I wish a talented writer would flesh out this idea. Imagine a dinner party where all the guests are white and several black men and women take it over at gunpoint. They force the white hostages to service them and to sex each other.......in all kinds of combinations! Both white men and women serving both black men and women! I think it's a hot idea. Does anyone wish to tackle it?
Story idea: takeover at the dinner party
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The idea of a dinner party is the only part of this story that hasn't been done to death. Maybe if you found THE BEST author it would be a good read but I'm good but not that good.
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race issues?
Just curious if you're black or white, lcafee.
I (a white man) find this whole "black domination of white folks" fetish rather interesting, as it usually portrays the black people as super or sub-human. There are many requests for stories involving black men gang raping some white woman while the helpless husband looks on. There are many requests for stories involving whole families being taken hostage and forced to screw each other, often ending with either family members ending up dead or females impregnated by their own male relatives.
The whole "incest pregnancy" fetish thing puzzles me too.
Both scenarios seem to signal the requester's power fantasies, be they empowering themselves over their own family, or having all power stripped from them.
Any thoughts? I could go on about this, but it's getting a bit late for me.
Just curious if you're black or white, lcafee.
I (a white man) find this whole "black domination of white folks" fetish rather interesting, as it usually portrays the black people as super or sub-human. There are many requests for stories involving black men gang raping some white woman while the helpless husband looks on. There are many requests for stories involving whole families being taken hostage and forced to screw each other, often ending with either family members ending up dead or females impregnated by their own male relatives.
The whole "incest pregnancy" fetish thing puzzles me too.
Both scenarios seem to signal the requester's power fantasies, be they empowering themselves over their own family, or having all power stripped from them.
Any thoughts? I could go on about this, but it's getting a bit late for me.
Power exertion
For the record, I'm white. It's hard to say why those story requests have such appeal. My husband thinks that white women being dominated by black women is erotic and I personally feel that way about black men dominating white men, though it's not to his taste, which I guess is understandable. If a dinner party concept has been overused--where are these stories posted? I've never been able to find them--maybe another setting would be appropriate. Would it be a lot of trouble for anyone ot post a reply with links to the sites with such stories?
For the record, I'm white. It's hard to say why those story requests have such appeal. My husband thinks that white women being dominated by black women is erotic and I personally feel that way about black men dominating white men, though it's not to his taste, which I guess is understandable. If a dinner party concept has been overused--where are these stories posted? I've never been able to find them--maybe another setting would be appropriate. Would it be a lot of trouble for anyone ot post a reply with links to the sites with such stories?
A correction
I was rushed for time when I posted the message earlier today. I mis-read the post thinking that the dinner party concept was overused when the post actualy indicated that it was underused. Sorry for any confusion. But, seriously, if no one wishes to undertake the story, the requested links to such stories would be greatly appreciated. Then, perhaps I can fuse elements to create my own story. One of my husband's favorite fantasies is for a white woman to be verbally abused. slapped, stripped naked and otherwise sexed by black women. Any similar-themed links would be appreciated.
I was rushed for time when I posted the message earlier today. I mis-read the post thinking that the dinner party concept was overused when the post actualy indicated that it was underused. Sorry for any confusion. But, seriously, if no one wishes to undertake the story, the requested links to such stories would be greatly appreciated. Then, perhaps I can fuse elements to create my own story. One of my husband's favorite fantasies is for a white woman to be verbally abused. slapped, stripped naked and otherwise sexed by black women. Any similar-themed links would be appreciated.
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Flashlight: I am also bothered by the subhuman aspect to most interracial stories. Rarely are the characters made out to be real people. And its precisely why I leave interracial categories alone. If there ever could be a story written in that section not focusing on the race -- just focusing on them as two people having sex then I would be all for it.
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I agree with you, bi. Most interracial stories make "the other race" out to be something exotic, super or subhuman, or violent. I don't mind the taboo angle, especially if it's treated realistically in the story (like how the relationship affects the characters' familes and/or social life), but why not just write stories about people fucking, and some of them happen to be black, white, Asian, Indian, or Inuit?
I can understand an attraction to certain races. My wife and I would love to make a human sandwich out of a cute Asian girl, but this fantasy's origin is more interesting than the fantasy itself. The sight of a lovely female Asian bartender at a friend's wedding reception made my wife say to herself, "Yeah, I'm bi." She's been frisky for an Asian kitty ever since.
I agree with you, bi. Most interracial stories make "the other race" out to be something exotic, super or subhuman, or violent. I don't mind the taboo angle, especially if it's treated realistically in the story (like how the relationship affects the characters' familes and/or social life), but why not just write stories about people fucking, and some of them happen to be black, white, Asian, Indian, or Inuit?
