Story I'd Love Someone Else to Write

[donaldelliott11]

I'm gonna get flamed for this, because my dream story has 2 elements that make LitMen insanely angry - the wimp cuckold who does gay things.

College soph Terry has had very little sex experience with girls, and the intercourse he had was nothing much to write home about. Small dick, premature ejaculator, all the cliches. He has mad crush on shy Asian girlfriend Mandy who is saving herself for marriage. They 69 a lot, but she's from a conservative family and is NOT giving it up until Terry puts a ring on it. Terry is too much of a gentleman to push Mandy past her comfort zone.

He tried out for the school wrestling team but didn't make it. He has a good passing relationship, however, with Jack, the 40-year old coach. Jack's a stud who has no idea what a lady's comfort zone is unless it's her G-spot. He attends an off-campus party also attended by Terry and Mandy. Jack shoots, he scores, Mandy's toes curl. Terry is humiliated and forlorn. Rinse, repeat for 3 or 4 weeks.

Coach rails Mandy several times a week with Terry sitting passively in the corner. Making him watch inflames both their libidos. Jack loves making Terry jealous. Of course Jack and Mandy soon assign Terry clean-up duty, then the job of Head Fluffer. So far, so unoriginal. This is no more than first 25% of story.

Coach has Terry come to his apartment, doms him, and then does it again every few days. Jack is seeing much less of Mandy now, has Terry over almost every day. Terry is introduced to cross dressing and worships Coach sexually. His hand jobs in the corner nowadays are less frequent and feature him jealous of Mandy, not Jack.

Coach finally gets Terry into lipstick and wigs - then arranges for Mandy to walk in on them in Jack's apartment. Mandy fingers herself while watching Terry inhaling cock, snaps a few pics, and spreads them around among her friends. Terry's reputation is shot.

Coach dumps Mandy - he only ever put up with her as a way to get Terry. Coach begins sharing Teddy with some other dudes, including the wrestling team. Eventually pimps him out. Then walks away, looking for his next cute couple to destroy.

Donald

 

[KindredFlame]

Male lust.

I like this idea, not sure if I am the one to write it though. But it’s an interesting premise. Love KF

I'm gonna get flamed for this, because my dream story has 2 elements that make LitMen insanely angry - the wimp cuckold who does gay things.

College soph Terry has had very little sex experience with girls, and the intercourse he had was nothing much to write home about. Small dick, premature ejaculator, all the cliches. He has mad crush on shy Asian girlfriend Mandy who is saving herself for marriage. They 69 a lot, but she's from a conservative family and is NOT giving it up until Terry puts a ring on it. Terry is too much of a gentleman to push Mandy past her comfort zone.

He tried out for the school wrestling team but didn't make it. He has a good passing relationship, however, with Jack, the 40-year old coach. Jack's a stud who has no idea what a lady's comfort zone is unless it's her G-spot. He attends an off-campus party also attended by Terry and Mandy. Jack shoots, he scores, Mandy's toes curl. Terry is humiliated and forlorn. Rinse, repeat for 3 or 4 weeks.

Coach rails Mandy several times a week with Terry sitting passively in the corner. Making him watch inflames both their libidos. Jack loves making Terry jealous. Of course Jack and Mandy soon assign Terry clean-up duty, then the job of Head Fluffer. So far, so unoriginal. This is no more than first 25% of story.

Coach has Terry come to his apartment, doms him, and then does it again every few days. Jack is seeing much less of Mandy now, has Terry over almost every day. Terry is introduced to cross dressing and worships Coach sexually. His hand jobs in the corner nowadays are less frequent and feature him jealous of Mandy, not Jack.

Coach finally gets Terry into lipstick and wigs - then arranges for Mandy to walk in on them in Jack's apartment. Mandy fingers herself while watching Terry inhaling cock, snaps a few pics, and spreads them around among her friends. Terry's reputation is shot.

Coach dumps Mandy - he only ever put up with her as a way to get Terry. Coach begins sharing Teddy with some other dudes, including the wrestling team. Eventually pimps him out. Then walks away, looking for his next cute couple to destroy.

Donald

 

[Nezhul]

2 elements that make LitMen insanely angry - the wimp cuckold who does gay things.

IMO it only makes wimps or latent gay men angry. Everyone else simply won't care or like it, one of the two.