Twist_of_Fate
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I had this idea for a rather detailed multi-part sexual story... it's a sort of mixture between a fresh idea I had on my flight today, and many I've had in the past.
Basically, it's a love triangle that takes place between a man and two women on an uninhabited ("desert") island in the South Pacific. How they got there is rather unimportant to the story, but it's probably going to be something like a shipwreck or a plane crash... think something like the TV show Lost, where everyone is relatively comfortable (as in they're not desperately trying to keep from dying, they're all as safe, well-fed, etc, as they can be), they got their luggage off the wreck, and there are a lot of people, so it's not a "three people huddled around a campfire every night" sort of deal. The three main characters in the story are people who didn't know each other before the crash, and don't know each other too well now but are getting there.
It'll start up maybe two weeks or so after the actual crash, so people won't have to deal with reading details about the very trying first times there, and we can pick up at a good time where they might be thinking about sex and not only survival (after all, we all know people don't read sex stories to hear about making fire and hunting boar).
It's all in a very early stage in my mind, but I'm foreseeing 6-7 chapters in it now, where each story will be from one of the three people's points of view. The "rough drafts" of the characters are as follows:
Scott - The guy... a pretty basic character: an all-around good guy and an everyman of sorts, he's at a carefree point in life and the only thing on his mind (besides being stuck on a friggin' island) are the two women and what to do about it. (21, possibly?)
Jane - The youngest one, either fresh out of high school or in college. Petite, perky, and vivacious. Sexy in the "girl-next-door" and youthful ways, sexually uninhibited. (18-20, name not definate, suggestions for a different name welcome.)
Michelle - Scott's age or a bit older, possibly in graduate school or some kind of secretarial job. Beautiful, curvy, and incredibly sweet. Somewhat shy, not too sexually adventurous. (21-25, same situation with her name as Jane's.)
As for the actually story progression, or episodes as I would think of it, it goes a little something like this:
1 - Scott's point of view - This one I'm not too sure about, as I want the first instance of sex to be between him and Jane from her point of view, but I want to start the whole thing out with Scott. I was thinking that he had been eyeing Michelle, and has a dream about them getting together? This could be good because I could utilize the kind of cliché situations of sex on a tropical island that wouldn't otherwise work in this setting (like, having sex in the middle of the beach).
2 - Jane's point of view - Jane asks Scott to go with her into the jungle, and they come across a sort of idyllic waterfall, where they see Michelle is already naked and bathing. Scott gets a hard-on, Jane takes advantage of this... She gives a blowjob while they both watch Michelle, and when Michelle leaves, the two of them move into the pool and go the whole way.
3 - Michelle's point of view - I have in mind something like Michelle had actually noticed the two of them and left of her own accord. She'd been getting to 'like' Scott, so decides to win him over by surprising him in his make-shift tent that night. You get the picture.
4 - Scott's point of view - Scott, now confused about who he should go for, has Jane come on to him once again, and can't resist her.
After this it gets a bit muddled, and I'd love some help on sorting the last couple out.
5 - Jane's point of view - Since I want to have two from each point of view, I here have another with Jane, but I don't want to get repetitive. Perhaps a solo one? Or should I just cut it out altogether?
6 - Michelle's point of view - Michelle gets sick of the little triangle and goes to Jane to sort it out. Jane further confuses her but putting the moves on her. A girl-on-girl scene here.
7 - Everyone's point of view (omniscient narration) - I'm sure you've guessed where this was headed - a threesome between all of them.
Maybe this got a little overlong,
, but I hope you've stuck with me through it. I'm feeling very passionate about the idea, and would definately love some feedback and suggestions pretaining to it. Please? 
Basically, it's a love triangle that takes place between a man and two women on an uninhabited ("desert") island in the South Pacific. How they got there is rather unimportant to the story, but it's probably going to be something like a shipwreck or a plane crash... think something like the TV show Lost, where everyone is relatively comfortable (as in they're not desperately trying to keep from dying, they're all as safe, well-fed, etc, as they can be), they got their luggage off the wreck, and there are a lot of people, so it's not a "three people huddled around a campfire every night" sort of deal. The three main characters in the story are people who didn't know each other before the crash, and don't know each other too well now but are getting there.
It'll start up maybe two weeks or so after the actual crash, so people won't have to deal with reading details about the very trying first times there, and we can pick up at a good time where they might be thinking about sex and not only survival (after all, we all know people don't read sex stories to hear about making fire and hunting boar).
It's all in a very early stage in my mind, but I'm foreseeing 6-7 chapters in it now, where each story will be from one of the three people's points of view. The "rough drafts" of the characters are as follows:
Scott - The guy... a pretty basic character: an all-around good guy and an everyman of sorts, he's at a carefree point in life and the only thing on his mind (besides being stuck on a friggin' island) are the two women and what to do about it. (21, possibly?)
Jane - The youngest one, either fresh out of high school or in college. Petite, perky, and vivacious. Sexy in the "girl-next-door" and youthful ways, sexually uninhibited. (18-20, name not definate, suggestions for a different name welcome.)
Michelle - Scott's age or a bit older, possibly in graduate school or some kind of secretarial job. Beautiful, curvy, and incredibly sweet. Somewhat shy, not too sexually adventurous. (21-25, same situation with her name as Jane's.)
As for the actually story progression, or episodes as I would think of it, it goes a little something like this:
1 - Scott's point of view - This one I'm not too sure about, as I want the first instance of sex to be between him and Jane from her point of view, but I want to start the whole thing out with Scott. I was thinking that he had been eyeing Michelle, and has a dream about them getting together? This could be good because I could utilize the kind of cliché situations of sex on a tropical island that wouldn't otherwise work in this setting (like, having sex in the middle of the beach).
2 - Jane's point of view - Jane asks Scott to go with her into the jungle, and they come across a sort of idyllic waterfall, where they see Michelle is already naked and bathing. Scott gets a hard-on, Jane takes advantage of this... She gives a blowjob while they both watch Michelle, and when Michelle leaves, the two of them move into the pool and go the whole way.
3 - Michelle's point of view - I have in mind something like Michelle had actually noticed the two of them and left of her own accord. She'd been getting to 'like' Scott, so decides to win him over by surprising him in his make-shift tent that night. You get the picture.
4 - Scott's point of view - Scott, now confused about who he should go for, has Jane come on to him once again, and can't resist her.
After this it gets a bit muddled, and I'd love some help on sorting the last couple out.
5 - Jane's point of view - Since I want to have two from each point of view, I here have another with Jane, but I don't want to get repetitive. Perhaps a solo one? Or should I just cut it out altogether?
6 - Michelle's point of view - Michelle gets sick of the little triangle and goes to Jane to sort it out. Jane further confuses her but putting the moves on her. A girl-on-girl scene here.
7 - Everyone's point of view (omniscient narration) - I'm sure you've guessed where this was headed - a threesome between all of them.
Maybe this got a little overlong,
, but I hope you've stuck with me through it. I'm feeling very passionate about the idea, and would definately love some feedback and suggestions pretaining to it. Please?
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