story help

[grumpybear0810]

I am in need of a sounding board. I am currently working on a multi part bdsm story but am having issues figuring out in which chapters to put what. I believe I have the first chapter finished and have multiple other parts written but am not 100% sure where to put others. I need some one who has an opinion and that doesn't mind actually giving advice. Please feel free to message me (I think I turned on my pm's let me know if it won't work). This is my first story and I am trying despreatly to make it flow correctly.
Thanks in advance
Grumpbear

 

[lovecraft68]

I am in need of a sounding board. I am currently working on a multi part bdsm story but am having issues figuring out in which chapters to put what. I believe I have the first chapter finished and have multiple other parts written but am not 100% sure where to put others. I need some one who has an opinion and that doesn't mind actually giving advice. Please feel free to message me (I think I turned on my pm's let me know if it won't work). This is my first story and I am trying despreatly to make it flow correctly.
Thanks in advance
Grumpbear

I can take a look if you would like.