Story: Terrormoon Adventures (part 1)

[Gothic Shujin]

I had begun a story on chyoo a few years ago, which was a slow going labor of love. As much as I added, its still only 9 threads deep but I think anyone looking for a fantasy style choose your own adventure/sexual role playing game will be surprised how much customization and depth Ive squeezed in there so far.

I'm finally posting here after so long cause Ive dusted off my original idea and would like some help fleshing it out.

While my original idea is sort of a difficult one but I think most of you would agree that continuity in this kind of thread would go a long way to making it more immersive and enjoyable...

So while adding threads if you can keep with whatever happened or was acquired previously, that would be great. Also I'm trying to have some chains end in death. Not too many, just some choices (again like those old books).

Other than that, I hope you enjoy and I hope some of you decide to add to it, Ive gotten myself too deep in it to stop now, but I just can't write it all myself, besides I'm sure the story will benefit from some other kinds of writing styles.

Terrormoon Adventures part 1

 

[Gothic Shujin]

Oh yes and a quick note that i forgot to mention.

Some threads have continuances that say "coming soon" with a ? as the continuing question.

I'd appreciate it if those were left alone. I had done that before I knew where I was leaving things and got ahead of myself. Instead of leaving threads locked I did that and figured I'd edit them later, but they can no longer be edited so I'll be simply fixing them as Ive done with some of the others... you'll see once you get to one.

Thanx.

 

[moonblack]

Actually, you CAN edit them. BUT you MUST log-in as Gothic Shujin and NOT as gothic shujin! Yes, capitalization matters when editing threads. Threads added by "Gothic Shujin" can only be editted by "Gothic Shujin"; any other spelling of the name will not work. Threads added by "gothic shujin" can only be editted by "gothic shujin". If you log as "Gothic shujin" you will not be able to edit any threads you added as "Gothic Shujin" or"gothic shujin". Sounds rather complicated, but it can't be helped.

 

[Gothic Shujin]

Touche' I had no idea the grammar was that important.

Just logged in with the correct caps and as you mentioned, i can edit them. That helps a lot, thanx for that.

I still need help writing however

Later.