Story proposal: Telugu woman loses her virginity to Italian stud (EROTICA FROM INDIA)

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Contents

• Disclaimer
• Introduction
• Characters
  • protagonists
    • female protagonist
    • male protagonist
  • minor characters
• story components
  • 'major' components
    • Main sex scene
      • additional notes
    • 'Day after' scene
      • additional notes
  • 'minor' components

 

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Disclaimer:
The events depicted in this story are entirely fictional.

 

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Introduction:

• Basic plot: Shilpa, 19-year-old woman from India, gets seduced by Rocco Siffredi (fictionalised version of real-life Italian pornographic actor Rocco Siffredi).

• Losing her virginity is a physically intense experience for her, and the emotional impact is perhaps even more intense/heavy.

• Very tame, heterosexual, vanilla erotica.

• Themes:
  • “Ethnic/interracial erotica” (Italian Caucasian man, woman from India)
  • “Losing her virginity” (“first-time” sex)
  • “Sex with a stranger”

• Work in progress (some details may change).

• Input that I require:
  • Advice/suggestions re:
    • Believability
    • Realism, i.e.,
      • Scene/setting/location details
      • Costume details
      • Language details
      • “Timeline” detail/believability
      • ***Choreography of sex acts***
    • “Emotional impact”
    • General reader feedback

 

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Protagonists

• Female protagonist: Shilpa
• Male protagonist: Rocco Siffredi

 

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Female protagonist: Shilpa

• Date of birth: Feb 1982
• University student, studying computer science and business studies at a fictional university in the United Kingdom
• Originally from Hyderabad in Southern India
• Hindu
• An attractive young woman.
• Attractive facial features
• She’s had a good few admirers, but even if any of them has tried dropping hints to her about wanting to ask her out, *she* doesn’t even seem to have responded directly at all, rather, tactfully deflecting such questions away, or perhaps she is unaware of her own attractiveness…
• Approximately 5’6”
• Slender yet appropriately curvaceous figure
• Modest, dignified, richly, colourfully, gloriously feminine dress sense. Often – but not always – wears Indian-style clothes – churidar, etc. Sometimes also wears more typical “western”-style clothes – T-shirt and trousers, etc., but always modest, e.g., she would definitely not be seen in public wearing, e.g., a mini-skirt, etc. Wears elegant but not flashy jewellery. Often eye-liner and rich red lipstick. Hair often tied back in a plait.
• Sweet-sounding voice, beautiful singer, trained in ‘Carnatic’ music.
• Speaks Telugu and fluent English but with Southern Indian accent, her speech often has a ‘sing-song’ inflection and intonation.
• From a middle-class background, moderately religious, raised with fairly conservative social and cultural values – including grace, modesty, and chastity. Attends Hindu prayer services fairly regularly. At times also sings hymns at smaller, private worship events, where her singing is widely admired.
• Personality traits: Kind, friendly, sociable, personable, cheerful, joyful, sensitive, generous – thoroughly, wonderfully, delightfully unselfish with a touch of sweet-natured naivety
• Sexually inexperienced – virgin. Has never had any kind of romantic relationship.
• Represents gentleness, femininity, and purity.

 

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Male protagonist: Rocco Siffredi

• Fictionalised version of the real-life Italian pornographic actor Rocco Siffredi.
• Date of birth: 04 May 1964
• From Ortona Mare, Italy
• 6’3”
• Very well-endowed
• Very high sex drive, a ferocious libido
• Highly sexually experienced

 

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Minor characters:

• Arjun Hariprasad: Shilpa's friend, fellow university student, who, in effect, introduces Shilpa and Rocco to each other
• Gopal and Lakshmi: Shilpa's parents

 

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Major story components:
The story has two ‘major’ components, and a number of ‘minor’ components

• ‘Major’ components:
  • Main sex scene (14 December 2001)
  • ‘Day after’ scene (15 December 2001)
• 'Minor' components:
  • multiple other scenes, which will serve to illustrate the characters' personalities and backstories

 

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Main sex scene (14 December 2001)

• main ‘substance’ of story – depicts all the sex acts
• location: social lounge at university halls of residence

Shilpa is organising a Christmas party for her fellow students

• To be held in the social lounge at the university halls of residence
• Shilpa has to ‘tidy up’ and decorate this lounge before the party
  • She requests her friend Arjun to help her, but he is busy
    • Sends his friend Rocco Siffredi, who happens to be visiting Arjun, to go and help Shilpa
• Rocco joins Shilpa, they introduce themselves to each other, make some small talk
• Mutual attraction and sexual tension develops
• Rocco initiates sex
• Shilpa is deeply nervous, shy, and hesitant, but ultimately submissive
  • Start with simple kissing and caressing
  • Progressively, sex acts become more ‘intimate’
    • Cunnilingus, then
    • Anal sex
    • Vaginal sex – in multiple positions – ‘missionary’, ‘doggy-style’, ‘woman on top’, etc.
• When she is first penetrated, it is painful, Rocco withdraws, performs oral sex on her, then penetrates again, slowly
• Party timings – perhaps from 19:00 – 00:00.
• Rocco and Shilpa have sex both *before* and *after* the party.

