reminded him of the day he saw her for the first time, the first day the monsoon rains washed through the town in the autumn." See what I mean?

 

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[Sidney_1]

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[Grimfalcon]

I think you can work with the 10 day waiting period, if you look at it from a different vantage point.
Start a secretive, forbidden encounter thing between them half-way through it. They know they’re supposed to wait, for whatever reason, but by chance of fate they find themselves alone and opportunity presents itself. They are both hesitant to break this 10 day grace period, but they can’t keep their hands off one another. Build the passion slowly at first, coy and shy in a way, with culminating sexual tension. The sex itself doesn't have to be outrageous, they're both new at his. Just think back to how your first time was, and what you felt.
You can go a lot of different ways with this, depending on the overall plot and conclusion you’re after.
Just my two cents worth on the issue. Hope it helps.

 

[wildehafer]

You're stuck because there is no problem or dramatic tension here.

Hit the nail on the head. Basically the 10 days "no touchy" alone thing is ripe ground for developing interpersonal relationships and testers for the newly weds.

Could have a field day with this one and never even go near the hot sex stuff.

How about since the couple basically need some sort of chaperone that this "neutral" person takes a liking to one of them, or even say a couple that chaperone are themselves a bit on the "swinging" side and each tries to seduce the other partner of the newly wed (for a duo or threesome). It might be a test, or a genuine attempt to get them in the sack or whatever.

Lots of room for soul searching, relationship testing etc, etc and in the end, well, does it come out all smelling roses or a steaming pile of whatever?

Great opportunity to get into the minds and thoughts of each of the characters in this "testing time" and make a good story.

Frankly, the whole story should be just about this 10 days and nothing else really, 'cept to tack an ending on.

Good luck!