Stuck in the snow

[sirhugs]

since my car got stuck in driveway at work (I thought I could follow the tracks of earlier arrivals, but lacked the clearance), and one of the kind folks that pushed me out was a rather cute lass, i realized that this could be a "meet cute" idea- or a way to meet the hot new MILF next door, who gets stuck, then invites her saviour(s) in for hot cocoa?

 

[Carnevil9]

You could title it "Push Comes To Shove."

 

[wheelchairman85]

I have an idea i would like to share if you don't mind its a little nutty though.
i am a young man who unfortunately has to use a wheelchair to get around and i have got stuck in the snow before.
what if instead of a car we have a young man who uses a wheelchair gets stuck in the snow and a neighbor or co-worker helps him out?

 

[Carnevil9]

If any of these scenarios lead to oral sex, the title could be something like, "The Snow Blower."

 

[sirhugs]

I have an idea i would like to share if you don't mind its a little nutty though.
i am a young man who unfortunately has to use a wheelchair to get around and i have got stuck in the snow before.
what if instead of a car we have a young man who uses a wheelchair gets stuck in the snow and a neighbor or co-worker helps him out?

nice niche tale, it would have readers I'm sure.

 

[sirhugs]

If any of these scenarios lead to oral sex, the title could be something like, "The Snow Blower."

roflmao

 

[Reading_is_Sexy]

As often as I have gotten stuck in the snow, I think this could be an excellent story line. Though, from my POV, it is a woman stuck in the snow... and a man "coming to her rescue." I am intrigued!

 

[MichaelWest]

I drafted this as an exercise for myself a few months back, based on my getting my truck stuck in deep wet fresh snow up in the mountains not far from our cabin. The road plows had just stuffed the snow from both sides and as I dug out from my three-quarter turn the front-end loader arrived to dig out the pile and give me more room. As stated herein, it got me to thinking. I will polish it up a touch and get it submitted very soon then.

 

[sirhugs]

I drafted this as an exercise for myself a few months back, based on my getting my truck stuck in deep wet fresh snow up in the mountains not far from our cabin. The road plows had just stuffed the snow from both sides and as I dug out from my three-quarter turn the front-end loader arrived to dig out the pile and give me more room. As stated herein, it got me to thinking. I will polish it up a touch and get it submitted very soon then.

please come back to this thread and post a link when it is up so that I/we don't miss it.

 

[MichaelWest]

I shall do so! Fair warning, it is the damsel in distress, falls for rescurer trope. And I made her pregnant to add more depth of danger to her being stuck on a lone mountain road in the deep falling snow. Mostly exposition of the characters with a dream/fantasy sequence at the end to stir in the romance. Not yet overly explicit or taken straight to the sex, perhaps boring to some. As I said, I was writing as an excercise for me, but I would love to have feedback and entertain.

 

[Reading_is_Sexy]

I shall do so! Fair warning, it is the damsel in distress, falls for rescurer trope. And I made her pregnant to add more depth of danger to her being stuck on a lone mountain road in the deep falling snow. Mostly exposition of the characters with a dream/fantasy sequence at the end to stir in the romance. Not yet overly explicit or taken straight to the sex, perhaps boring to some. As I said, I was writing as an excercise for me, but I would love to have feedback and entertain.

I look forward to reading it, when (and if!) you post it. I sure hope that you do!

 

[MichaelWest]

Thank you for your encouragement! I submitted it earlier this week, it sits in pending. Hopefully it will be approved and I can get your feedback soon.

 

[MichaelWest]

Approved and Ready to Read

My Story about being stuck in the snow is up and ready:

http://www.literotica.com/s/iron-woodsman

I did not have an Editor or even another reader, any feedback is welcome. Also, I do not know if I should continue it or leave it as is. Thank you for your suggestions!

 

[sirhugs]

My Story about being stuck in the snow is up and ready:

http://www.literotica.com/s/iron-woodsman

I did not have an Editor or even another reader, any feedback is welcome. Also, I do not know if I should continue it or leave it as is. Thank you for your suggestions!

I like where you left it off, would prefer a sequel that picks up another day. maybe she is so turned on, that she can't stop thinking about it. I can't help thinking there is a lesbian twist coming though.

I particularly loved how fucking raw her language was.

ps: I forgot I wasn't signed in to the story side on this computer, so I'm the "more please" Anon comment.

 

[MichaelWest]

Thank you Sirhugs. I appreciate any feedback, I am still working hard at my writing as a craft. And I struggle with dialogue, I relly like to know that it is effective at speaking for the character.

Frankly I did not write it with any plot, I do not know where I wanted to go.

I tried to twist up the tropes and cliche stuff, thus the erotic dream, the stranger, the dark stormy night, etc. And I did not want her to be just another "nympho" pregnant wife hoping into bed at first chance. I tried to convey, as a few lovely women related to me, how that time for them gets very emotional and confusing, and to capture the notion of love at first sight, but really bad timing! I just liked how she had tension and conflict.

 

[sirhugs]

Thank you Sirhugs. I appreciate any feedback, I am still working hard at my writing as a craft. And I struggle with dialogue, I relly like to know that it is effective at speaking for the character.

Frankly I did not write it with any plot, I do not know where I wanted to go.

I tried to twist up the tropes and cliche stuff, thus the erotic dream, the stranger, the dark stormy night, etc. And I did not want her to be just another "nympho" pregnant wife hoping into bed at first chance. I tried to convey, as a few lovely women related to me, how that time for them gets very emotional and confusing, and to capture the notion of love at first sight, but really bad timing! I just liked how she had tension and conflict.

I liked it too

 

[MichaelWest]

As said, I am glad you liked it. A writer writes to share with and entertain the reader. I write for me and love to share it.

Perhaps other writers here share my experiences. I do not expect everyone to love what I write or to find it the finest work that has yet been crafted, I am still working of my craft, sometimes struggling to be the best writer I can be, but I am amused at how at least one person seems to really dislike it. Of course they hid behind a nameless email and seemed to vote on the few other and older stories I submitted at 1 or less. It seems sad that they feel compelled to lash out rather then speak. Wait until they get some of my other stuff. I buoy my spirits as I ponder that the artist is remembered long after the critic is forgotten.

 

[sirhugs]

As said, I am glad you liked it. A writer writes to share with and entertain the reader. I write for me and love to share it.

Perhaps other writers here share my experiences. I do not expect everyone to love what I write or to find it the finest work that has yet been crafted, I am still working of my craft, sometimes struggling to be the best writer I can be, but I am amused at how at least one person seems to really dislike it. Of course they hid behind a nameless email and seemed to vote on the few other and older stories I submitted at 1 or less. It seems sad that they feel compelled to lash out rather then speak. Wait until they get some of my other stuff. I buoy my spirits as I ponder that the artist is remembered long after the critic is forgotten.

any story will offend someone. One which implies infidelity, or even fantasies of infidelity, moreso.

 

[MichaelWest]

The more I dwell on my writing the more I find infidelity to be a central theme. It is the greatest conflict of love, has the hardest elements of transformation. That is epic story telling.