Story idea involving an office quickie

[greenbook]

For several years I have been trying to get a woman to do an audio porn fantasy that I am interested in (and I am sure others are into), but despite paying some people in order to try to get it right, I have just never been satisfied with the results. This is the story: There is a tall, strong, extremely attractive man with big dick whose had sex with hundreds of women. He is a sexual superperformer. He is just too much to resist. There is a visiting female business client who is visiting for a conference who normally doesn't do the nasty on business, but who just cannot resist this man. Before you know it, they are all alone in the office, and they are kissing each other and tearing off each other's clothes. The key with this whole scene is that the female is a big time dirty talker, and she has a voracious appetite for sex. She wants this guy to fuck her big time. Before you know it, he's pulling her pants down, dropping her thong to the floor, a fucking not super fast or super hard, but a good stead pace. The guy is not to say a thing. He is almost like a sex machine who is just servicing this girl. Meanwhile, the woman is moaning passionately (NOT screaming, I hate that), and stating, almost in a dominatrix style, dirty talk phrases like these every 8 seconds or so:

Give me that big dick
Fuck my pussy faster
Tell me how much you love that pussy
Damn your dick feels so hard
Fuck me like it's the best pussy you've ever had
I love your big dick
You know you love that pussy
Fuck me harder
I want your big dick
Come on, keep on fucking me
Fuck me with your big dick
Put you big dick inside me
I love it when you fuck me like that
You're a god damn fucking machine
Keep fucking me
Come on, fuck my pussy faster
Come on, come for me
I want you to come all over my face

I could go on and on. The idea here is that the dirty talk is to be kept very plain and simple. The three major turn on words/phrases for dirty talk for me are "Big dick," "pussy, and "fuck/fucking." You would be surprised how hard it is to find this in most modern porn shoots. The women either scream like crazy, moan and say nothing at all, or the guys talk to much. When I have tried to hire people to do audio porn things for me (and most of the time the audio quality has been terrible), they have whispered the lines ("I want your big dick" almost needs to sound like a demand!), or they have said things like "fuck me baby" that sounds as if they are having sex with a committed partner). At the end of this thing I want the girl to beg the man to come all over her face, and for her to respond with pleasure when he finally does.

That's my ultimate audio porn fantasy. If any female here could pull it off, I know more than a few people who wish an audio porn fantasy like this would exist. Thanks for taking my suggestion.

 

[greenbook]

82 looks and no input

 

[Carnevil9]

82 looks and no input

Sometimes you have an idea that you are SURE is a winner, but nobody agrees. Don't let it get you down! Keep brainstorming!

 

[Lindsay_O]

I'm not sure how popular "audio stories" are here. If no audio authors read this board they won't know about your request.

 

[greenbook]

There was actually a female poster here who hasn't posted in ages who, in combination with her male partner, made outstanding audio porn:

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1482138&page=submissions

"Sunday Afternoon" and "You Fucking Nasty Bitch" are great, although there needs to be more of my kind of dirty talk. I actually like the male's voice and reactions in these two clips, which is unusual. I'd pay these two to make a clip for me. They are that good.

There is another poster who isn't that active but who at least put something up here in 2018:

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3247080&page=submissions

The link below (for a story entitled "Sports Bar Romp") probably has the best audio porn quickie I have heard (she has a beautiful voice), but again, just not enough of my kind of favorite dirty talk:

https://www.literotica.com/s/sport-bar-romp

I wish that the women is these clips would be saying things like:

Give me that big dick
Fuck my pussy faster
Tell me how much you love that pussy
Damn your dick feels so hard
Fuck me like it's the best pussy you've ever had
I love your big dick
You know you love that pussy
Fuck me harder
I want your big dick
Come on, keep on fucking me
Fuck me with your big dick
Put you big dick inside me
I love it when you fuck me like that
You're a god damn fucking machine
Keep fucking me
Come on, fuck my pussy faster

Especially with the last clip (Sports Bar Romp).....that would be paradise for me.

 

[thewinedarksea]

Here's my take.

The story premise seems to lack all tension except the woman breaking her business-and-sex-don't-mix rule. The guy is a sexual athlete who fulfils all her requirements. She says dirty things to him that are true (big dick, sex machine, etc.)
She commands him to do things that he then does (fucks harder, faster, deeper)

Honestly, this is a boring set-up.

What if some of the things she says to him aren't true? What if his dick is not particularly massive? What if he's not a sexual superhero, but has to somehow fake it? What if he doesn't love her pussy, but he loves something else about her? What if she asks him to do some things, but he actually wants to do other things? What if, in getting carried away talking dirty, she asks him to do things she has never done before, and then feels ashamed, or confused, or exhilarated when they happen?

Some variation on the theme that introduces tension will bring this alive.

 

[greenbook]

See, I just view my deal as just pure audio porn. A substitute for what I cannot get when subscribing to a porn network site and ripping the audio from a scene. I am not looking for anything with any sort of narrative or story. I don't want it to be sexy or imaginative. I am not really interested in fulfilling other people's fantasies either. It is just what I dig, and if others dig it, so be it.

The problem with modern porn for me is that the girls barely dirty talk. All they do is moan loudly or scream like crazy which I hate. And the few women that dirty talk don't dirty talk in the way that I like. The men talk or moan too much for my taste in modern scenes as well. There is also just not enough raw sportfucking for me in modern scenes. Guys either fuck the girls slowly or get overly rough, slapping the girls all over the place and such. The only time were the fucking is to my liking is the minute before the guy cums, but for me, that needs to be the basis of the whole clip.

I am probably not on the right site for what it is I am looking for, but the links I referenced above were really not sexy stories with a narrative either. They were audio files with people just fucking aggressively. But for me, there needed to be more dirty talk of my liking. FWIW, my personal sex life is COMPLETELY different than what I fantasize about. I fantasize about things I can't do and really have no interest in doing with a real human being even if I could do them. I am obviously not looking for the things most people on this site are, but I was just hoping that I might run into a member or two who might be open to creating such an audio clip since at least two members got quite close.......

 

[Lindsay_O]

Ah, yes. You're not on the right site for what you seek.

Even audio stories on Lit will be stories. And submitted here.

 

[greenbook]

But still.....there are those clips I referenced. There wasn't a big narrative behind those audio clips. Maybe someone will come along in a couple of years

The best site for me is a place like Extra Lunch Money were you can pay an amateur to do whatever it is that you'd like for them to do. But it can get really pricey because you usually have to spend a lot to find the one diamond in the rough who has the right moaning style, the right voice, the right dirty talking style, a good male partner, a great HD recording set up and so on. Most sellers don't have free samples of their work. You have to pay to even get a one minute customized clip of them moaning and dirty talking to you.

I need to be a multi-millionaire so I can set up my own studio and work with actors directly

 

[greenbook]

I should say that I like this site a lot (and have for years) and read the stories often. There is a lot of creativity here, and the site fulfills a much needed niche online. Thanks to everyone who has contributed and to the site owners and moderators.