Story to annoy

[Reshbod]

Since all my stories so far involve cheating with the spouse/girlfriend being unaware I get quite a few comments by Anonymous who feel they need to judge the cheater or want her to end up on the street, get an STD etc.

Oddly enough, my gay male and incest stories did not get any such comments.

Anyway, and I hope I don't sound like a Troll, but I want to write something that will annoy as many of these Anonymous folk as possible. So here is my idea.

1. It needs to have adultery with the other spouse unaware and not at all turned on by the idea.

2. The cheater should feel they did nothing wrong.

3. Should involve incest and impregnation. (I haven't had this complaint, but have seen it expressed on here before)

4. It should have several parts where the cheater continues her activities and prospers then ends in a copout ending, such as "it was all just a dream."

These are the main complaints I have received or seen. Are there any other themes or scenarios I can include?

TIA

 

[sunandshadow]

non-con gets a lot of complaints, so if you made your adulterer also a rapist who thinks nothing is wrong with it... drugs is another one people often complain about...

 

[rosco rathbone]

Sounds good to me.

Guys get really tense thinking about some unknown man impregnating their women---and then they have to raise the kid. Put that in.

 

[yevkassem72]

Sounds good to me.

Guys get really tense thinking about some unknown man impregnating their women---and then they have to raise the kid. Put that in.

Understandable pet peeve. Especially with men like me around, who would love to have another man raise the kid. Then again, that's with the other man's consent. I try to avoid sneaking around these days. It's part of my attempt at some kind of ethical self-restraint lately.

 

[snooper]

... Are there any other themes or scenarios I can include?

If you really want abuse, make her white and her spouse black, the impregnation incestuous, and have the white brother sneer at him for being stupid enough to fall for their lies. Another line that gets Anonymous going is to have her say, "What's the use of a dong that big if you don't know how to use it?"

 

[starrkers]

Better yet - white woman, white spouse, black lover.
And if hubby at some point discovers the deceit and takes her back anyway.
That usually gets 'em frothing mad.

 

[snooper]

Better yet - white woman, white spouse, black lover. ...

That does make the incest bit somewhat difficult to believe, though I agree a white girl with a black half-brother is possible or, stretching the meaning of "incest" a little, a black step-brother.

 

[emap]

Well there is a good way to have a white woman black and white guy impregnation slut story with incest, she is dating the black guy and screwing the white guy who is her brother, winds up pregnant and worries what color her child is going to be.

Now if you really want to seriously piss off anonymous, the black guy is submissive to her, calls her miss all the time. Is small in that area, and her brother has a huge cock. She stays with the black guy, has her child that turns out a little darker, but looks exactly like great grandma, and then goes out looking for more guys to have sex with, because the one is small and she just wanted him to have around to take care of her baby.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

story to annoy

Another thing that annoys people is when the husband is hardworking and devoted and the wife seemingly cares nothing for him. I wrote a story where the wife cheated because her husband was constantly working and not paying attention to her. That really brought out the comments like "he's working hard to provide for her...blah...blah...blah." Another story I wrote consisted of a woman having a brief fling with another man -- and I made it clear that the husband had cheated on her numerous times with numerous women through his marriage -- and yet I got comments calling the woman a whore and slut etc.

So to really get anonymous riled up play things up to the extreme. If she's going to cheat make her so carefree and nonchalant also make the husband super devoted. That should get them.

Has anybody else tried this tactic before and did it work?

J.Q.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Since all my stories so far involve cheating with the spouse/girlfriend being unaware I get quite a few comments by Anonymous who feel they need to judge the cheater or want her to end up on the street, get an STD etc.

Oddly enough, my gay male and incest stories did not get any such comments.

Anyway, and I hope I don't sound like a Troll, but I want to write something that will annoy as many of these Anonymous folk as possible. So here is my idea.


TIA

You should read this one. . .

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=301640


The writer did what you wanted to do and did well I think. LOL.

 

[Reshbod]

You should read this one. . .

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=301640


The writer did what you wanted to do and did well I think. LOL.