 

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‘Day after’ scene (15 December 2001) – Shilpa experiencing tiredness, aches and pains, post-coital dysphoria.

• Purpose of this scene is to illustrate how ‘intense’ the sex was, and the emotional effect it has had on Shilpa.
• She’s at home, with her parents. Perhaps her mother senses that ‘something’ has happened, and perhaps she even intuits that Shilpa has had a sexual encounter with someone. However, neither of them is able to state this openly.
• Shilpa experiences a sense of sadness, perhaps for reasons even she doesn’t fully understand.

 

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‘Minor’ components:

• A few scenes that depict the characters’ behaviour in other social settings – to illustrate their personality traits –
  • Scenes to depict Shilpa’s kind, gentle, and sensitive nature,
    • To depict her as a very ‘wholesome’ person
  • Scenes to depict Rocco’s insatiable libido, and his ability to satisfy women sexually, his tendency to put immense energy into his sexual encounters.
• Am yet to decide how best to construct these scenes.

 

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Main sex scene (14 December 2001):

Additional notes:

• Story “narration” has to switch between the 14th and the 15th a number of times.
• Both “prologue” and “epilogue” are on 15 Dec ’01.
• Depiction of 14 December 2001 is punctuated by at least six ‘flash-forwards’ to 15 Dec ’01, so that’s a total of 8 views of 15 Dec ’01, including prologue and epilogue, so it has to be really fleshed out properly.

14 December 2001
I need you to check this scene and tell me if it makes sense. I know it needs more work.

• around 14:30, Shilpa leaves home, telling her mother she is going to start making arrangements for the evening’s student Christmas party.
• Shilpa picks up keys to Ceirios block social lounge from main accommodation manager’s office, around 15:00
• She gets to Ceirios lounge around 15:10, finds it very untidy
• Rings her friend Arjun, who stays in the nearby Onnen block.
• Unbeknownst to Shilpa, Arjun has had a crush on her for a while.
• Arjun is a medical student, he is busy with course-related work, he is unable to join Shilpa
  • Arjun himself has a visitor, an old acquaintance, Rocco Siffredi, visiting him shortly.
  • Arjun welcomes Rocco, then asks Rocco if he can go over to assist Shilpa
    • *** I understand this seems a little difficult to believe – I’m not sure in real-life Arjun would send a visiting friend to assist another friend, but this was the best ‘set-up’ I could come up with, for Shilpa and Rocco to meet.***
• Rocco gets to Ceirios lounge around 15:30.
• Rocco and Shilpa introduce themselves to each other.
• They make small talk.
  • they are attracted to each other [we’ll expand on this further]
• they do some cleaning and decoration.

***Now we get to the sex acts*** around 16:30

• Rocco starts by kissing Shilpa’s face, her hands.
• Then starts kissing her feet, up her legs.
• then, kissing her stomach
• then, removes her panties, performs cunnilingus, brings her to her first ever orgasm
• next would be anal sex – they try penetration – Rocco seated on chair, Shilpa sitting on his lap, but Shilpa finds it painful, so Rocco goes back to kissing her stomach, performs cunnilingus on her again, digitally penetrating her anus.
• they find some kind of lubricant, Rocco penetrates her anally, slowly, doesn’t thrust, just slow, full penetration, while manually stimulating her clitoris, kissing her lips, kissing her neck. He is gentle, holds her ‘snugly’, his arms around her. Anal penetration is painful for her, even with lubricant, but they do it nice and slow. With his fingers on her clitoris, he brings her to orgasm.
• then they try vaginal penetration, this is also difficult and painful for her, so he stops
• kisses her stomach again, performs cunnilingus again.
• They get dressed.

***Party starts around 19:00*** – guests arrive around 19:45.

• Party continues until around 00:00, at which time, all guests have left.

