Story Revised!

Trombonus

A bit older, a lot wiser.
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Ok, here's the re-edited version of my first story. Hope this is better! Tell me what you think.



The following story is a work of fiction. The characters and storylines are completely made up by the author, and any similarity to real life people or situations is purely coincidental.

The Sorority House Ch. 1

“Get out of here!” I snapped out of my trance and quickly stepped outside the room. I couldn’t believe what I just saw. It was the kind of thing guys dreamed of. Two girls pleasuring each other, it was unbelievable. It was funny though. Lisa had never struck me as a lesbian. Everyone knew Jenny was a wild girl that swung both ways, but Lisa was quiet and sweet. For all I knew she was still a virgin. It was strange seeing her like this.

I didn’t really know what to do now. Do I wait and apologize, or do I leave and try and mend bridges the next day? I decided to stay. Surely they’d understand that I’d only been thinking of their own safety. They’d probably see my deed as heroic, and want to thank me for being so concerned about them. That, and give me a million dollars for being the greatest hockey player on the planet. I was in trouble, no doubt about it, but I couldn’t just leave and pretend nothing happened. I had to make up for my stupidity, and at the very least apologize for my mistake. I went downstairs and waited in the lounge for them. How did it come to this? I thought about what had happened, and how I was ever going to get out of this mess when I heard the two girls walking down the stairs.

“Alright James, you’ve got a hell of a lot of explaining to do.” Jenny said, glaring at me, mad as hell.

“Well, first I just want you guys to know how truly sorry I am. I should have thought things through more, but the truth is I thought you guys were in danger. I was walking by the house and saw that the door was left wide open.”

“Oh, I understand.” Lisa said. “That was me. I had a lot in my arms when I got home tonight, and I couldn’t shut the door. I went upstairs to put my stuff down and started talking to Jenny and forgot to close the door.”

“That doesn’t excuse him from bursting into our room like some nut job off the street.”

“Well, when I saw the door open, I thought there might have been a break in, so I decided to check to see if everything was alright. That’s when I heard the moaning, and I was afraid one of you girls might have been attacked. So that’s when I burst in on you. I’m really, really sorry.”

“I think he’s telling the truth, Jen,” said Lisa.

“Yeah well you would, but that doesn’t change the fact that he came in here, bust in on us and saw us both naked. You can’t do something like that and expect to get away with it. However, I think I know a way you can make it up to us.”

“Yeah sure, I’ll do anything you guys want.” I said recklessly. I was afraid that Jenny was going to call the cops on me, so I didn’t want to push my luck.

“Just tell me what you want me to do and I’ll do it.”

“That’s good, I like that attitude,” Jenny replied. “It’s quite simple really. What I want you to do is take your clothes off.”

“Wait, what?” I asked confused.

“Jenny what are you thinking? Can’t we just let it go?” said Lisa.

“Hey, it’s only fair. He got to see us; we should be allowed to see him. Of course, we could just call the cops.”

“No, no, no, that won’t be necessary, I’ll do it.” I said, nervous as hell. Like I said before, I’m not bad looking, but I am rather self-conscious, and this situation was awkward enough as it was. Still, I figured getting naked was better than going to jail. I looked at Lisa. She obviously wasn’t very comfortable with the prospect of seeing me naked. I started to think that maybe she was a lesbian, and seeing a guy naked wasn’t something she wanted to see. Jenny obviously noticed too, and she took a second to step over to where she was sitting.

“You know, if you don’t want to see this you don’t have to.” Jenny leaned in close and whispered something in Lisa’s ear. I couldn’t hear what she said, but it looked like she’d convinced Lisa to stay, although it seemed she had started to blush. I knew that couldn’t have meant anything good for me, but I didn’t see much choice in the matter.

“Why don’t we head up to the bedroom?” Jenny suggested. We all got up and headed for the bedroom. Jenny had a devious smile on her face, but Lisa and I were both visibly nervous. I glanced at her for a sec, but she looked away as soon as I did. I had known her long enough to know that when she did that it was a sure sign that something was bothering her, or that she was hiding something from me. I didn’t know what it was but I had a feeling it had something to do with whatever Jenny had whispered to her. Well whatever it was I had other things to worry about at that moment.

