Story Input Needed - Incest Family Tradition or Ritual

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Braindard

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So I posted a prompt about this one a while back, and I still haven't quite found the right recipe. I don't want to give up on it, it's been bugging me for months now because I think it has great potential.

I definitely want an attractive, 18-year-old female to be the story's focus. I also want her to have sex with her father and two brothers. I am open to the idea of her having sex with more members of the family, but the father and two brothers would be the most descriptive sexual encounters. Preferably, dad and daughter would be the climax of the story and would have the added taboo of unprotected sex.

One introduction I've developed is that the world has experienced a massive population loss due to fertility. After a long time some largely secret communities discovered that incest was for some unknown reason the only known hope and produced healthy babies again - father-daughter being the most effective and diminishing further down the line. Longer still and it became celebrated to engage in incest in most if not all communities, perhaps with some traditions established.

I know it's extreme, but it allows for a lot of opportunities I think have not been explored. Sex in public and in front of a family, a community's support of a previously forbidden act, ritualistic incest, a "choosing" of a mate by the main character in question... All things I find exciting. Perhaps others migh too?

So my questions:

1- what do you think of the "accepted tradition" plot line?
2- how might that tradition go?
3- what more conventional ways might father, daughter an brothers engage in sex willingly and with the knowledge of each other and possibly others?

If you made it this far, thank you for reading and I appreciate any and all feedback!

Braindard
 
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IMHO your setup it is too fantasyland and offends my reality fetish. Fortunately, there's a possibly true (much debate about this) historical prototype, the Sawney Bean saga. Alexander 'Sawney' Bean supposedly raised his family in a wild corner of medieval Scotland, their hunter-gatherer sustenance augmented by waylaying and devouring travelers. As the tale goes, they lived in total isolation for several generations. Nothing much to do out there except fuck. Nobody much to fuck except each other. Keeping it all in the family, you bet, as inbred as Spanish Hapsburgs.

Transplant that to some isolated corner of 19th-century North America (but without the cannibalism) and track the expanding family and its social rituals down to current time. Through good genetic luck (or maybe high fluorine or radium levels in the water supply) they are NOT afflicted with lots of inbred recessives. Thus we need not contend with mobs of drooling morons with tails. They all look like normal humans. Their holy rituals determine who mates with which relative(s) and when.
 
Now I feel bad that I made an "I'm okay with a crazy premise" post, since this setup is even dextroying my suspension of disbelief.

I've only got one way to stick mostly to your premise. We double down and take the crazy train of the rails:

We make it about superheroes.

The world's only superheroes find that they are completely incompatible with ordinary humans. They could kill someone if they tried making children the old fashioned way and artificial insemination doesn't work.

Supermom can't have any more kids and the family believes that it's their duty to make sure there are generations of heroes to protect Earth. So until science finds an answer, the family starts getting it on and makes a bunch of incestuous super babies. Maybe one of their powers is perfect genes so the kids end up fine. Eventually, science finds a way to make clones but that just makes the family make their sexcapades (which are always public) even larger.
 
Twist: The SuperFamily FuckFest Orgies become a national/international holiday. They take place in stadiums all over the world to millions of screaming fans, a la the World Cup. Nations contribute to a monetary fund for their support--after all, they're keeping the whole world safe, aren't they?

Cosplay and uh, other emulations become all the rage. Fan clubs form, and who's the sexiest or best performer are hotly contested. Everyone has a great time. Until...

Twist 1A: Due to their perfect genes, and consequent super longevity, the SuperFamily begins to take over the world, population-wise. They simply outlive, and outbreed normal humans. A sinister plot is hatched among the world's other elites to put an end to this menace. They start to develop an "infertility" drug or device to render SuperFamily members either barren (lame) or impotent (better).
 
Twist: One of the SuperFamily grows tired of fucking his sisters/aunts/cousins in front of a spectator audience of millions; he longs to be able to fuck just one woman in private, preferably one he didn't grow up with. (This works with a female protagonist, also.) Coincidentally, he/she is also a genius in the field of genetic research. He/she bends his/her formidable powers to unraveling why his SuperFamily can't breed with normal humans, and finds a "cure". Along the way he develops an attachment to his curvaceous and ravishingly beautiful (or incredibly hunky and well hung) lab assistant. Dare he/she attempt to use the drug with her/him? And if he/she does and it works, will this threaten the SuperFamily FuckFest Orgy franchise, which has built a financial and merchandising empire?

Tensions, both internal and external, threaten to tear SuperFamily apart, just when the evil Zorgs are arriving to take over Earth! And of course this version will involve tentacles. (A nod to Hypoxia.)
 
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