Stretch myself a bit...

I'm reading some of your stories now....if you REALLY wanted to stretch you could try something humourous...if you still wanted the emphasis to be on erotica though....maybe a sci fi story?
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:


Can't help but notice I don't have any new feedback... ;)

I've never given feedback....I suppose I could send some...just cause you're special:cool:
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
I checked my e-mail this morning and I had the best feedback from Quasi and Shaq. I love you guys. :)

(Really, I do. I might show up on your doorstep some time.) ;)


See now I'm going to always answer the door wearing nothing but a towel...pity the pizza man...
 
The mat before my front door is actually a trap door. When it's sprung, the person standing on it winds up in the basement, living a re-enactment (okay, maybe an adaptation) of John Fowles "The Collector".

But, I don't mean to scare you away pretty_lil_stranger. I simply adore bubble!
 
gap in your education

"The Collector" is a damn good novel. So is "The French Lieutenant's Woman", both by John Fowles.

If you're filling gaps in your literary education, prettyLS, this wouldn't be a bad place to start.

He collected butterflies, and young women.
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Okay, so...I need an idea. Some of you know me well enough to know what's not my thing, some of you don't. Either way, I'm up for some suggestions.

Sorry I missed this a couple of days ago. Give me 24 hours and I'll come up with a story line.

(I'm making the offer public to force myself to do it.)
 
Re: Re: Stretch myself a bit...

Charm_Brights said:
Give me 24 hours and I'll come up with a story line.

OK try this:-

She is enjoying his company sex if you like, or just romance on a luxury spaceship going from A to B. Why?
The spaceship hits a meteor and starts to lose air. They just manage to get into an escape pod. ie miniature self-contained autopiloted spaceship.
In the pod they have "last act before we die" sex and he is truly stupendous as a lover.
The pod lands safely on a relatively unsophisticated planet with no spaceport (eg Earth 21st century) so they are stuck.
They live together for ages more sex and she wants a family but no luck.
Her race has a strong reproductive drive so it becomes imperative that she has offspring.
Twist ending - he is an android built for the "harem" of a very rich woman and cannot procreate. His semen is very realistic but is entirely sterile. He could make her have kids if she wants, but they would all be female no Y chromasome OR he could manipulate her genes so that a local male Y gives her a male child from whom all the new members of her race on the planet will be descended.
Final sentence: "I wonder if Eve ever hated Adam as much as I hate you?"
 
Then again ...

The inside story of what boadicea got up to with her comrades and what the Romans did to her and her daughters when they caught her might just stretch you in a different direction.

(Sounds painful to me, but you wanted to indulge in auto-stretch-otica!)
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Maybe it'll be a pizza girl and you'll have a great experience that will turn into a really cool story.... ;)

The premise sounds good...I think my first lit submission will be a How To...
 
Stretch yourself

Any decisions? Are you going with Charm's sci-fi story? Something else?

Inquiring minds want to know.
 
Hey, Stranger.
Have you got your Sci-Fi story plotted, yet.
Or did you mean that, about going back to F/F.
No brain stretching at all?

I was trying to work out the general format of a Sci-Fi story, and send it to you, but my example became much too particular. Had I sent it, it would have sounded like I were dictating the story to you. Still, I kinda liked it. Too much so to just dump. So I took a stab at writing it myself.

It is Sci-Fi by plot development, but a Toy story by subject. All I need now is a Title, and a Proofreader.

I have never written, nor expected to write, a Toy story. If I couldn't push you, at least, you pushed me.

Thanks, Stranger. :rose::rose::rose:
 
You may want to READ this Mess2piece before accepting any "Acknowledgements" for it. :(
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Wow...that WOULD be a stretch. I have never even read a Sci-Fi book, if you can believe that.

(Well, I guess I read a few in high school, I can't say that. But it's been a while, and I have probably never read anything that sort of sets the genre....)

As for humor...I'm not funny? :(

;)

I would recon you would do a good job of this subject i hope you do it and i look forward to reading it if you do.
 
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