Story idea

odderotica

Experienced
Joined
Mar 20, 2004
Posts
57
Hey, I'm trying out a batgirl story, but watching Spiderman2 today gave me an idea. So here it is, free from my mind, but certainly it's been done before.


Mary Jane Parker positivly glowed as she walked on-stage that night. The other actors noticed right away and were awed at her control and grace. Her form was supple, and the bard's lines flowed from her red lips like clear cool streams. She did her scence, it was slightly raunchy but she held her own with the stronger male leads. She pranced offstage lightly, with a fairies leap into the upper balcony.

The audience was thrilled by the effect, the director was confused, for there were no effects in his budget. But the show must go on, and her next scene was not for several minutes.

Peter and MJ were in love, but this was New York, and lots of people were in love. Time was precious and often diffficult to come by, but somehow Peter alway found time. And while it had taken a few risks in the begining the couple now had it to an art.

Scant seconds after MJ lept offstage she was flying thru the air between the playhouse and the office building across the street, as she turned in the air she guessed she was 8 or so stoires of the ground. Delighted she let loose a scream that pierced the city night. She screamed in joy and horror as she was caught in mid air by her husband, the amazeing Spider Man.

He tore her out of her simple coustume with hands that knew every stitch and button like a spider knows its web. within seconds her costume was safe and she was clothed only iin his arms. He held her tight in his thin, but powerful arms, pressed his firm body against her own and swung back inside the theater. MJ was stuned!

They had fucked on every rooptop and on the crown of the statue in the bay. He would swing down and snatch her up whenever he could. Takeing her for minutes or hours at a time. She sometime knew (like tonight) but not normally. Sometimes the would make love for hours, silent even when it meant she wore a gag.

Once, they had a quickie on bottom of a helicopter. Mj had peter string her up in his web (she had not know what a turn on it could be to be tied and bound like that) and pounded her fast and hard as they buzzed across the city chaseing some runaway mutant or something.

But this was to much! The room was packed and all the cast knew her, some even suspected that Spidey had a "thing" with her and that peter was a cold husband. If they were caught, she couldnt bare it! She moved her lips in protest, but the web stoped her jaw from opening, and no sound came out. Her arms were lashed out and in seconds she was naked and spread eagled about 50 feet from the seats.




Thats about as far as I get. Basic premise Spider man and MJ have sex all the time as a young, energetic married couple should. But due to the limits of being spider man, sex comes in quickies and bizzare role playing/exibitonist settings. With as little bondage thrown in for fun.
 
You live up to your name, odderotica! That's so nuts, it might just work. Wouldn't the exhibition thing enable Spidey's enemies to identify his link with MJ, though? Wasn't that the problem?

Oh, and one plea: Never, on no account, ever, ever use the word "thru" in prose.

Pleeeease!
[Puss in Boots eyes]
 
gimme a heads up, whats wrong with "thru"? has my lexiocographer hornswaggled me?

As for the other villans, sure that might be a problem, but its no fun without a little risk. Maybe MJ wears a mask sometimes ;)
 
Yeah, I could picture MJ in a mask.

The problem with "thru" is that it's a horrible misspelling that has somehow found some twisted form of acceptibility because American signwriters bizarrely use it, and because of the godawful menace to the language that is text messaging.

I dread the time when novels are published where we have to read drivel like "C U l8ter" etc.
 
Ok to use this place for brainstorming?

Jealosy

MJ stood in line to cash her payceck from her last job modeling lip gloss. So, of course "the shocker" attacks! The shocker is a b class villan that can create shockwaves and powerful vibrations, he can hit hard and shrugs off spidies webs, still he's not much of a threat.

But what if MJ caught his eye? what if he came over and placed his large, rough hands on her smooth summer dress and then tore it off, showing her bare body underneath. MJ will be terrified and silently screaming for Peter to come save her! But poor Peter is stuck midtown fighting the Vulture.

It's not until motors in the Shocker's costume start up and begin to send powerful, yet controled vibrations directly into his gloved hand that the old Spidey Sense starts tinggling. When he puts that to work on MJ's clit, Peter ditchs the vulture and heads to the bank at top speed, but will he be fast enough?
 
Back
Top