***They tidy up after all the guests***, then

• Rocco again penetrates her anally, it’s painful for her again, but he is gentle, and this time, it is more pleasurable for Shilpa, brings her to orgasm again with fingers on clitoris.
• Not only the penetration, but the tenderness in his kissing, the way he holds her, arms around her, etc., feels so intimate and affectionate for Shilpa.
• Then steps to the bathroom to wash himself, before penetrating her vaginally.
• kisses her stomach before penetrating her vaginally.
• again, a little painful for her, but this time, more pleasurable.
• Stops before bringing her to orgasm, performs cunnilingus
• vaginal penetration, this time brings her to orgasm (missionary position)
• vaginal penetration in ‘doggy-style’ position, brings her to orgasm again
• vaginal penetration in seated ‘woman on top’ position (i.e., Rocco sitting on chair, Shilpa seated on his lap – facing him)
  • removes her brassiere, kisses her breasts, while still penetrating her vaginally, brings her to orgasm
• They finish, get dressed and leave

• During the sex acts, Rocco and Shilpa will be talking about computer programming - Shilpa is studying Computer Science and Business Studies, Rocco has experience of computer programming, Shilpa is preparing for some computer science project/programming contest/competition of some kind, Rocco gives her his advice
• The scene needs more work.
• Does the sex seem believable?
• Do the timings seem believable?
• Has Rocco done enough for Shilpa to feel exhausted the next day?
  • I want Shilpa to feel exhausted because of the intensity of the sex, not because of the lack of sleep…

 

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‘Day after’ scene (15 December 2001) – Shilpa experiencing tiredness, aches and pains, post-coital dysphoria.

Additional notes:
In many respects, Shilpa remains the same throughout.

• She still cares deeply about chastity.
• Just because she's lost her virginity, she's *not* going to be more sexually active - far from it.
• She's still a gentle, unselfish, sensitive, caring person.
• But for a few days, maybe she just needs to be alone.
  • Even I, as *the writer who is creating this character*, don't fully understand why
  • but - even though I'm a man, and can't claim to know much about women's psychology, etc., my 'instincts' tell me that this young woman is going to be emotionally 'raw' for a few days.
• one of the thoughts/concerns that might go through her mind is, in her community, pre-marital sex would be regarded as *scandalous*, would be *ruinous* not just to her own reputation but to her family’s reputation,
  • perhaps, at one point, she feels a profound sense of guilt, she might even have a brief moment where she curses herself for what she has done,
  • but then realises, she doesn’t really regret it, it was a beautiful experience
• she actually has no reason to worry about reputational damage, no-one will know what she did.

I think her mother will also be shocked when she realises, but neither mother, nor daughter can bear to say it out aloud. Perhaps both women have a moment where they look at each other with tears in their eyes when her mother ‘figures out’ what has happened, but cannot bring herself to ask her daughter the question.

I feel I may have to depict the whole ‘day after’, i.e., the day in its entirety, as Shilpa goes about her daily routine, or tries to, but almost every moment of that day is consumed by the physical and emotional impact of the previous day. Maybe this state of mind even goes on for a few days.

This is important – the whole point of this story is not simply that ‘a man and a woman had sex’, it’s about how powerful and intense Rocco’s virility is, that even a young woman raised in a conservative Telugu Hindu cultural setting, with the value of chastity, is unable to resist him, and the impact it leaves on her.

I think it would take some time for her mother – Lakshmi – to "figure out" what has happened.

• She would notice that Shilpa's behaviour was 'different', but initially, she probably wouldn't understand why.
• She would notice several little things different – maybe her tiredness, absent-mindedness, the way she walks, etc.
  • Anything else?
• It might take Lakshmi until the afternoon, or perhaps even the evening, before she finally works it out.
• She is shocked by the realisation that her daughter has lost her virginity
  • Maybe, at that moment of realisation:
    • the two women look at each other,
    • Lakshmi looking utterly shocked for several moments,
    • Shilpa with a look of devastation on her face,
    • both of them welling up for several moments,
    • before Shilpa rushes into her mother’s arms, and
    • Lakshmi comforts her, gently whispering “it’s alright, alright”,
    • they *still* can’t say it out loud…
    • at this point Shilpa maybe begins to sob, and Lakshmi hugs her tight, and kisses her forehead, comforting her.

So, to say this *again*, this ‘day after’ scene is important...

• without the ‘day after’ scene, the sex scenes simply wouldn’t have enough ‘weight’
• the whole point of this story is *not* simply that ‘a man and a woman had sex’,
• it’s about *how powerful and intense Rocco’s virility is*, that even a young woman raised in a conservative Telugu Hindu cultural setting, with the value of chastity, is unable to resist him, and the impact it leaves on her.

 

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