Story idea featuring a female bodyguard.

[maria1966]

I have story idea about a female bodyguard she takes care of the stepson of a rich and powerful man who is cruel to the stepson.

The young man's mother who he loved dearly is deceased and his birth father died when the young man was a baby so he never knew him.

and unfortunately he has no other extended family so she is his only company.

But i can't do Anything with this idea so my fellow Lit writers it is all yours do whatever you want with it.

 

[Hypoxia]

Possibilities, not necessarily related, with the following cast of characters:

> RPA (rich powerful asshole)
> ISS (innocent stepson)
> BGG (bodyguard girl)

* ISS is RPA's legal-financial ward till age 21 when ISS will inherit $$$$$ from his bio-parents' estate. RPA figures BGG is incompetent, just as he wants; he wants ISS's bucks himself. He contracts a cheap hit on ISS but BGG somehow foils it, and the next attempt, and the next.

* Because of long-term abuse and belittlement by RPA, poor ISS is a mental mess. BGG must not only guard him from RPA's enemies targeting ISS but must also be his mental therapist and spiritual guide. Variant: ISS has been twisted by RPA's cruelty into a dull psychopathic thug bent on revenge on RPA and any of his hirelings -- including BGG. How does she protect and heal a recalcitrant client?

* BGG is actually somebody's agent, infiltrating RPA's household because conspiracy. ISS is an introvert turtle but sees what she's up to. Does he help or impede her or what?

Those are really sidelines. What's important: How do you see such stories ending? How do you *want* them to end?

 

[scottvalente]

I have story idea about a female bodyguard she takes care of the stepson of a rich and powerful man who is cruel to the stepson.

The young man's mother who he loved dearly is deceased and his birth father died when the young man was a baby so he never knew him.

and unfortunately he has no other extended family so she is his only company.

But i can't do Anything with this idea so my fellow Lit writers it is all yours do whatever you want with it.

I think thats a great idea for a story. The son would be upset over having to be watched by his gaurdian, so I'm sure that kid will love the escape of being with his female body gaurd. The sex scenes would be exciting, because they'd have to have sex in risky situations where they might get caught. Hold on a second... it wouldn't be a bad thing if her boss caught her having sex with the kid she's supposed to be protecting... he could fire her, or he could have his way with her

 

[Hypoxia]

Another take (inspired by the old Dallas McCoy Starstruck comic) focuses on the bodyguard, a sexy ex-CIA (or whatever) agent nauseated by agency life. Now she's with a leading security firm, a top protector of the rich and infamous and their abused families. Her old alphabet agency wants her back in harness... and arranges for her to be assigned the shittiest clients, all with emotional basket-case kids and spouses. She angrily fucks them all, of course, because LIT. How long can she absorb sexual angst and extreme kinks before she flees back to the agency? How many fetishes can we write into the story?

 

[maria1966]

Hypoxia: if i was going to write this is how I would end it. She is coming back from the store after buying a few necessities for stepson. the butler takes her aside and says that while she was gone the stepfather beat the shit out of him.

So she goes to the young man's room and as she is cleaning him up she says to him "I have to get you out of here. But he say's to her "I'm broke and i don't have any money."

And she says something like "I have all the money we need to get out of this hellish place.
and she finances the escape to a safe place but it don't stay safe for very long.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

If I wrote it the boy would save the womans ass from the bad guys, and he'd feel guilty and ashamed of it.

 

[Hypoxia]

Hypoxia: if i was going to write this is how I would end it. She is coming back from the store after buying a few necessities for stepson. the butler takes her aside and says that while she was gone the stepfather beat the shit out of him.

So she goes to the young man's room and as she is cleaning him up she says to him "I have to get you out of here. But he say's to her "I'm broke and i don't have any money."

And she says something like "I have all the money we need to get out of this hellish place.
and she finances the escape to a safe place but it don't stay safe for very long.

How do you want the story to end?

Questions I have of your scenario:

* Is she ex-military, ex-agency, ex-cop, or what? Those backgrounds would give her different value-sets. What does she believe in, if anything? What's her level of cynicism?

* Is she a family bodyguard or personal to stepson? If she's a guard, why is she fetching stuff from the store? That's a servant's job, while hers is to be there and be alert. (Answer: stepdad sent her off so he'd have brutalization time.) Are there other guards on the estate? How do they react?

* If she's paid by the stepdad then crossing him and spiriting-away stepson violates her professional creed and destroys her career as well as putting in the cross-hairs of stepdad's revenge. Does the son so magnetizee her that she's up for such sacrifice? (Answer: Yes, for this story.)

* Why is stepdad such a violent prick? What's his backstory? (Answer: he just IS, because LIT.) Does stepson resist? Is stepdad's vile treatment his way to "making a man" of the youth? Why doesn't stepson leave on his own? (Answer: he just doesn't, because LIT.)

Again, how do you want the story to end? Think of a final scene, then work back to the beginning, to show how we got there.

 

[maria1966]

Hypoxia here is her backstory Is she ex-military, ex-cia and an ex-cop she is a personal bodyguard to stepson yes she paid by the stepfather.

who is very filthy stinking rich in fact he has so much money when he goes to the bathroom to take a piss or a shit money shoots out of his dick and his ass.

regarding the whole pick up things from the store for the stepson.

the stepfather is sterile and can't have children of his own so by keeping the son imprisoned on the property it is his way of punishing him.

do to his own sexual inadequacies in the bedroom with his now deceased wife.

there are no other guards on the property just the filthy rich stepfather his stepson butler and kitchen staff and a maid who does the laundry and cleaning up the bedrooms and bathrooms.

The other reason for the stepfather's cruelty his stepson was very close to his mother and he was jealous of this closeness.

so when she died he decided to make his stepson pay for his "Sin" aka the close relationship with his mother.

Which was Not sexual in nature they just loved each other because after the birth father's death all they had was each other for a long time.

The stepson is a good young man but he feels powerless because he has been under his stepfather's thumb so long.

Also in the stepson's eyes she is more than just a bodyguard she is also a caretaker, a surrogate mother in his eyes she is a little a little peace of heaven in this living hell that he is life.

The ending i'm thinking a gunfight the stepfather uses his huge fortune to locate them and raises his own army to destroy his stepson and the bodyguard.

But because of the "Special Skills" she acquired in the military the cia and the police force she is able to get the two of them out and they drive off into the sunset.

Leaving a trail of dead bodies including the stepfathers and great deal of destruction behind them.

Regarding the beginning of the story this is how i picture it she is waking up and getting ready for the day.

you know she gets up lay's out her clothe's showers gets dressed etc etc.

 

[HeyAll]

What genre would this story be?

 

[maria1966]

HeyAll: I don't know what genre it would be its part love story with some violence and some action/adventure.

 

[sirhugs]

I have worked as a guard all my life and trust me that's not fun at all.

why are you resurrecting a dead thread from 2016 ?

 

[DarkPleasures]

I have worked as a guard all my life and trust me that's not fun at all.

Where is your story idea?

 

[Bramblethorn]

Where is your story idea?

It's a spammer.

 

[DarkPleasures]

Yep. This guy typically adds his spam links after the initial post.