Thanks for the story RHF, that is kind of what I am aiming for. It will be difficult to incorporate all these themes, but maybe it could become a series similar to Love American Style. I do have a few other stories in the works, but I may put them aside for now to do something with this.

 

[Reshbod]

One more thing, she should lose her virginity to another on her wedding night.

The more I think of this the more bizarre it gets! But with this idea maybe going hog wild is the best option.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

You should read this one. . .

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=301640


The writer did what you wanted to do and did well I think. LOL.

Wow...I did read the story...anonymous went wild on that one. I read the story and was laughing since I could see exactly which buttons the author pushed and kept pushing. They got the results they wanted. Great story.

 

[wehstar]

One more thing, she should lose her virginity to another on her wedding night.

The more I think of this the more bizarre it gets! But with this idea maybe going hog wild is the best option.

The vicar should be the one to do the dirty deed. I'm sure that would go down well.

 

[yevkassem72]

So, the point is to have as many bad cliches as possible, just to annoy people, right? Hmmm...could be fun.

 

[fcdc]

Some more suggestions to annoy everyone, not just the Anonymous Chorus:

Set it in a historical era, but don't bother to do research beyond bodice-rippers. Freely mix social classes and time periods: Stick your Victorian hooker in a wimple, and your poverty-stricken Roman gladiator in a purple, gilt-edged chiton. History is written by the winners, right? Who's to say they didn't look like your story portrays?

Set it in a subject area you know nothing about. This will surely make you stand out. If you are a violinist, write about rocket scientists. If you are a rocket scientist, write about baseball players. If you are a baseball player? Why, violins, of course! (Note: Someone who does any of the above can very well know about any other of the above, but you get the picture.) Don't bother to even hit up Wikipedia to find out how many strings a violin has, how rockets leave the atmosphere, or how many people rounding home plate makes up a grand slam.

Titles are also very important. 'A Hot Story' or perhaps 'The Best Night Ever' are particularly compelling titles that will surely make your readers think you offer something new and interesting!

Stream of consciousness. James Joyce did it very well, so why can't you? Furthermore, you don't need to pay attention to meter, rhyme, symbolism, analogy, or alliteration. James Joyce might have, but you are a new breed of writer, and English classes are for chumps.

Make sure you work in your politics or pet Important Issue into the story. Soapboxing makes the story more poignant and relevant, especially when it is presented through a Mary-Sue mouthpiece. Everyone loves it when the story drops off to have the character rant about the glories of Ayn Rand, Pat Robertson, or Noam Chomsky!

I hope this helps!

 

[FinnMacCool555]

Want to really annoy anonymous? After hubby finds out woman is cheating, he pleads with her to stop, to which she starts calling him repressed and trying to own her. To teach him a lesson, she has her guy on the side rape the husband and make him cum; she then divorces him with video evidence that he "cheated" on her with the other guy, and convinces the judge to ignore her adultery, so she gets all of her hubby's stuff. Story ends with wife congratulated by her friends with lots of "you go girlfriend" comments, and husband, left on the streets, gets gang raped by street toughs and is killed.

 

[snooper]

... Make sure you work in your politics or pet Important Issue ...

Much better to work in unpopular versions of big issues - make your character extreme: anti-abortion, pro-Iraq war, pro-slavery, anti-environment, pro-vivisection, anti-apple pie, child hater, etc ...






Wait a minute ...






Why is your story suddenly about me?

 

[fcdc]

Much better to work in unpopular versions of big issues - make your character extreme: anti-abortion, pro-Iraq war, pro-slavery, anti-environment, pro-vivisection, anti-apple pie, child hater, etc ...

I did mention Ayn Rand!

... would Ann Coulter or Michelle Malkin be better?

 

[yevkassem72]

I had a story with a dystopia where the men rule and women are virtual slaves, just to satirize all of those Femdom dystopias (Shelacta, for example) that seem so commonplace. It also has the potential of annoying people, and I'm not done yet.

I have just started Chapter 1 (what I have so far is just the prologue), which involves a mother and daughter leaving the older woman's husband in France to move to this dystopian, patriarchal America and live there with her nephew.

Wonder how many people are going to be riled up by that!