Story Idea

[ap2tech]

I'm a dialysis patient and I have an idea concerning mind control. During my treatments I'm given various medicines. What if the combination allowed me to influence people's minds. I'm not a very good writer but maybe somebody could possibly write this story with help from me.

 

[BlackSnake]

I'm a dialysis patient and I have an idea concerning mind control. During my treatments I'm given various medicines. What if the combination allowed me to influence people's minds. I'm not a very good writer but maybe somebody could possibly write this story with help from me.

What would you have the people do? Would it be just at the hospital, or do you realize it after you are home?

 

[ap2tech]

It would be at dialysis the first time, then I'd realize that it works all the time. I've been thinking about this and have some character's in mind.
Two at the clinic. Joyce, approximately forty-eight but a very sexy woman with a nice butt and small tits. very forward but holds her emotions back. Stacy, approximately twenty-five. Rather shy but will flirt if nobody's around. One woman is a friend of mine that I've wanted sexually since we met in my younger days. Ginny is about forty, tall but has a wide butt and nice tits. She shows her body a lot but puts me off when I try to make any advances.
Does my idea sound good to you?

 

[BlackSnake]

You idea sounds really good.

The issue is mind control. You are to control their actions, but no one is to find out.

First, I think it should be just as you said. Two very different sexy women. Both are not giving you any play, but are really nice. The doctor said that telopathic thought maybe a side-effect of your treatment. You find out that you have this gift. You get to do what ever you always wanted with the two women without anyone finding out. The twisted resolution is that you don't have mind control ability, they have been playing alone without your knowledge for the joy of giving you what you always wanted from them.

 

[ap2tech]

Your way sounds really good. I have a couple of stories written. Could I send one so you could check it out? I always think my stories are dull, I need some input.

 

[BlackSnake]

Your way sounds really good. I have a couple of stories written. Could I send one so you could check it out? I always think my stories are dull, I need some input.

Sure: anaconda_long@hotmail.com