story idea update

[wheelchairman85]

I recently started a thread about a female private detective and her severely disabled brother. The story is coming along very well but now i have a problem where do i put the sex in the story? if any of my fellow members would help me with this i would be very grateful

 

[nakdsub]

I was going to write you a PM but this is okay...

I really don't think anyone can tell your where to put the sex in a story when no one knows the story...Including me.

First, not all stories HAVE to have sex. I've read several LW where there was none. However, since this is an erotic site, it is probably better if there is, at least some, sex.

I gave you a couple scenarios but I don't even know which you picked so I'm at a loss, but here are a couple possibilities I thought of.

She is a privat detective. Maybe while introducing her as such, she is spying on a cheating husband or wife and you describe the scene she is recording.

Maybe she has a boyfriend she goes to when she needs to unwind from a stressful day.

Maybe she has to sleep with someone to obtain information she needs, (ala James Bond.)

Maybe she falls in love with the guy who helps her get info on her brother's shooter.

Do any of these float your boat?