strange love story

[princessdanae]

Here is a neat story for you guys to play with>
this is a love triangle set in the 16th century
The montgomery's
Elizabeth-16
James-35
Jonathan-21

the duke of york-40
Alexander of Normandy-18

Rhiannon O'Riliey-30-witch woman
Father Connor MacDowell

have fun

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Period pieces from centuries long ago are difficult to do at Lit. All characters in sexual situations must be 18 or older, and it seems one was "over the hill" by 18 back then.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Here is a neat story for you guys to play with>
this is a love triangle set in the 16th century
The montgomery's
Elizabeth-16
James-35
Jonathan-21

the duke of york-40
Alexander of Normandy-18

Rhiannon O'Riliey-30-witch woman
Father Connor MacDowell

have fun

Sounds interesting.
Do you have a setting or settings in mind?
Maybe a ballroom, library, study, master bedroom, and billiard room in a mansion (Gone With The Wind inspired).

 

[snooper]

Period pieces from centuries long ago are difficult to do at Lit. All characters in sexual situations must be 18 or older, and it seems one was "over the hill" by 18 back then.

That's why most of the historical stories read rather oddly on here. I just mentally take everyone's age to be about two-thirds what is stated.

 

[aymanmosstfa]

Here is a neat story for you guys to play with>
this is a love triangle set in the 16th century
The montgomery's
Elizabeth-16
James-35
Jonathan-21

the duke of york-40
Alexander of Normandy-18

Rhiannon O'Riliey-30-witch woman
Father Connor MacDowell

have fun

we wll say that Elizabeth 18 for the rull
so the duke rape Elizabeth and she want revange so she go to the witch who make the duke woman one week every month as punshmint
at same time Elithabeth knew the fun of sex and lern more from James and Jonathan
Alexander want marry fro girl he love so he went to the wtch to help hm she say yes but he must be her sex slave 3 months
Father connor want help Elzabeth but he get love her and t end by he marry her

 

[BedtimeStories77]

That's why most of the historical stories read rather oddly on here. I just mentally take everyone's age to be about two-thirds what is stated.

I know what you mean. I've never tried a period piece myself, and that's one of the reasons why.

 

[princessdanae]

love

one--in those days girls were married off by 18 so she is sixteen, but you can be an adult to play her.

two, we are going to have it start out in her castle, with her father and brother and his wife discussing her future--since she is to be wed to the duke of york. there will be a ball, and she meets the other guy--Alexander and falls in love with him--he is a werewolf, and she does not know this yet. the priest is their ( Elizabeth and Alexander's confidante) and the witch woman is the one to help them with their problem.

hope this helps

 

[BedtimeStories77]

one--in those days girls were married off by 18 so she is sixteen, but you can be an adult to play her.

two, we are going to have it start out in her castle, with her father and brother and his wife discussing her future--since she is to be wed to the duke of york. there will be a ball, and she meets the other guy--Alexander and falls in love with him--he is a werewolf, and she does not know this yet. the priest is their ( Elizabeth and Alexander's confidante) and the witch woman is the one to help them with their problem.

hope this helps

1.) Just so you know, by the rules listed in this site she will have to be 18 regardless of your wishes.

2.) "Play her"? If you're looking for a role play, I suggest one of the two role play boards.

 

[rydia57]

Period pieces from centuries long ago are difficult to do at Lit. All characters in sexual situations must be 18 or older, and it seems one was "over the hill" by 18 back then.

I find a period piece can be really entertaining, and pretty good, as long as you don't get a bunch of history geeks dissecting the story. Just go with the flow. Oh yeah... the age thing.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Oh yeah... the age thing.

That's where I said it could be difficult to write. On one hand, you could never mention any type of age at all... But on the other hand, if you don't describe the "young women" you leave your reader to visualize them 100%. And, as you said, if a history buff wanders into your story for a read... lol

 

[snooper]

... as long as you don't get a bunch of history geeks dissecting the story. ...