I can understand an attraction to certain races. My wife and I would love to make a human sandwich out of a cute Asian girl, but this fantasy's origin is more interesting than the fantasy itself. The sight of a lovely female Asian bartender at a friend's wedding reception made my wife say to herself, "Yeah, I'm bi." She's been frisky for an Asian kitty ever since.
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Flashlight7.5 said:
title in waiting: " My Wife's Asian Kitty". I like your scenario, and think a good writer could rise to the challenge of fleshing our the barmaid character so that it balances the exotic and the interesting.
If the people in the stories "just happen to be" multi racial, then they ought not be in the 'interraccial' category. Just as if the woman being shared is wearing fab shoes, but they are not a focus of the story, the story should go in Loving Wives or Group, not Fetish.
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I did write this story, SirHugs. It's called "Jack and Jill Meet Melonie." You can find it in my profile.
Actually, almost all my stories are based on, or inspired by, real life situations.
I did write this story, SirHugs. It's called "Jack and Jill Meet Melonie." You can find it in my profile.
Actually, almost all my stories are based on, or inspired by, real life situations.
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Flashlight7.5 said:
actually, there is no link in your profile. so here is one for whoever is interested:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=4849.
Despite the age of your story, it would still be nice to see the hinted at sequel.
The trouble with this gang of sex crazed black folks taking over the dinner party scenario and all the related violence and rape that would take place... Lit would probably shy off of accepting it on the mainline boards as being too close to extreme real rape for their decency purposes, fiction or not... A good author should be able to make something of it, but I'd suggest a dinner party of mixed race guests getting a bit out of hand, not so much an invasion of strangers intent on rape and humiliation of another race.... Nothing wrong with portraying this kind of rape and abuse in fiction, hell it happens in real life, but care would be needed to get it accepted here I think.
As for the racist element, making out one particular type of person to be sub-human animals, I agree, great care must be taken with this subject matter... I know for a fact that not all black guys are rapists of white women, most can put in a lot of feeling and even love to such a relationship during swinging and the like.
As for the racist element, making out one particular type of person to be sub-human animals, I agree, great care must be taken with this subject matter... I know for a fact that not all black guys are rapists of white women, most can put in a lot of feeling and even love to such a relationship during swinging and the like.
This is something that I might take a shot at but I'm not sure whether the results would satisfy you.
I would pump up the racial aspect straight away and have the black criminals extremely vocal in their absolute hatred towards white people. I would have the white victims slowly reveal themselves to be equally as prejudiced over the course of the evening.
Once things were in motion I would focus on the predators. The most racist of the white people would also be the ones to take advantage of the situation and get off on and willingly take part in the sexual violence inflicted upon their 'friends'. These people would bond on some level with their more brutal captors, entering into a symbiotic relationship where they fed off each others bile and sickness. This bonding would lead to fractures and fighting within the two groups.
There would be a lot of violence and by the end of the story almost everyone would be dead.
The two problems for me would be actually getting the criminals in the house in the first place. I would want a reason for them being there.
My other problem would be language. My take on this story would be brutal and uncompromising so I would be looking at stylistic methods I could use and develop to keep that tension and horror at a constant frenzied peak.
James M. Cain the 30's crime writer had a great way of writing terse, edgy, minimal, violent dialogue so I would dig out my copy of 'The postman always rings twice' to get some ideas. Another book I would take a look at is 'Last exit to Brooklyn' by Hubert Selby. It's been a long time since I read it but I do remember him having an energetic, visceral style.
I would pump up the racial aspect straight away and have the black criminals extremely vocal in their absolute hatred towards white people. I would have the white victims slowly reveal themselves to be equally as prejudiced over the course of the evening.
Once things were in motion I would focus on the predators. The most racist of the white people would also be the ones to take advantage of the situation and get off on and willingly take part in the sexual violence inflicted upon their 'friends'. These people would bond on some level with their more brutal captors, entering into a symbiotic relationship where they fed off each others bile and sickness. This bonding would lead to fractures and fighting within the two groups.
There would be a lot of violence and by the end of the story almost everyone would be dead.
The two problems for me would be actually getting the criminals in the house in the first place. I would want a reason for them being there.
My other problem would be language. My take on this story would be brutal and uncompromising so I would be looking at stylistic methods I could use and develop to keep that tension and horror at a constant frenzied peak.
James M. Cain the 30's crime writer had a great way of writing terse, edgy, minimal, violent dialogue so I would dig out my copy of 'The postman always rings twice' to get some ideas. Another book I would take a look at is 'Last exit to Brooklyn' by Hubert Selby. It's been a long time since I read it but I do remember him having an energetic, visceral style.
