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writing a scene where the narrator's date challenges another woman to a game of poll. The date says if she wins, the OW has to give N a blow job.

But was does OW get if she wins?

 

[HappySpouse]

writing a scene where the narrator's date challenges another woman to a game of poll. The date says if she wins, the OW has to give N a blow job.

But was does OW get if she wins?

If it were my story they would ask the other woman what she would want as a wager in return, and she would say that the narrator's date has to go down on her. It would come as an unexpected shock for both members of the couple, and then the date would make an impulsive decision at some point to discretely throw the game so the narrator loses. I understand that you are probably wanting to write a blowjob story, so maybe same scenario, but the other woman throws the game. Either way everybody wins.

P.S. let me know if you don't use the first premise because I kind of like it.

 

[Carnevil9]

The Date asks the OW "what do you want if you win?"

The OW just smirks and says, "Oh, we'll think of something when the time comes."

The Date is so confident that she will win that she accepts that. And lives to regret it.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

writing a scene where the narrator's date challenges another woman to a game of poll. The date says if she wins, the OW has to give N a blow job.

But was does OW get if she wins?

A game of poll, played by Gallup rules? Sorry, couldn’t resist.

I think it would depend on whether or not the OW was single or attached. I get the feeling it would be the former, because the presence (even if off-scene) of a boyfriend or husband would toss in a strong cuckhold influence, unless the BJ bet was reciprocal witH OW’s SO, of course, but the entire concept seems to shift either way.

So, OW is single. What’s the date’s potential forfeit?

• N gets a BJ, by date, and OW gets to watch. Potential for jilling voyeurism by OW.
  
• N gets a BJ, by OW, who is enamoured of N and loves giving BJs anyway. Date Is not permitted to do anything but sit there and watch. Potentially nice frustration angle.
  
• N and date get a hall pass from date and sashay out of the place hand-in-hand, leaving date behind. A nice ending could be date then learning that OW is a state pool champion...
  
• Three-way, with OW directing the action. Always popular with readers.
  
• Date has to go down on OW. N gets to watch.

Depending on how kinky you want to get, there are lots of BDSM and fetish ways this could go. Date gets bound and spanked, date has to wear under-clothing vibrator for the rest of the evening. Could be date finally has to agree to N’s long-expressed desire for anal or for date to shave.

Great concept, anyway. Please keep us posted!

 

[Lost_Yonder]

Do the 2 women know each other? Are they good friends who also know what each likes, and dislikes sexually? If so, then if the OW wins, she gets to watch N fuck his date in the ass, which the OW knows she hates.

If they are strangers, then she gets an hour with N to do whatever she wants, which of course makes the date quite jealous. It's obviously win-win for the narrator so he just sits back and enjoys the game.

 

[sirhugs]

If it were my story they would ask the other woman what she would want as a wager in return, and she would say that the narrator's date has to go down on her. It would come as an unexpected shock for both members of the couple, and then the date would make an impulsive decision at some point to discretely throw the game so the narrator loses. I understand that you are probably wanting to write a blowjob story, so maybe same scenario, but the other woman throws the game. Either way everybody wins.

P.S. let me know if you don't use the first premise because I kind of like it.

love this one but went a different way, so hope you write your version.

Mine is not quite any of the suggestions, but they were helpful as inspiration.

I will see how it turns out.

Unusually for me, I don't know what the ending will be yet, but I do know it will be a happy ending.

 

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Free to a good home

Seems I've lost the thread of this one.

does anybody want 800+ words to play with before I just add it to the scrap heap?

I think the problem might be two or three different plots all tangled in one bag... certainly if I'd made it to 1000 words, I'd keep trucking, but I can't get enthused or focused enough to sort them out. the one I like best is not rising to the fore. Time for me to start over. Probably with a fresh idea totally.

 

[mikendel]

She gets to pick the guy of her choice at the place they are playing pool that the GF has to try and seduce while the narrator and OW watch.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

What's poll? I know what a Poll is. It's someone asking a bunch of questions to gather statistics about a subject no one cares about about the time you are sitting down to dinner.

 

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Anybody got some Superglue remover?