How about a story about sexy straight girl who pretends to come on to not so attractive lesbian as a way of advancement at work.When lesbian character finds out that pretty coworker made a fool of her she decides to confront her.Straight girl then further humilates during private meeting between the two women lesbian slaps her ,clothes ripping catfight takes place.attractive coworker is forced into having very reluctant lesbian sex.In the end No..No..Stop..turns into Yes..Yes..More.,Do You think this would make a good erotic story,,
Straight girl who teases lesbian coworker
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Yeah, real hard to say. I'm not into non-consent or catfights really, so for me it would have to be a real believable switch. Would be interesting to see if you could pull it off. I think I am the other .00001% though. I think more people eat this stuff up.
Do you think the story would read better without catfight?What if two women at moment of confronting each other ,hurl insults , followed by a slap to the face. then situation turns into reluctant sex for the straight girl but then eventually turns into concensual lesbian sex as straight girl realizes it was something she really wanted to happen .
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d16 said:
If you wanted to be a bit more realistic, since I think you're saying the lesbian is the straight girl's boss, she could get her revenge by quietly letting her male subordinates know that she would look the other way if they want to sexually harass the straight girl.
If you're saying that the lesbian is a co-worker, then one possibility would be for the lesbian to act as though she didn't realize the straight girl was pretending, and invite her out to a lesbian bar, where the lesbian and a couple of friends attack the straight girl, hold her down, and force her to eat pussy. After a while they let her go, and the whole bar laughs at her as she runs through the bar and out the door.
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chatbug said:
I like this idea. I think it would make for a fun, if not hot, tale.
Of course, the "harassment" would become more bold after each time...
OK See this is not going to work as an on the job story.What about we use same theme but story takes place at college where straight and very pretty coed teases campus lesbian into doing a long term paper for her.lesbian character does the paper thinking that coed is interested in her .When she finds out she was played for a fool ,an pretty straight student has no intention of having a sexual relationship ...How do you think story line should go forward?
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chatbug said:
I'd prefer a happy ending. Title is " Fake It till you Make it"
after weeks of flirting, the girl realizes she really isn't THAT straight , as she has fallen in love with her intended victim...struggleswith the "ick" factor she associates with lez sex, they live happily ever after.
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d16, I think you have some good ideas. I hope, however, when you actually write up your story that you will use an editor or focus on your punctuation. When submitting stories to lit, even the best ideas will usually recieve low scores if there are obvious grammatical errors.
I agree a happy ending would be more appropriate.sounds more realistic if their was really something to the flirting than just help with a term paper.seems that All of the protests and reluctant sex was only a cover for what straight girl really wanted....talking about writing this story I probably would get an F in spelling and grammer .So its ok with me if one of the more talented writers would like to take a crack at it..good luck
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