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SuperWill19

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I'm not saying I want anyone to write this story although that would be cool. I may just write this story, but I was wondering what people thought. This guy who is in his mid to late twenties or early thirties is kind of lonely and possibly depressed. One day while in town a cute young lady comes up to him and with a smile asks if he'd like to follow her. He quickly agrees. They do a lot of things while in town. Then she takes him to a room and they have sex. A few days later she finds him again but he's in a better mood. They do things in town and then she asks him if he remembers where she took him to the last time they had sex. She smiles and says good when he says no. While having sex he asks her how old she is. She smiles and says that she'll tell him later. While having sex he is thinking and hoping that she is of legal age. It will be obvious to the people reading that she is of legal age. Later he asks her if they'll meet again. she seems happy and says that they will. Then she looks in the distance behind him and freaks out and runs off. They don't meet at the scheduled time so he goes off looking for her. When he finds her she looks nervous or annoyed and gives him some excuse.some time goes by and he still doesn't see her. But he does start to have dreams or visions. Eventually through those dreams he's able to figure out a location and decides to check it out. He finds her with who he guesses is her parents. He doesn't go up and talk to her but he does do things to show off in front of them. Eventually she is left alone and she asks him how she found her. She doesn't believe him when he says he had dreams and visions and recognized the location. A little less annoyed but still annoyed she tells him she hung out with him and did the things she did with him because she was told or dared to do it. To get someone infatuated or to see if he would start stalking her. He doesn't fully believe it. One of the reasons she left is because she freaked out because she started to really like the guy, or some other reason, she may have ended up pregnant, maybe not. They didn't use condoms. They could end up together or not.
 
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What's the deal with this forum? I would like to contribute but
a.I'm not a writer
b.english is my second language
So I don't know yet whether my posts would be welcomed, or just act as an irritant.
 
What's the deal with this forum? I would like to contribute but
a.I'm not a writer
b.english is my second language
So I don't know yet whether my posts would be welcomed, or just act as an irritant.

Everyone is welcome and so are non-trolling posts. :)
 
While having sex he asks her how old she is. She smiles and says that she'll tell him later. While having sex he is thinking and hoping that she is of legal age.

What's the point of that? Is using an age tease like that allowed on Literotica?
 
What's the point of that? Is using an age tease like that allowed on Literotica?

Damn, I missed that the first time I rushed through the wall of text. Most likely the owners will reject such a story. No "oh man I hope she's legal!" or similar is allowed in the story.

It's best to keep all people over the legal age from day and fuck one.
 
What's the point of that? Is using an age tease like that allowed on Literotica?


Well it can be set up so whoever is reading already know she is of legal age. But having the thought enter his mind even just briefly would be interesting. But that part can be left out or changed so she tells him when asked or tease him first then tell him.
 
Well it can be set up so whoever is reading already know she is of legal age. But having the thought enter his mind even just briefly would be interesting.


I don't agree in this case. I guess you could make the guy a sexual deviant, turn the story into a suspense/thriller where he goes crazy when he stalks the girl with murderous purpose, but still the thought of legal age shouldn't cross Literotica submissions.
 
Okay, technically this story should fall in bounds. But technical and what is actually likely to occur here are different things. This from someone who enjoys pushing the package some days just to see if he can get away with it, I wouldn't mess with this. Not only is it likely to get shot down but I don't see any easy way to fix it.
 
proof reading or editing.

Would anyone be interested in proof reading and or editing this story?
 
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