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I've seen this idea many times in the past, but it is still an idea that has a lot of life left in it. I think it's so versatile because it relies mostly upon the character of the person subjected to running the gauntlet home. It's also a storyline where the back story can be as interesting as the main storyline. Who she is, how she got naked, and how she reacts to her situation are just as important as what actually happens to her on the long trek home.
That being said, it is all too easy for these stories to get bogged down in cliche situations. I never want to read another one of those "I'll take a shortcut through the dark, abandoned schoolyard to save two minutes," stories again. We already know there'll be a gang of toughs hanging around after hours, looking for little excitement.
Still, I'm sure there's a lot of mileage left in this old jalopy. I'd be interested to see what some talented writer can do with it.
Take care,
-T
That being said, it is all too easy for these stories to get bogged down in cliche situations. I never want to read another one of those "I'll take a shortcut through the dark, abandoned schoolyard to save two minutes," stories again. We already know there'll be a gang of toughs hanging around after hours, looking for little excitement.
Still, I'm sure there's a lot of mileage left in this old jalopy. I'd be interested to see what some talented writer can do with it.
Take care,
-T
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I have never seen this done, yet it is a major fantasy of mine. I plan on writing something that is close to this.
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Ah, yes...
As you and I both know with the concetp of Eve (Eva in my story) and the Garden of Eden, many themes/ideas can take on many new life forms depending on who the author is writing it! Hell, if 12 of us all picked the same topic/idea and wrote on it, there would be 12 completely different stories!
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As you and I both know with the concetp of Eve (Eva in my story) and the Garden of Eden, many themes/ideas can take on many new life forms depending on who the author is writing it! Hell, if 12 of us all picked the same topic/idea and wrote on it, there would be 12 completely different stories!
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Tatewaki said:
Sounds good....how about
You try to cut through some woods to avoid the public only to stumble naked and helpess into a camp of rough-looking biker's who like this new toy that stumbled in. They toss you back and forth, and talk down to you, humiliating you. Then the biggest catches you and the fun begins.
I have another idea if interested.
You try to cut through some woods to avoid the public only to stumble naked and helpess into a camp of rough-looking biker's who like this new toy that stumbled in. They toss you back and forth, and talk down to you, humiliating you. Then the biggest catches you and the fun begins.
I have another idea if interested.
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Re: How about...
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I think I'm in lust!!
I grab this stupid naked bitch, that had wandered into our camp,away from the gang. I crush her struggling naked body to me, feeling her big soft tits against my chest.
I held her head still, as I invade her sexy mouth with my thick tongue.
I pushed my hand roughly between her thighs feeling the big swell of her pussy mound.
I liked the feel of her soft wet cunt and carried her off, as she struggled to get free, to my tent.
Jesus Christ I was going to enjoy raping this sexy looking broad.
I held her head still, as I invade her sexy mouth with my thick tongue.
I pushed my hand roughly between her thighs feeling the big swell of her pussy mound.
I liked the feel of her soft wet cunt and carried her off, as she struggled to get free, to my tent.
Jesus Christ I was going to enjoy raping this sexy looking broad.
I'm just being opinionated here, but once it turns into a rape/gangbang, the point of the story is irrelevant.
Seems to me it should be a sort of cascading situation thriller comedy.. The arousal comes from the near misses, and how every narrow escape throws her into a more desparate (and rediculous) situation. Sort of like that film "after hours" with that guy trying to get home after hours without any cab fare.
Seems to me it should be a sort of cascading situation thriller comedy.. The arousal comes from the near misses, and how every narrow escape throws her into a more desparate (and rediculous) situation. Sort of like that film "after hours" with that guy trying to get home after hours without any cab fare.
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I'm jotting down some notes for myself baised on this story idea and the bikers in the woods concept, and I have a few bikers named so far. To have more active characters in the story, though, I am willing to take some name ideas of what ya'll think would be good male biker names.
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I like ideas so far. Seems to me the challenge is to write a story that doesn't have to be non-consent.
This premise reminds me of a set of a dozen stories by one author posted in ASSTR. All the women ended up in a Mexican whorehouse. You had to think the author had a real thing for Mexican whorehouses. Or, he had a woman in mind, he would have liked to see end up in one.
But, I digress, I will take on this idea and see if I can write a good story outside of non-consent.
How about, naked woman is befriended by older man, taken in and they have consentual sex?
Alternative two: naked woman strikes a bargain with male college student. She provides lesson in love, he helps her win contest (bet?) that was the reason for her naked condition.
I will post information on this thread about category and posting date.
This premise reminds me of a set of a dozen stories by one author posted in ASSTR. All the women ended up in a Mexican whorehouse. You had to think the author had a real thing for Mexican whorehouses. Or, he had a woman in mind, he would have liked to see end up in one.