We got to the bedroom and Jenny shut the door behind us, locking it this time. The girls sat in the bed while I just stood there.

“Well, go ahead, take it off baby,” Jenny said with a smirk on her face. Lisa wasn’t enjoying this as much as Jenny was, but she wasn’t leaving. I took my shirt off first and tossed it on the floor. I took my shoes and socks off, and stood back up. I started to undo my jeans, but looked up at Jenny.

“Don’t stop now babe, let’s see what you’ve got.”

I unzipped my pants and let them fall to the floor, leaving me in my boxers, the bulge in my pants very noticeable.

“Mmm, now that’s what I’m talking about, but you’re not done yet. Remember, we get to see everything.” Jenny bit her upper lip and flipped a loosely lying strand of her long, shoulder-length red hair behind her ear.

I pulled my boxers down and freed my rock hard 8 inch cock from its confines.

“Holy crap, you’ve been holding out on us!” Jenny exclaimed, a big grin on her face. “Now that’s what I call a cock! What do you think Lisa?”

She didn’t answer. She just kind of stared with her mouth ajar. It was the same kind of look I had when I saw the two of them together.

“You might want to close your mouth hon; you’ll let a fly in,” Jenny said chuckling. Lisa snapped out of it blushing instantly.

“Ok you’ve seen me naked; can I put my clothes back on now?” I asked.

“Not so fast, I have a few questions for you,” Jenny replied, a mischievous grin crossing her lips.

“What are you doing Jen?” asked Lisa.

“Just trust me ok,” she replied. “So James, I know you said you barged in on us ‘cause you thought we were being attacked, but if that’s the case, why did you just stand there gawking at us?”

“Well, I was shocked, I wasn’t sure what to do,” I replied honestly.

“Ok, I can believe that, but tell me, did you like what you saw?”

That was an awkward question. I mean, of course I liked what I saw. They were both incredibly beautiful, and what guy wouldn’t like to see two girls making love to each other. But given the current circumstances, I thought it might be a bad idea to just come out and say so.

“Is this going somewhere?” I asked, trying to avoid answering it.

“Just answer the question,” Jenny retorted, not going for it.

“Yeah, ok. Of course I did, you two are beautiful women,” I said, finally giving in.

“Aww, you think we’re beautiful?” Jenny asked, smiling mischievously.

“Yes, I do. Very much so.” I said, surprised by my boldness. I looked at Lisa hoping she would know I was telling the truth. A faint smile lit her face, but her face got even redder.

“I bet you’d like to see us naked again huh.” Jenny’s last question took me by surprise. I just kind of stuttered, not able to articulate an answer. Heck I didn’t even know what the answer was.

“You know, not only did you barge in on us and see us both naked, but you interrupted our fun as well.” She got up and moved over to me. “But you know, I think I know a way you can make it up to us,” She said grinning as she got right up to me. I backed up to the wall and she pressed herself right up to me. She grinned and grabbed my still rock hard cock and began to stroke it. I was frozen with shock as she leaned in to kiss me, forcing her tongue into my mouth.

“What are you doing!?!” exclaimed Lisa, jumping out of her seat.

“I’m having some fun, what does it look like I’m doing,” she replied. “Don’t tell me you don’t want to either, you’re the one who’s always telling me how much you like him and how much you want to be with him.”

“JENNY!” Lisa yelled. “How could you tell him that!?!”

“Look, everyone knows you two like each other. It seems the only ones that don’t know are the two of you, so just get over the whole shy thing and go for it already, before we all grow old.”

“If you know we like each other then why are you making out with him and grabbing his cock?”

“Like I said, he ruined our fun, and I’m still horny as hell. But you know… it would be better if you joined in with us. Come on, what do you say sweetie?” She left me and went over to Lisa, holding her hands. She pulled her towards me, kissing her softly on the lips. Jenny moved Lisa’s long blonde hair out of the way as she left Lisa’s lived and started kissing her neck. Lisa closed her eyes, allowing herself to enjoy Jenny’s kisses. I stood there watching as Lisa melted from the kisses to her neck. Obviously that was a sensitive spot for her as she seemingly lost all control. Jenny continued to kiss her for a while before moving away and looking at her.