The way to avoid that is NOT to use real people, as princessdanae suggested, but to invent minor aristocracy (say at the baronet level) and then to concentrate on the inter-personal relations. That way you only have to avoid anachronisms (eg in the 16th Century they used rush lights, not electric; they ate a lot instead of having central heating, only the Romans had that before the 20th century).

 

[emap]

You missed it snoopy, she said werewolf, and the witch actually is a witch I suppose. Which means fantasy and so you can do most anything, the lights are lightbulbs that turn on with a word say.

 

[snooper]

You missed it snoopy, she said werewolf, and the witch actually is a witch I suppose. Which means fantasy and so you can do most anything, the lights are lightbulbs that turn on with a word say.

Here is a neat story for you guys to play with>
this is a love triangle set in the 16th century
The montgomery's
Elizabeth-16
James-35
Jonathan-21

the duke of york-40
Alexander of Normandy-18

Rhiannon O'Riliey-30-witch woman
Father Connor MacDowell

have fun

I see no werewolf in the original post.
A witch-woman in the 16th century was anyone who was an unmarried woman who had a knowledge of herbal remedies (such as foxglove tea for palpitations of the heart).
The curators at the V&A would give their eye-teeth and both arms for a 16th Century light bulb, even if it didn't still work.

 

[emap]

one--in those days girls were married off by 18 so she is sixteen, but you can be an adult to play her.

two, we are going to have it start out in her castle, with her father and brother and his wife discussing her future--since she is to be wed to the duke of york. there will be a ball, and she meets the other guy--Alexander and falls in love with him--he is a werewolf, and she does not know this yet. the priest is their ( Elizabeth and Alexander's confidante) and the witch woman is the one to help them with their problem.

hope this helps

She said it later silly.

 

[princessdanae]

love

one--okay she is eighteen for the site rules--two yes werewolf--my story my rules. no lightbulbs actually in period for that but yes is a fantasy bit so if some one were to add a vampire to it it would be fun.

hahaha this is fun

 

[BedtimeStories77]

So, are you trying to set up a role play or are you hoping an author writes this?

 

[snooper]

... my story my rules. ...

That's fine if you can find an author who wants to go along somewhat slavishly with your whims. In the trade we call that ghost-writing and the putative owner of the story pays the ghost-writer to do the hard slog. If the idea is put up on here and offered to others, then they will change the bits they want to change from the original idea.

If you move this to the Role Play section you will have to put up with whatever the other role players introduce.

 

[Athena_e19]

The most popular threads in this little humble forum of ours, tend to be the most open ended. Limiting it to specific constraints limits the number of positive and valuable posts you receive in response.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Not to mention, it does limit the number of possible stories that may be submitted to the site due to the original idea.

 

[princessdanae]

love

okay, it is a story idea i want to write and i want to do it as a role play at the moment to get some ideas to help me out.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Here you go.

 

[Deadwood]

I find a period piece can be really entertaining, and pretty good, as long as you don't get a bunch of history geeks dissecting the story. Just go with the flow. Oh yeah... the age thing.

I agree. Where I live there is an old Fort, the original Fort Knox on the banks of the Penobscot River. I did a Historical Fiction piece on it regarding a husband and wife who bondage role-play in the fort late at night, and I had a history buff email me with a mile long explanation why such a granite fort would never exist. I don't think it was a troll, just a history-buff that thought he knew more than he did.

Here is a link to the story I mentioned, and to some pictures of the fort. In my opinion, its a decent story, and a great fort to visit, either in person or in a virtual setting. Either way maybe the pictures will spurn others to write some historical fiction. Its challenging, but fun too.

Fort Knox
Fort Knox Story

 

[princessdanae]

wow that is so cool. I did not expect someone else to have a period piece like that. We can have fun with it on the rp boards and set it up there which i will do later once i fiuge out how to atart it.

 

[princessdanae]

story in srp

hey guys this is going to be started in the SRP board--i will do the role of Elizabeth so i need 3 males ( a duke, a werewolf and a priest) dragonlady has the witch. everyone is to PM me with the first post.