But, I digress, I will take on this idea and see if I can write a good story outside of non-consent.
How about, naked woman is befriended by older man, taken in and they have consentual sex?
Alternative two: naked woman strikes a bargain with male college student. She provides lesson in love, he helps her win contest (bet?) that was the reason for her naked condition.
I will post information on this thread about category and posting date.
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Happy Saint Patrick's Day!
As luck would have it, this old thread was posted one year ago today. I had completely forgotten about the story I was working on with this theme until I came across this thread!
Do any of the *newer* authors of Lit have any ideas to give this thread new life?
MechaBlade did you ever write something from this?
As luck would have it, this old thread was posted one year ago today. I had completely forgotten about the story I was working on with this theme until I came across this thread!
Do any of the *newer* authors of Lit have any ideas to give this thread new life?
MechaBlade did you ever write something from this?
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an even easier way to get the girl naked ....
Sarah had sex with Ben (she seduced him) .... even though, Ben has a girlfriend, Sally. Sally is very jealous, so when she finds out about the cheating, she wants revenge on Sarah. Together with some other girls, Sally capture Sarah (I guess shey should blindfold her). Then they drive to a remote area, take all her clothes away and leave her .... so now, Sarah is naked, in the middle of nowhere
Sarah had sex with Ben (she seduced him) .... even though, Ben has a girlfriend, Sally. Sally is very jealous, so when she finds out about the cheating, she wants revenge on Sarah. Together with some other girls, Sally capture Sarah (I guess shey should blindfold her). Then they drive to a remote area, take all her clothes away and leave her .... so now, Sarah is naked, in the middle of nowhere
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msfredm1 said:
how did she get naked?
ideas.
the obvious thing, her boyfriend threw her out after a fight or something. Seems droll, don't you think? is droll a word? did I just invent a word?
anyway, the twist might be that instead of being thrown out like a weak little girl, she's thrown out because he's finally developed a spine and wants her to learn a lesson. she was being all domineering and ordering him about and bitching at him and he's like ENOUGH and throws her out. It's extra humiliating for her, whatever happens, because usually she has such an upper hand.
Okay, another idea. I've heard of sororities and fraternities initiating members by taking them out to the woods and leaving them to find their way back. The case I heard of a girl actually developed frost bite. Nothing so icky in erotica, please. She's taken out, stripped of her clothing, and the members leave her there to find her way back home. Is it day? I think it should be. more humiliating.
Okay along those lines maybe she (girl A) is bisexual and she's interested in this other girl (girl B). she doesn't know that girl B is the girlfriend of a boy she's been screwing. Girl B gets Girl A to go out to the woods, and after seducing her a bit, leaves her there naked as revenge.
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Droll is a word.
Ironically, though, its meaning is humorous and/or having an odd quality.
Ironically, though, its meaning is humorous and/or having an odd quality.
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There are dozens of different ways to get the girl out there and naked.
Revenge: She's a real bitch to everyone. Goes to a party one night and some of her "friends" get even after she drinks to much.
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She was having sex with her b/f out at lovers lane, they got in a fight because he wanted her to try something new, he kicks her out of the car.. NAKED! and leaves her.
Bet: It's a bet that she lost. With this one it could even be her own HUSBAND who puts her into the situation.
Because it's there: She just DOES it!! Has a friend drop her off, just to see if she can. For the challenge.
A sorority hazing as someone else mentioned.
Aftermath: The girl was kidnapped, stripped, abused, raped and dumped naked in the middle of nowhere and now has to get to the authorities to report this crime and get back to her family. You wouldn't even need to write the rape itself, just the aftermath.
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she was skinny dipping in a private pond near her home, when she got out, her clothes were gone. You could even put OTHERS in this way. A b/f, a best friend, etc.
Like I said, there are dozens of ways of getting her out there. Getting her home is the problem.
Like others said, need to stay away from the cliches and you need to make sure the JOURNEY remains the focus of the story. You can't let her get bogged down with ONE person or one event ie: a gang rape. The story becomes about the gang bang and not the journey.
Revenge: She's a real bitch to everyone. Goes to a party one night and some of her "friends" get even after she drinks to much.
or
She was having sex with her b/f out at lovers lane, they got in a fight because he wanted her to try something new, he kicks her out of the car.. NAKED! and leaves her.
Bet: It's a bet that she lost. With this one it could even be her own HUSBAND who puts her into the situation.
Because it's there: She just DOES it!! Has a friend drop her off, just to see if she can. For the challenge.
A sorority hazing as someone else mentioned.
Aftermath: The girl was kidnapped, stripped, abused, raped and dumped naked in the middle of nowhere and now has to get to the authorities to report this crime and get back to her family. You wouldn't even need to write the rape itself, just the aftermath.
or
she was skinny dipping in a private pond near her home, when she got out, her clothes were gone. You could even put OTHERS in this way. A b/f, a best friend, etc.