“I think you should kiss him now,” she said smiling, pushing Lisa into my arms. We looked deep into each other’s eyes, seeing the feelings that we had both kept hidden welling up to the surface. I pulled her into me and kissed her deeply, allowing ourselves to melt into each other. I forgot everything in that moment, where I was, what I had been doing. Holding Lisa in my arms was all that mattered now. Our kiss lasted several moments. When we finally pulled away from each other we just stood there in each other’s arms, looking into each other.

In their hurry, the girls had not put on any underwear, as I could see that both girls’ nipples were rock hard, and poking out through their shirts. I put my hands on Lisa’s breasts, gently rubbing and squeezing them through her shirt. She let out a soft moan as I focused on her firm round breasts. I slipped my hands under her shirt, feeling the soft flesh of her breasts. She continued to moan as she lifted her shirt off of her body. We kissed deeply again as I pulled her into me, our bodies touching flesh to flesh. Her hands reached down to grab my ass, as I began kissing her neck. She started to moan again as I continued to kiss her neck and rub her breasts. She reached down, grabbed my cock and began to stroke it as I kissed my way down to her breasts. I cupped her breast in my hand and took her nipple into my mouth, gently sucking on it. Lisa’s moans intensified as I continued to suck on her breasts, alternating between each one.

She ran her hand through my hair, and cupped her other hand under my chin, pulling me to her mouth as she kissed me again. She looked at me for a second before she started kissing my chest. She kissed all the way down my chest and stomach until she got to my cock. As she did this I noticed that Jenny had taken her clothes off and was sitting in the corner fingering herself, her moans starting to fill the room. It only served to turn me on more as I returned my focus to Lisa, who was sucking my cock with a fervent passion. She ran her tongue up and down my shaft, taking time to lick and suck on my balls as well as she worked my cock. She continued to suck on my cock for a while before I got her on her feet.

We moved over to the bed and I sat her down, kneeling down in front of her. I kissed her stomach as I undid the clasp on her jeans, unzipping them and slipping them down her legs and tossing them aside. I kissed the inside of her thigh slowly, softly, as she shuddered in anticipation. I had never given oral sex before. It scared me a little, but all that anxiety disappeared in front of Lisa. It just didn’t matter anymore. All I cared about was making love to Lisa, and taking care of her the best that I could.

I looked at her, and she smiled at me. She spread her legs, and I moved in, kissing her clit. Her clean-shaven pussy was already glistening with her juices, as I sucked and licked her clit. She let out a loud moan as she clutched my head, pushing me into her sex. I spread the lips of her pussy and stuck my tongue inside of her, licking all around, lapping up all her sweet juices. Her moans were getting louder, and she started grinding her crotch against my face as she reached climax, her orgasm exploding through her body. She was breathing heavily, all the energy had left her body as she recovered from the most explosive orgasm she had ever had. I lay on the bed next to her, holding her in my arms. Lisa leaned in and kissed me again, tasting her own juices on my lips.

She reached down and began to stroke my cock as she pulled away from the kiss, looking at me. “I want you inside me James. Fill me up with your hard cock.” I was surprised at her forwardness, but who was I to deny her request. She lay flat on her back as I climbed on top of her. I grabbed my cock and ran the head along the folds of her pussy, getting it nice and lubricated before sliding inside of her. Not that I really needed to, she was so wet I doubt I would have had any problems entering her, even with the size of my cock. As I was about to insert my cock inside her, Jenny, who was still masturbating in the corner, got up and touched my shoulder.

“Fuck her good alright; I want her first time to be special.”

“Wait, you mean you’re…”

“A virgin,” Lisa said.

“Are you sure you want me to do this?” I said concerned, not really wanting to take advantage of her.

“I’ve never been more sure of anything in my life,” she said kissing me softly on the lips, and caressing my cheek. We’ve been friends for a long time, and I’ve always had strong feelings for you. I can’t think of anyone I would rather give my virginity to. I love you, James.” Tears flowed down her cheek as she poured her heart out to me. I had never known she felt so strongly about me. I wish I had, I felt the same way about her.

