Story on First Real Life Experience

[BeachBoi408]

For some reason, I felt compelled to write a story about my first real life experience. I am not sure it is good enough to publish but it helped me process things. It is obviously a story in the first time category and by name you can figure out it involves me with a man.

I could not figure out how to contact an editor from my member page. I would appreciate any editor who is willing to provide constructive criticism.

Thank you!

 

[alohadave]

If you are using this list: https://www.literotica.com/my/#/editors/editors, click on the name of the editor you want to contact, and there is a box labeled contact that you can use to send them a message.

 

[NickiMWF]

Dave,

Thank you for reading my post and your response. I would appreciate any ideas on finding the right editor for my story. Aloha!

 

[BeachBoi408]

Dave,

Thank you for reading my post and your response. I would appreciate any ideas on finding the right editor for my story. Aloha!

Huh?

 

[AlinaX]

Dave,

Thank you for reading my post and your response. I would appreciate any ideas on finding the right editor for my story. Aloha!

Welcome, both of you, to the forum.

@NickiMWF, I'm not sure why you've posted in this thread. If you're looking for an editor, please start a new thread.

Give people an idea of how long your story is (approx. word count), appropriate content warnings, and what sort of help you're looking for: grammar; or final read-through for flow, etc. (beta reading); or something more structural.