Like I said, there are dozens of ways of getting her out there. Getting her home is the problem.
Like others said, need to stay away from the cliches and you need to make sure the JOURNEY remains the focus of the story. You can't let her get bogged down with ONE person or one event ie: a gang rape. The story becomes about the gang bang and not the journey.
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Doffy, all this ideas are interesting.
My vote goes out to :"Because it's there"
Maybe she was at a party and drunk to much. Now, she is in a tipsy mood .... (this could include a bet)
Or even better: The girl is sober. In the past, she has done some flashing, like raising her skirt in the middle of a shopping mall. Later, she became even braver .... together with some friends, she visited a shopping mall, wearing only a trenchcoat. She was standing in the middle of the mall, her friends where about 200 yards away from her, with a blanket. Suddenly, the girl dropped her trenchcoat and run the 200 yards towards her friends ..... stark naked ....
But after some time, even that ain't enough for her - she goes for "the big one". He friends drive her to a remote spot about 5 miles away from her home. She gets naked, then her friends leave, with her clothing. The girl walks home right besides the highway .....
The girl is very good when it comes to martial arts, so she can defend herself, in case some guy would try to rape her. She only has to fear the police .....
So maybe she starts to flirt with the passing cars .... one of the cars stops. The driver is a young, good looking guy .... so the girl tells him: "hey stranger, what about some hot sex .... ?"
Or the other version ... the girl could be weak, and on that day, there are many rapists on the road .... (but personally, I prefer the first version)
An alteration of the rape idea could be .... a few days ago, I posted a story idea about a girl who wants to be raped.
So maybe this girl also wants to be raped. To provoke a rapist, she walks around naked - in one of the worst districts of the town ....
My vote goes out to :"Because it's there"
Maybe she was at a party and drunk to much. Now, she is in a tipsy mood .... (this could include a bet)
Or even better: The girl is sober. In the past, she has done some flashing, like raising her skirt in the middle of a shopping mall. Later, she became even braver .... together with some friends, she visited a shopping mall, wearing only a trenchcoat. She was standing in the middle of the mall, her friends where about 200 yards away from her, with a blanket. Suddenly, the girl dropped her trenchcoat and run the 200 yards towards her friends ..... stark naked ....
But after some time, even that ain't enough for her - she goes for "the big one". He friends drive her to a remote spot about 5 miles away from her home. She gets naked, then her friends leave, with her clothing. The girl walks home right besides the highway .....
The girl is very good when it comes to martial arts, so she can defend herself, in case some guy would try to rape her. She only has to fear the police .....
So maybe she starts to flirt with the passing cars .... one of the cars stops. The driver is a young, good looking guy .... so the girl tells him: "hey stranger, what about some hot sex .... ?"
Or the other version ... the girl could be weak, and on that day, there are many rapists on the road .... (but personally, I prefer the first version)
An alteration of the rape idea could be .... a few days ago, I posted a story idea about a girl who wants to be raped.
So maybe this girl also wants to be raped. To provoke a rapist, she walks around naked - in one of the worst districts of the town ....
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I like the sorority initiation idea- lots of ways you could build off that. I agree this idea is ripe, and hope thast several writers take on differing interpretations.
Isn't the 'suddenly nude in public' dream one of the most common? Dreaming of being naked , according to dreammoods.com signifies fear of being found out, activities or misjudgments exposed. Suddenly discovering you are naked signifies vulnerability.
Isn't the 'suddenly nude in public' dream one of the most common? Dreaming of being naked , according to dreammoods.com signifies fear of being found out, activities or misjudgments exposed. Suddenly discovering you are naked signifies vulnerability.
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Has anybody...?
Has anybody seen the movie Run Lola, Run? The movies crazy and it has like three different plot lines based on the effects of seemingly inconsequential descisions. Would be interesting if somebody could incorporate that idea into this.
You have like three outcomes: A.) She gets home safe. B.) Shes hardcore NonConsented by some biker types C.) She joins some kind of crazy Nevada sex-cult. And like minute little descisions can effect the entire outcome of the story.
A little complicated and artsy for a one handed read, but hey, all I said was that it would be interesting.
-Lunar
Has anybody seen the movie Run Lola, Run? The movies crazy and it has like three different plot lines based on the effects of seemingly inconsequential descisions. Would be interesting if somebody could incorporate that idea into this.
You have like three outcomes: A.) She gets home safe. B.) Shes hardcore NonConsented by some biker types C.) She joins some kind of crazy Nevada sex-cult. And like minute little descisions can effect the entire outcome of the story.
A little complicated and artsy for a one handed read, but hey, all I said was that it would be interesting.
-Lunar