“I love you too Lisa. Always have, always will.” I said, wiping the tears from her cheek and kissing her.

Jenny smiled, as if she’d planned this from the start. “I think I’ll leave you too lovebirds alone for a while. Don’t have too much fun, ok?.”

“What about you? I thought you wanted to be here for my first time.” Lisa called out to Jenny, almost wanting her to stay.

“I think you guys can handle things from here. Besides, you’ve got me so horny I need to spend some quality time with Mr. Vibrator. Enjoy yourselves!”

She left the room, shutting the door behind her, leaving the two of us alone together. “Are you ready?” I asked, sensing she’d been a bit apprehensive about Jenny’s departure.

“Definitely. I’ve wanted this for a long time now. I can’t wait any longer. Make love to me James. Make me a woman.”

I positioned my cock at the entrance to her pussy, which was literally dripping in anticipation. “This is probably going to hurt, but I’ll try and be as gentle as possible.” She nodded and braced herself as I slipped the head of my cock inside of her, slipping it in and out of her a few times so she could get used to it. She let out a few soft moans, as I gradually moved inside of her a little. Wanting to make it as quick as possible, I thrust the rest of my cock deep inside of her. She let out a yelp of and winced in pain as her hymen broke. I stayed put, making sure not to move so that she could adjust to the pain. “Are you ok?”

“I think so; it’s not hurting as bad now. I think it’s ok to go on.” I started to thrust inside of her slowly. Lisa was still wincing a little bit, but I could tell it didn’t hurt as much as it initially did. Soon she was moaning, and gyrating along with my cock. Her pussy was so tight it felt like it had a vice grip on my cock. The pleasure I was feeling was more intense than anything I’d felt before. I’d only ever had sex with Tracy before, and that was nothing like this. It felt like our bodies were one and that we had connected in such a deep way that nothing else mattered but this moment. Lisa was starting to lose control of her body as she was almost crossing the line between moaning and screaming.

“Oh God James it feels sooooo good.”

She was digging her nails into my back as she was nearing another orgasm.

“Oh God I’m cumming, I’m cumming. Oh yes, YES, YES!!!”

I continued to thrust into her, faster as her climax reached its peak, producing an orgasm even more explosive than her first. She screamed at the top of her lungs as she shook from the violence of her orgasm. I continued to thrust, although a bit slower now to keep my stamina up. Lisa was exhausted, panting heavily, and I was getting a little tired too. Her latest orgasm took a lot out of her, and I caressed her cheek and smiled at her. She looked into my eyes and smiled at me, tears forming in her eyes.

“Thank you.” She whispered to me, a tear sliding down her cheek. She put her arms around my neck and pulled me down to her, kissing me. I smiled softly at her as I continued to thrust inside of her, but I was starting to get really tired now. I had a feeling that I wasn’t going to get the release I desired, but that didn’t matter to me. Lisa’s first time had been a wonderful experience for her, and that made me happier than I’d ever thought possible. I finally had to stop and pull out of her. I lay down on my back and she cuddled up next to me, resting her head on my chest.

“I’m sorry James,” She said sounding upset.

“For what?” I asked concerned. “You don’t regret us having sex do you?”

“Oh God, no. That was the most amazing experience of my life. I’m just sorry I couldn’t make you cum.”

“Heh, is that all?” I said, chuckling. “It’s nothing to be upset about, I just take a little longer, that’s all. Besides, tonight wasn’t about me at all. Tonight was all about you and making this experience memorable for you. I hope I didn’t disappoint.”

“No, you were wonderful. I never want this moment to end. I’ve never felt so loved.”

“I’ve never loved someone as much as I love you. And don’t worry, I’m sure you’ll have plenty of other opportunities to make me cum,” I said chuckling.

“Heh heh, yeah, but maybe we could go on a date next time.”

“Lisa, nothing would make me happier.” We kissed each other again, and held each other in our arms until we fell asleep. It was a night neither of us would ever forget.
 
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