story idea: young man kidnaps older divorced woman

every_mothers_lover

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well i have a story idea about young man (23ish) kidnaps/rapes older divorced woman (40ish) and she begins to like it so much that she wants him as a BF/lover/master from now on.

he finds out she has a daughter (15ish) and plans up an idea to get her involved on her 18th-21st b/day.
 
every_mothers_lover said:
well i have a story idea about young man (23ish) kidnaps/rapes older divorced woman (40ish) and she begins to like it so much that she wants him as a BF/lover/master from now on.

he finds out she has a daughter (15ish) and plans up an idea to get her involved on her 18th-21st b/day.

Hmm...nice. This one has potential. :D
 
Interesting idea. Looks like it would be a long story, or a series, to age the daughter about three or so years. It would be interesting to see how both mother and daugter become "slaves" to this man... :)
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Interesting idea. Looks like it would be a long story, or a series, to age the daughter about three or so years. It would be interesting to see how both mother and daugter become "slaves" to this man... :)

Indeed. :D
 
I know I shouldn't say this... (Working on our "challenge" and a "How To" submission right now, have a file on disk about 2 pages long, and 2 note book pages now all of different story ideas, but...)

If I wrote this tale, I think I'd already make the girl of age to get things rolling along already.
 
Hallowed Eve said:
I know I shouldn't say this... (Working on our "challenge" and a "How To" submission right now, have a file on disk about 2 pages long, and 2 note book pages now all of different story ideas, but...)

If I wrote this tale, I think I'd already make the girl of age to get things rolling along already.

Yeah, and I have a dozen stories that are in the works, so I can't take it on yet. YET being the operative word. But I am leaning toward making my minimum age for characters 18 in the future. So much less of a hassle if I don't have to change ages all of the time to fit Lit.
 
SEVERUSMAX said:
...I am leaning toward making my minimum age for characters 18 in the future. So much less of a hassle if I don't have to change ages all of the time to fit Lit.

Quite true.
 
cool

hey thats a cool idea to make the girl of near her of age b/day to get things rolling along already

cant wait to see who publishes it.
 
Like I said, I think this is an interesting idea. :) Just not sure if it's one I could get around to in the near future or not.
 
Possible

How about if the woman used to be the boy's child minder, this would allow for a 'friendship' of sort's to exist between the daughter and the boy which could cover the 15 to 18 year age gap as a fill in.

It would also allow for the boy to fantasise about the woman untill he just has to have her. Maybe he stayed over one night and got a quick flash or heard her screwing a boyfriend and has never been able to forget it.

His continual appearance round the house would be explained and give him a chance to seduce the daughter as well as controlling the mother.
 
every_mothers_lover said:
well i have a story idea about young man (23ish) kidnaps/rapes older divorced woman (40ish) and she begins to like it so much that she wants him as a BF/lover/master from now on.

he finds out she has a daughter (15ish) and plans up an idea to get her involved on her 18th-21st b/day.


personally, i'm turned off by any age under 18.....
the idea could be hot, but everyone has to be over 18
 
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