Story will need criticism.

[Nesa]

I am currently writing a short story.
I cannot take full credit for the story as it was me and my partner together with another couple that started it.

Each of us would say a few sentances and then leave it for the next person to finnish the story. It started off fairly inoccent but after a little alcohol it became fairly graphic...

We all enjoyed telling the story and I decieded (with the others permission) that i would write it dpwn and share it online. I have read many of the stories on this site foe many years but have never posted anything myself or even joined up...

It isn't finnished yet and i want the others to read through it first before i share it with you all, but i wanted to know if anyone was willing to read through it when its finnished and let me know what they think.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Welcome, Nesa!

Take your request to the "story feedback" forum-- this forum is rather like the coffee shop that we hang around in when we aren't getting much work done

Often, posting just a few paragraphs is best-- and ask if anyone is willing to read the rest for you.

 

[Nesa]

Thank you, i will do that now.